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Ryan Meehan

Discussion: Your rhetorical life - 53 views

started by Ryan Meehan on 17 Nov 08 no follow-up yet
  • Brian Russo
     
    Before taking this class I still used rhetoric on a daily basis, I just may not have known it. Now I am somewhat more conscious when I'm using rhetoric, but I haven't necessarily changed. One example of using rhetoric is when talking politics with people. You want to convince them that you're right about your candidate being the best man for the job. I also used rhetoric just recently when I convinced my boss to let me have a week off at the end of December to go to New York. Even though we aren't supposed to be allowed any vacation time during the months of November or December I used pathos and ethos to convince him to let me go and he approved.
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Cybil Scott - 0 views

shared by Brian Russo on 07 Nov 08 - No Cached
  • If a person speaking appears uncomfortable or unsure about what they are saying, the audience will perceive their ethos and credentials as untrustworthy, and persuasion will not work.
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      good point
  • slow steady controlled speech
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      commas
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      good examples of ethos logos and pathos
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  •     I believe
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      no first person
  • I found
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      no first person
  • It gives him more credit over his competition with Barack Obama
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      reword
  • us feel
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      us to feel
Brian Russo

http://docs.google.com/a/mail.usf.edu/View?docid=dm9r52k_1fttt9t3w - 0 views

shared by Brian Russo on 16 Oct 08 - No Cached
  • Although it has been used for many years by many different people, torture has been the center of many facets in society.  Many scholars have written countless articles about the subject, and it is the center of many horror films made today.  However, when the conversation turns to torture in times of war, the subject matter can become the center of a highly rigorous debate.  This is an issue that is of great significance for society today and is something that should be brought to everyone’s attention for several moral and ethical reasons.  Torture is discussed in a variety of different forms, from fiction to research, and should be examined for its authenticity.
    • Brian Russo
       
      very good intro
  • “In some circumstances, though, our only real choice, in terms of both national security and moral consequences, will be between controlled and uncontrolled torture. We gain nothing by pretending differently. In the struggle against deadly terrorism, some of world's most civilized democracies are themselves unwilling to shrink from doing what they think is necessary. Such are the times in which we live. (Slater)”
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      same size as rest of paper
  • “In some circumstances, though, our only real choice, in terms of both national security and moral consequences, will be between controlled and uncontrolled torture. We gain nothing by pretending differently. In the struggle against deadly terrorism, some of world's most civilized democracies are themselves unwilling to shrink from doing what they think is necessary. Such are the times in which we live. (Slater)”
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      same size as rest of paper
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    • Brian Russo
       
      Great paper. Good content and vocabulary. paper uses strong transitional phrases and has good organization. Good job researching authors credentials and citing sources. The only thing the paper needs is a good strong conclusion to wrap everything up. Paper ends with analysis of an article and not a conclusion. Other than that, awesome paper.
Brian Russo

Cybil Scott - 0 views

shared by Brian Russo on 16 Oct 08 - No Cached
  • An author
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      name of author
  • To begin
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      stronger transition
  • the given four authors that were read first each had a different perspective on the subject of torture, but were from very different sources
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      wordy
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  • The only case where this could be debated is if the author were a victim of torture or they did it themselves, in which case would place them on a personal level with the topic.
    • Brian Russo
       
      good point
  • Which is basically what we do today when we hear about torture in the middle east
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      fragment
  • I will discuss
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  • Onto my next set of sources
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    • Brian Russo
       
      paper is good, just try to get out of using 1st person so often, if at all
  • in my opinion
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  • like me
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  • A great example of logos is employed in another authors stance on torture. The logical approach is as follows,“A Since   (1)just combat-killing is total destruction of a person,                 (2)torture is- usually-only partial destruction or temporary incapacitation of a person, and                 (3)the total destruction of a person is a greater harm than the personal destruction of a person is, thenB since      (4)just combat-killing is a greater harm than torture usually is;                 (5)just-combat killing is sometimes morally permissible                 (6)torture is sometimes morally permissible” (Shue 125).
    • Brian Russo
       
      structure
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      Overall, paper has good content and organization. All the references were used correctly and good points were made. The only things to work on are getting the paper out of 1st person, and using stronger transitions.
Brian Russo

First draft of Torture paper - 55 views

started by Brian Russo on 11 Oct 08 no follow-up yet
Ryan Meehan

Public Writing Assignment #1 - 80 views

pwa1
started by Ryan Meehan on 29 Sep 08 no follow-up yet
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