Group 3 Treatise Paper - 35 views
Group three, Here is my evaluation for your group's treastie paper, good job. Team Evaluated Team 3 Rubrics Powerful argument that was well articulated and organized. Powerful argument that was s...
Group three, Here is my evaluation for your group's treastie paper, good job. Team Evaluated Team 3 Rubrics Powerful argument that was well articulated and organized. Powerful argument that was s...
Tonya, Thanks for your evaluations! You indicated: "I liked how they included an appendix at the end and thought that it added to the paper. " Could be be more specific on the addenpix? Thanks!...
Group 4 Evaluation: 4 Group Members: Tracy Botts, Renee Marshall Group 4 provided a strong argument for online learning. They very effectively tied information together and gave a good overview of...
Group 3 Evaluation: 5 Group Members: Melissa Carroll, Marta Herrera, Nasreen Wahid Group 3 provided us with a very engaging introduction that set the tone for the paper. There is al a very strong ...
Group 2 Evaluation: 4 Group Members: MJ Hall, Jeanette Layton, Beth Summerhill Group 2 tied together the three sections of the paper together in a seamless manner. They thoroughly defined online l...
Group 1 Evaluation: 4.5 Group Members: Marilyn Robinson, Scott Pfister, Suzanne Sallee Group 1's introduction provided a basis for the entire paper and guided the reader through what they should e...
It appears that we are only allowed a certain number of forum posts and some groups papers are no longer available, so I will put all of my evaluations in one post. Group 3 Our group was able to ...
Group 3, I thought you did a great job on your paper. I like the way you broke up each section and gave a summary of each. It was thorough and very detailed. I believe that it followed APA forma...
Chih-Hsiung Tu wrote: > Scott, > > Could you be more specific why this paper is well organized? > > Chih The section headings were concise and well-supported in the content of the paper. The c...
I give this paper a 5. I feel this treatise paper was well organized, well written and the argument was well articulated. The group cited research beyond the textbook and did a good job of explaini...
Scott, Excellent justifications! I encourage to put more thoughts to Vygotsky's theory since his socio-cultural leaning theory aligns to new web 2.0 learning environment well. Chih
Nice job evaluating and overcoming the challenges of online learning as faced by both the students and instructors. You also seemed to concentrate your research on the collegiate setting. This al...
The "hook" discussed in education is always important to capture your audience and I think the illustration and explanation in the beginning of this paper were great. Painting pictures for your au...
The "hook" discussed in education is always important to capture your audience and I think the illustration and explanation in the beginning of this paper were great. Painting pictures for your au...
Again, I have noticed papers that have a nice, smooth word flow. This is great to allow the reader to feel as if the writers are knowledgeable of the content. This paper did provide useful, infor...
Hello Group 1, 5 (FIVEEEEE!!!!) From the beginning of the paper, I was immediately informed of the topics,arguments,etc. From reading the introduction alone, I knew that this paper would flow qui...
This paper get a score of 5. Was clear and well thought out, ideas went smoothly from one to the next, and good resources to support the argument.
This paper gets a score of 5. Good argument that is well organized. It gives a good definition of online learning as well as evidence in learning theory and how individuals learn. It gives good sup...
Group 2 has created an effective treaties paper. I appreciate that they provided an abstract. They made excellent use of resources and incorporated them into their arguments very well. They follo...