Your conclusion underscores the somewhat compelling argument you made for the role of the instructor in the body of the treatise which was failrly well organized. I would have like to have seen more research quoted about instructors to support your argument. Nice job 4.8

I felt a real sense of powerful advocacy for the learner in this tretaise. However the organization and grammar were distractions for me. I can see you put a lot of thought into it. I was also very surprised to see myself quoted. Thank you. Your group the only one to use class input. 4.8

In evaluating my own group's work I have to say that the paper came out very organized and unified, if a bit long. We intended to make a case for the important connectiion between pedagogy and the
evolution of the tools we have to use for online learning. Think we made our case so I would give us a 5. One of the strengths was our references.