Peer Review Project One Thread - 148 views
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Public Writing Assignment #1 - 80 views
Update: I just posted my comment onto YouTube now that it let me sign up. I did have to shorten what I originally wrote because of the character limit. Here is the link again: http://www.youtube.c...
Discussion: Your rhetorical life - 53 views
I think the past couple of months have been the most rhetorical months of my entire life, if you will. With the presidential elections in full swing I found myself right in the middle of the action...
First draft of Torture paper - 55 views
here's my rough draft. http://docs.google.com/a/mail.usf.edu/Doc?id=dm9r52k_1fttt9t3w (p.s.- i know i'm a source short, but since I was already late as it is since I was in Illinois all weekend f...
Draft - 29 views
Here is my publicly viewable draft link : http://docs.google.com/a/mail.usf.edu/Doc?id=djfhjrm_0crdfxqd3
Project 2 - Research Plan/Abstract - 24 views
Please post your research plan and abstract in ONE post below.
More like these? - 21 views
Thanks, Ashlee. I am glad you enjoyed it. And yes, we will have other assignments along these lines. Ashlee Duckworth wrote: > I know you have a requirement that you have to go by but I just want...
First Draft - 23 views
Here is the link to view my first draft: http://docs.google.com/a/mail.usf.edu/Doc?id=dfnk558c_0fnxjq8fz
Project one 1st Draft - 19 views
http://docs.google.com/a/mail.usf.edu/Doc?id=dcwb2b9x_0dr2753hj
Here is my first essay draft - 18 views
http://docs.google.com/a/mail.usf.edu/Doc?id=dwgptmz_0d9hqmzc8
First Draft - 16 views
http://docs.google.com/a/mail.usf.edu/Doc?id=dhzcwzb_0fcjrrcgr
my first essay draft - 13 views
https://docs.google.com/a/mail.usf.edu/Doc?docid=dhggtsg7_0d45z68d8&hl=en
Draft one - 6 views
I erased the other one, because it was the wrong draft. The correct link is below http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dcwb2b9x_84tn3xggq
Natassia Watson - 0 views
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Meghan Winn on 04 Nov 08tried*
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further they called their oppnents past actions into question.
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opponents* also, sentence structure is kind of confusing
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Even though McCain used more logos in his speech, he blundered in advocating the establishment of MFI, which would be another governmental agency even though he says that “We don't need a dozen federal agencies doing the job badly”.
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this sentence is confusing
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Shekenah WhitneyProject2 - 0 views
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While both Obama and McCain use ethos, pathos, and logos in their speeches and/or media presentations one candidate uses them more effectively than the other.
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good opening paragraph!
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i think 'and/or' just needs to be 'and
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opens his speech with a personal anecdote about how war affected
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change of tense between 'opens' and 'affected'
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goes on the say,
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i think you mean 'goes on to say'
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With the Presidential electio... - 0 views
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Title?
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Through their methods of doing this
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Sounds weird for some reason, maybe you could put .... through various methods
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we can
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No Point of View!
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Oral rhetoric vs. Written rhe... - 0 views
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disagree with
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Maybe try using the word "oppose" here.
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Some resources that support these claims are “Images in Words: Presidential Rhetoric, Charisma, and Greatness” by Cynthia G. Emrich, Holly H. Brower, Jack M. Feldman and Howard Garland, “Survival of the Fittest: Rhetoric during the Course of an Election Campaign” by Jennifer Jerit, “Visual Rhetoric in Advertising: Text-Interpretive, Experimental, and Reader-Response Analyses” by Edward F. McQuarrie and David Glen Mick, “Support of Content and Rhetorical Processes of Writing: Effects on the Writing Process and the Written Product” by Kirsten R. Butcher and Walter Kintsch and, “The Rhetoric Institute: Notes and Comments” by Patricia Sullivan.
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I don't think it's necessary to list your sources here.
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When you are using these sources throughout your paper, you should state the person's creditablity. If not, what you are trying to back up won't be as effective.
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these kinds of tactics are successful because “appeals that are high in emotional content will survive longer than other types of arguments.”
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This is a good example of backing your claims with factual information.
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Winn Project 2 - 0 views
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He goes on to share his ideas about how this situation can be resolved through the redeployment of our military, working with the Iraqi government and the support of Iraq’s refugees.
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Why not state what some of those ideas were.
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In my opinion John McCain is more comfortable with his oral/ visual rhetoric than with written
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Back this up with why you think that.
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Amanda Flores - 0 views
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responsible
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Replace with responsibility.
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For the candidate who wins
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Maybe replace with, "the elected candidate"
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holds the office of head of state
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holds the office as head of state...
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Project 2 rough draft - 0 views
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Works Cited
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Good job with the Works Cited and annotated bibliography.
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My floating sticky notes aren't working again, so here is my conventions critique: Conventions- The only thing I noticed was a small amount of spelling errors and that the in text MLA citations are missing. Otherwise, good job. Especially on the works cited and annotated bibliography.
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Make sure if you use MLA works cited, that you use MLA paper sourcing as well. And usually you need an extra space between sources in MLA works cited, it also makes it a lot easier to read the sources.
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different
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You've used the work "different' four times in two sentences. You could substitute this word with another word to make it more interesting.
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He also,
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A comma is not needed there.
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