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Peace River Coal | Management - 1 views

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Peace River Coal | Business Principles - 0 views

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Being a good corporate citizen is, by definition, a good employer. We support fair labour practices and promote workplace safety and equality in our operations. We acknowledge the importance of conscientious environmental stewardship and actively seek to minimize the impact of our operations while providing a positive legacy for future generations. 
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  Definition: Here, what it means to be a 'good corporate citizen' is shown by following up with an explanatory paragraph.
  
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At Peace River Coal, Good Citizenship business principles guide our decisions and actions. We adhere to consistently high standards of business integrity and ethics.
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  Use of style, tone and voice: This, as well as other lines of text on the website, show overtones of pride and confidence. This, in turn, instills these feelings in the reader. (IE: If the company is confident in their abilities, the reader should be, too!)
  
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Peace River Coal | Peace River Coal Safety - 1 views

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At Peace River Coal Safety is Paramount
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  Could be made more readable, such as: At Peace River Coal, Safety Is Paramount.' By putting a comma in, and ending with a period, it might make a bolder, more thought-out looking statement.
  
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zero harm policy
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  If this is the name of an actual policy, it could be capitalized to emphasize it's importance.
  
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same, non-negotiable rules
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  Should not be a comma after 'same', as it isn't really a listable descriptive term as used here.
  
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Ensure that all of our operations have fundamentally safe, well designed plant, equipment and infrastructure
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  The grammar here isn't quite correct. It's difficult to read 'All of our operations have... well designed plant,..'
  
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Compliance with legislative and other requirements placed upon us, including those to which we voluntarily subscribe, is fundamental to the way we do business. 
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Rescue team
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  'Rescue Team' should possibly all be capitalized, or be all lower-case, unless the team is just called 'Rescue'.
  
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On September 18, 2009 Peace River Coal celebrated achieving the milestone of One-year Lost Time Injury Free operation.
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  Again, could be re-worded, to something such as "...Peace River Coal operation celebrated the achievement of One-year Lost Time Injury Free." Or, "..celebrated achieving the 'One-Year Lost Time Injury Free' milestone.
  
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successful recipients of the "Best and Overall First Aid Award" at the Regional Mines Rescue Competition - July 2009
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  Ethos: Exemplifying this proud moment causes the reader to see more respectability in the company. This is not exactly using the company's pre-existing reputation to make a point believable, but it is making a believable point about how the company should be respected by using examples that appeal to the reader's view of the company overall.
  
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We recognize that our strength as a company resides in the men and women who contribute to our business.
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  Logos: The logical statement here implies that happy, healthy workers contribute more strength to the company itself than unhappy, injured ones, so this statement clearly states that it's in the best interests of the company to keep everyone safe. This is something that the reader can take and agree with at face value because it's an honest, logical statement.
  
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Peace River Coal | Coal Mining and Tumbler Ridge Links - 0 views

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Peace River Coal | Careers - 0 views

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to  succeed
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opportunities.
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  Repetition: Through the use of the word 'opportunities' multiple times on this page, it encourages the reader (and potential employee) that workign for this company is, in fact, an opportunity, and something that should be acted upon.
  
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Peace River Coal | Peace River Coal Home Page - 0 views

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Peace River Coal Inc., a producer of high-quality metallurgical coal for export, from Canada is jointly owned by Anglo American plc, Hillsborough Resources Ltd., and NEMI Northern Energy and Mining Inc. Anglo American holds a 74% interest in Peace River Coal. Peace River Coal owns substantial coal properties in the Peace River region of northeast British Columbia.
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  This paragraph seems a bit jumbled. Because it's the first text people read, it may be more beneficial to state something more general and audience-friendly. What is written here seems a bit technical to jump into right off the start. Or, instead of having it all in one paragraph, it could be split into bullet points for easier reading.
  
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 local and other partners
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  'Local and others' seems very vague. Something like 'With the help of our local and global partners,' may be more straightforward. It almost seems like using 'others' could be misinterpreted for the reader to think that the company is hiding something about their partners.
  
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Click here to view our photo gallery.
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Privacy Policy | Terms & Conditions
- trehbein on 07 Mar 11
  
  Good use of the bottom of the page to give links to other parts of the site. Helps make the page look 'complete'.
  
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Generation Y: They've arrived at work with a new attitude | www.usatoday.com | Readability - 0 views

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It’s a sight you see more and more often in a place you might not expect, e-readers mingling with paperbacks in libraries across the United States
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  Imagery, Appeals to Pathos. Hyperbole.
  
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don’t know about you but I get hungry each time I see an amazing food photo. Taking gourmet shots is growing across the globe and n
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Every now and then, the SGNL team gets a rare opportunity to peek into the behind-the-scenes world of Sony
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The eye catching VAIO Concept PCs (pictured above) previewed at the the Consumer Electronics Show in January this year were officially announced today
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Noreena Hertz: How to use experts -- and when not to | Video on TED.com - 0 views

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CIM - 1 views

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CIM and eOne partner to serve the rest of Canada!    |    CIM is One of Canada’s Best Workplaces    |    CIM wins 50 Best Managed Companies for 10th Consecu
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  as you can see there is lots of movement and also lots of information. i like the way its moving slowly giving you enough time to read the information and at the same time not making it seem boring,.
  
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WHO WE ARE LAST 3 FEET™ OUR HISTORY OUR CULTURE AWARDS WHAT WE DO SALES &MERCH EDUCATION BLITZ LAUNCH! CIMPHARMA THE TEAM EXECUTIVE OUR TEAM OUR CLIENTS NEWS CONTACT
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WHO WE ARE LAST 3 FEET™ OUR HISTORY OUR CULTURE AWARDS WHAT WE DO SALES & MERCH EDUCATION BLITZ LAUNCH! CIMPHARMA THE TEAM EXECUTIVE OUR TEAM OUR CLIENTS NEWS CONTACT
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Do you have whatwe arelooking for? > GREAT CAREERS HERE Lea dership at CIM Talking Shop: CIM partners Mike Smith, Shaun M cKenna and Wilf Goodman about retail today. > MEET THE REST OF THE TEAM
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Environmental Speaker Series: Jim Hoggan - 1 views

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My advice is solely based on principles of presenting the objectives, experiments, results, and conclusion in a fashion that as such no one will finish reading them or, if they do, readers will have little chance of understanding or remembering them.
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practice and a lack of mental concentration
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Royce Murray University of North Carolina - Chapel Hill, ChemistryAnal. Chem., 2011, 83 (3), p 633DOI: 10.1021/ac2000169Publication Date (Web): January 12, 2011Copyright © 2011 American Chemical Society
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Rule 1.
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  It might have been better to have used some sort of highlighting device to make the rules stand out better. Also, punctuating what are not sentences is not really standard form.
  
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