Maybe use a comma here.

...issues, and come together...

Maybe reword this. Something like, "to express their opinions."

Replace with responsibility.

Maybe replace with, "the elected candidate"

holds the office as head of state...

Maybe try using the word "oppose" here.

I don't think it's necessary to list your sources here.

This is a good example of backing your claims with factual information.

I like how the author even looks into the sources provided by the individual filing the complaint. This shows that he has truly looked over the claims and is taking the issue seriously.

The usage of specific examples to show that not all children's stories have happy endings is very effective.

This statement shows that while some may find certain things inappropriate, the same things may be hepful to others. And in this case, a similar book proved to be a helpful tool for a different mother.

century, human

Maybe use "others" here, instead of people?

Aristotle is, "credible...

I could be completely misinterpreting this, but I think that it would be the content of what is being discussed that causes the confusion, not rhetoric. I understand that there are many forms of rhetoric, but don't they all have the same purpose? In some way or another, rhetoric persuades and informs. Again, I could be looking at this the wrong way. I'm interested in seeing other thoughts on this topic.

Here's another video clip displaying a form of rhetoric. This time, the video appeals to the pathos form. Even though the clip has no spoken audio, the message is very clear. The creator of the video decided to use an approach that makes the viewer feel a sense of guilt. The somber sounding string ensemble playing over footage of chickens, cows, and pigs is enough to make anybody think twice before biting into their next cheeseburger. This form of rhetoric may be he most effective of the three varieties, because of its ability to make a deep-rooted connection with the viewer through their emotions.

This video clip is an advertisement for a vacuum packaging product called the Food Saver. The video provides a good example of the logos form of rhetoric. The woman in the video provides multiple reasons for why the viewer should purchase the Food Saver. She explains that the product can prolong the life of foods, reseal opened food bags, be used to store eating utensils, and most importantly, save the buyer money. Even though the viewer has most likely never seen the woman in the advertisement, they are captured by her claims and the evidence that supports it.

This video is a clip from the band Coheed & Cambria's live DVD entitled The Last Supper. I believe the video clip serves as a good example of ethos. In the video, you can clearly see that the band has the full attention crowd, and they appear to approve of the band's performance. Because Coheed & Cambria was the headlining act at this show, it's likely that the majority of the crowd was there specifically to see Coheed & Cambria. Had there been another band on stage, it's possible the reaction from the crowd may have been entirely different.

The authors at Google do a great job of grabbing the reader's attention by speaking of the technological advances that would result from the global accessibility of "white spaces." The promise of technological progression is appealing for good reason. Advancements in modern technology are taking place at a mind-blowing rate, and people are excited to see what the future has to offer. Google makes an attempt to form a relationship with the reader by suggesting that they are teaming up with multiple companies to benefit not only themselves, but "society in general." This gives the reader the impression that Google shares the same views and supports similar causes. Google really gets people excited when they mentioning the words "lower" and "bills" in the same sentence. The thought of saving money really grabs people's attention, which is probably why this information was presented at the end of the article. The art of grabbing onto the reader and leaving them with a good impression was well executed in this article.

As I looked through the list of words on this page, it occurred to me that nothing really stood out as an actual strength of mine. I mean, I guess I do a good job of listening, talking, laughing, and even complaining, but how can you be good at something everyone else can do? It was the word "composing" that really caught my attention. For as long as I can remember, I have always enjoyed listening to music. I'm not sure why, but there is an indescribable feeling that comes over me when I hear a song I really enjoy. I guess it's something of a natural high for me. But as great as it is to listen to one of your favorite songs, it can't quite compare to playing one of your own tunes under the heat of stage lighting, in front of a crowd of cheering fans. Before moving to Tampa for college, I played the guitar for a band called South Atlantic. We never really experienced any major success, but we did play shows across the state of Florida. Now, nearly two years after our departure, I still have the desire to continue where the band left off. Unfortunately, composing a hit song has proved to be one of the greatest challenges of my life. I guess there is a reason why it's so difficult to get recognized by major record labels. I don't think that the art of creating a musical masterpiece can be taught. I believe it's one of those talents you either have, or you don't. So I guess what I'm really trying to say is, if I could choose one word from the list to help describe something I wish I were good at, it would definitely be composing.