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- Amanda Flores on 12 Sep 08
  
  This Gatorade website is an example of ethos because it gives back up to support the product. This site gives its readers the satisfation that if Tiger Woods, a well known athlete, drinks this drink, it has to be good.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">This Gatorade website is an example of ethos because it gives back up to support the product. This site gives its readers the satisfation that if Tiger Woods, a well known athlete, drinks this drink, it has to be good. </div>
  
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- Amanda Flores on 12 Sep 08
  
  This Tylenol wedsite is an example of logos because it gives information and details about all it's different products. When searching for the different products it gives all the facts and information on that certain product itself.
  
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- Amanda Flores on 12 Sep 08
  
  This World Vision Child Sponsorship commercial is an example of pathos beacuse the commercial relies on your emotions to contribute. When watching the children play and speaks its hard to turn down and not contribute.
  
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responsible
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Replace with responsibility.
  
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For the candidate who wins
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Maybe replace with, "the elected candidate"
  
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holds the office of head of state
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  holds the office as head of state...
  
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He was the son of divorced parents. He lived with his mother in the beginning of his life, and then moved in with his grandparents for the rest.
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Maybe you should combine the two sentences and reword the very end. Perhaps provide the information for why he moved in with his grandparents.
  
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So you can pick the best candidate for the job, you must compare each one.
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Reword this sentence. Maybe something like, " In order to slelect the best candidate for the job, it's important to compare them to one another."
  
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I am going to look at a speech and essay from both John McCain and Barack Obama.
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  It's not necessary to tell the reader what you are going to do in this manner.
  
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Both McCain and Obama did a speech
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Word choice could be better here.
  
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The rhetoric used here was ethos.
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Explain how this was used.
  
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talks
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Tenses are conflicting here.
  
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tells the people why what he plans to do is better.
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  This would be a good spot to use specific examples.
  
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He wrote this is show that
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
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He uses actually numbers.
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Maybe replace this sentence with a quote from the article.
  
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he does use a lot of logic.
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Again, provide examples.
  
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By comparing all the speeches and essays rhetorically of both McCain and Obama, you could decide on a winner.
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Reword this sentence and exclude the word "you".
  
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I have only compared one of each on the candidates.
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Try not to incorporate your own opinions in the essay.
  
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you must examine and analyze the rhetorical strategies used by each candidate.
- Garrett Granger on 06 Nov 08
  
  Again, reword and try to drop the word "you".
  
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(Dictionary.com)
- Alex Gutierrez on 07 Nov 08
  
  I would maybe reword this sentance if you can. The words are kind of awkward.
  
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He is the one who has to make all decisions for the American people.
- Alex Gutierrez on 07 Nov 08
  
  Think about elaborating alittle more in the opening paragraph. Maybe try with a clear thesis statement.
  
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s may
- Alex Gutierrez on 07 Nov 08
  
  try using "are" here.
  
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directly or indirectly
- Alex Gutierrez on 07 Nov 08
  
  Give examples of each one here.
  
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about how he knows how hard the war is on everyone, but knows we need to finish it and not back out so we don’t hurt us in the end.
- Alex Gutierrez on 07 Nov 08
  
  Kinf of awkward reading here. Maybe try to reword this sentance.
  
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uch a personal feel to it. He was looking at the crowd the whole time,
- Alex Gutierrez on 07 Nov 08
  
  very good evidence. Shows his passion.
  
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tates many facts
- Alex Gutierrez on 07 Nov 08
  
  maybe give a few of the facts here to back up statement.
  
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Since he has fought in a war
- Alex Gutierrez on 07 Nov 08
  
  good stuff here.
  
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So by figuring out which politician makes the most convincing statements,
- Alex Gutierrez on 07 Nov 08
  
  Which ways to we go about making this decision? Maybe elaborate a little more, and close the essay out a little stronger with examples. Other than that. Good Paper
  
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