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Peace River Coal | Careers - 0 views

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  Too many spaces between words.
  
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opportunities.
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  Repetition: Through the use of the word 'opportunities' multiple times on this page, it encourages the reader (and potential employee) that workign for this company is, in fact, an opportunity, and something that should be acted upon.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Repetition: Through the use of the word 'opportunities' multiple times on this page, it encourages the reader (and potential employee) that workign for this company is, in fact, an opportunity, and something that should be acted upon.</div>
  
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Peace River Coal | Peace River Coal Home Page - 0 views

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Peace River Coal Inc., a producer of high-quality metallurgical coal for export, from Canada is jointly owned by Anglo American plc, Hillsborough Resources Ltd., and NEMI Northern Energy and Mining Inc. Anglo American holds a 74% interest in Peace River Coal. Peace River Coal owns substantial coal properties in the Peace River region of northeast British Columbia.
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  This paragraph seems a bit jumbled. Because it's the first text people read, it may be more beneficial to state something more general and audience-friendly. What is written here seems a bit technical to jump into right off the start. Or, instead of having it all in one paragraph, it could be split into bullet points for easier reading.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">This paragraph seems a bit jumbled. Because it's the first text people read, it may be more beneficial to state something more general and audience-friendly. What is written here seems a bit technical to jump into right off the start. Or, instead of having it all in one paragraph, it could be split into bullet points for easier reading.</div>
  
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 local and other partners
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  'Local and others' seems very vague. Something like 'With the help of our local and global partners,' may be more straightforward. It almost seems like using 'others' could be misinterpreted for the reader to think that the company is hiding something about their partners.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">'Local and others' seems very vague. Something like 'With the help of our local and global partners,' may be more straightforward. It almost seems like using 'others' could be misinterpreted for the reader to think that the company is hiding something about their partners.</div>
  
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Click here to view our photo gallery.
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  Good lead-in to the photo gallery; straightforward and simple.
  
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Privacy Policy | Terms & Conditions
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  Good use of the bottom of the page to give links to other parts of the site. Helps make the page look 'complete'.
  
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My Rhetorical Analysis Markup (Peace River Coal website)

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Tammy's Rhetorical Analysis Markup (Peace River Coal website)

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Generation Y: They've arrived at work with a new attitude | www.usatoday.com | Readability - 0 views

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What do you think of this description of a subculture in our society?

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SONY make.believe - 2 views

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  Division and classification exemplified buy organized menus and side nav bars
  
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It’s a sight you see more and more often in a place you might not expect, e-readers mingling with paperbacks in libraries across the United States
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  Imagery, Appeals to Pathos. Hyperbole.
  
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don’t know about you but I get hungry each time I see an amazing food photo. Taking gourmet shots is growing across the globe and n
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Every now and then, the SGNL team gets a rare opportunity to peek into the behind-the-scenes world of Sony
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The eye catching VAIO Concept PCs (pictured above) previewed at the the Consumer Electronics Show in January this year were officially announced today
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Tax Consultants Canada | Associate Tax Consulting on Canadian Taxes | Income Tax Prepar... - 0 views

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Our tax professionals receive ongoing training on all the tax laws so we know where to look to get you the maximum refund you're entitled to.*
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  This is guaranteed! I feel much more confident knowing they have a written guarantee for there work
  
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Noreena Hertz: How to use experts -- and when not to | Video on TED.com - 0 views

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Elev8ed - 0 views

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CIM - 1 views

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CIM and eOne partner to serve the rest of Canada!    |    CIM is One of Canada’s Best Workplaces    |    CIM wins 50 Best Managed Companies for 10th Consecu
- sarah omens on 03 Mar 11
  
  as you can see there is lots of movement and also lots of information. i like the way its moving slowly giving you enough time to read the information and at the same time not making it seem boring,.
  
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WHO WE ARE LAST 3 FEET™ OUR HISTORY OUR CULTURE AWARDS WHAT WE DO SALES &MERCH EDUCATION BLITZ LAUNCH! CIMPHARMA THE TEAM EXECUTIVE OUR TEAM OUR CLIENTS NEWS CONTACT
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WHO WE ARE LAST 3 FEET™ OUR HISTORY OUR CULTURE AWARDS WHAT WE DO SALES & MERCH EDUCATION BLITZ LAUNCH! CIMPHARMA THE TEAM EXECUTIVE OUR TEAM OUR CLIENTS NEWS CONTACT
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Do you have whatwe arelooking for? > GREAT CAREERS HERE Lea dership at CIM Talking Shop: CIM partners Mike Smith, Shaun M cKenna and Wilf Goodman about retail today. > MEET THE REST OF THE TEAM
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Environmental Speaker Series: Jim Hoggan - 1 views

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Arab Democracy Reference and Live Feeds - Home / Map - 0 views

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Arab Democracy site helps provide information on protests in the Middle East.

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Skillful writing of an awful research paper - Analytical Chemistry (ACS Publications) - 3 views

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My advice is solely based on principles of presenting the objectives, experiments, results, and conclusion in a fashion that as such no one will finish reading them or, if they do, readers will have little chance of understanding or remembering them.
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practice and a lack of mental concentration
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  The colour choice represents solid foundation and conservative values.
  
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  The logo and tag represent serious marketing.
  
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  The site seems to be written in frames, which is not the best format for today's Web standards.
  
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Royce Murray University of North Carolina - Chapel Hill, ChemistryAnal. Chem., 2011, 83 (3), p 633DOI: 10.1021/ac2000169Publication Date (Web): January 12, 2011Copyright © 2011 American Chemical Society
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  Prominence of the bibliography of the article provides useful information that is readily retrievable.
  
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Rule 1.
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  It might have been better to have used some sort of highlighting device to make the rules stand out better. Also, punctuating what are not sentences is not really standard form.
  
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"Which," by James Thurber - Classic American Essays - Humor and Grammar - Lighter Side ... - 1 views

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The essay by James Thurber, Which

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YouTube - "All Marketers are Liars" - Seth Godin speaks at Google - 0 views

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This is an excellent discussion of marketing strategy.

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YouTube - An Introduction to Google Talk - 0 views

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This is a tutorial on Google Talk.

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YouTube - How to Download, Install and Use Google Talk on your PC. - 0 views

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Here is a free Google phone application.

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The Art of Non-Conformity - 1 views

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For the non-conformists among you...

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The Most Awesome 450 page (sort of) Presentation - 0 views

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Here is the actual presentation in Google Docs.

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YouTube - Google Demo Slam: Epic Docs Animation - 0 views

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How to create a great Prezi by Adam Somlai-Fischer on Prezi - 0 views

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YouTube - Broadcast Yourself. - 3 views

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Videos on rhetorical analysis of different sorts

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Peace River Coal | Careers - 0 views

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Generation Y: They've arrived at work with a new attitude | www.usatoday.com | Readability - 0 views

SONY make.believe - 2 views

Tax Consultants Canada | Associate Tax Consulting on Canadian Taxes | Income Tax Prepar... - 0 views

Noreena Hertz: How to use experts -- and when not to | Video on TED.com - 0 views

Elev8ed - 0 views

CIM - 1 views

Environmental Speaker Series: Jim Hoggan - 1 views

Arab Democracy Reference and Live Feeds - Home / Map - 0 views

Skillful writing of an awful research paper - Analytical Chemistry (ACS Publications) - 3 views

"Which," by James Thurber - Classic American Essays - Humor and Grammar - Lighter Side ... - 1 views

YouTube - "All Marketers are Liars" - Seth Godin speaks at Google - 0 views

YouTube - An Introduction to Google Talk - 0 views

YouTube - How to Download, Install and Use Google Talk on your PC. - 0 views

The Art of Non-Conformity - 1 views

The Most Awesome 450 page (sort of) Presentation - 0 views

YouTube - Google Demo Slam: Epic Docs Animation - 0 views

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YouTube - Broadcast Yourself. - 3 views

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