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Khalid Alomar

Willis eTech Web Sites | Web Site SEO | Social Media | Photography | Video - 1 views

    • Khalid Alomar
       
      Their logo is good, simple, and uses only two colors which is a good example of logo practice. However, the way it presents this logo in the website made it as a new logo because of the big line behind it and the clip-arts a long with it. 
  • Rate this item 1 2 3 4 5 (0 votes)
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      there is no point of having rate this item in the home page of the website that presenting the company objectives. 
  • "Your Partner in Promotion"
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      Liked their slogan. 
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  • Social Media Twitter Sign UpFaceBook Sign UpYou Tube Sign UpLinkedIn Sign UpTwellow Sign UpDownload TweetdeckMashableSocial Media ExaminerSendible Tweet Scheduler
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      A bad way of presenting the social website with the "Sign Up" along with it! and why they referee to these social website if they well known website?
  • Let's Talk About... content management facebook Internet Marketing Media social social media social media circle social media training tool kit Training training Tweetdeck tweetdeck Tweetdeck Training twellow twitter web design web sites youtube
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      A good way of using the trends that's shows the most using words in Willis eTech website pages.
  • Main Menu HOMECONTACT USLATEST NEWSSite MapPrivacy Statement
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      should be up in the page not in the middle. 
  • Read 7505 times | Like this? Tweet it to your followers! Social sharing Add to Google Buzz Add to Facebook Add to Delicious Digg this Add to Reddit Add to StumbleUpon Add to MySpace Add to Technorati
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      uses the social networks tools is indeed a good way of communicating and distributing their website. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      use social networks icons and pictures is more effective than text and it gets the attention of the person faster than usual. Willis eTech website did a good job on it here. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      The feedback button one of the good practice to do in website that want to interactive with the visitors. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      the quality of the image is not that good which needs some improvements. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      The usability buttons presented here in well shape. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      The website has used this picture (the handshake) to welcome their visitors to their website, though I wanted it to be larger than now.
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      the background white color of this home page should be separate with a different color than the middle thread or the main topic we could call it. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      Having a twitter block streaming into the website will increase the followers in twitter as well as having a connection between Wills eTech website and twitter. 
J.Randolph Radney

Stanford Students Start Their Own Course-Management Web Site - Wired Campus - The Chron... - 0 views

  • A student-run Web site at Stanford University seeks to convince students to input their class assignments to keep themselves—and their classmates—more organized. It could, founders hope, grow into a student-run course-management system.
  • Once one student adds an assignment in a class, everyone else in the class has it added to their calendars, as well. Ultimately, he’d like to expand the site to include social events on campus, to help students better plan every aspect of their lives. He also plans to allow students to flag incorrect assignments.
J.Randolph Radney

Facebook is gaslighting the web. We can fix it. - Anil Dash - 0 views

  • Facebook has moved from merely being a walled garden into openly attacking its users' ability and willingness to navigate the rest of the web. The evidence that this is true even for sites which embrace Facebook technologies is overwhelming, and the net result is that Facebook is gaslighting users into believing that visiting the web is dangerous or threatening.
jenna swift

Charitable Gift Giving that Makes a Difference | Heifer International - 4 views

    • jenna swift
       
      Heifer Logo is consistently in this location to allow easy access to the home screen from any linked page.
  • Heifer International, 1 World Avenue, Little Rock, AR/USA 72202 (800) 422-0474 | 501(c)(3
    • jenna swift
       
      Company's identification information.
  • Contact Us
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    • jenna swift
       
      The home page is lacking an informative introduction which explains the corporations purpose.
    • jenna swift
       
      This horizontal navigation bar is handy and consistent on each linked page. The titles are informative but could use some colour to make them more obvious.
    • jenna swift
       
      Colour coding each title with its subsequent link would make this website more interesting and increase accessibility.
    • jenna swift
       
      The drop down menus under each title are also very convenient. This means you can find what you are looking for faster, without having to filter through information you don't want. In addition, you can easily move between the linked pages.
    • jenna swift
       
      These changing graphics give the viewer an overall sense of the organizations purpose (if they wait for the five sequences to shuffle through). They provide pictures of hope and a few words of information, seeking to appeal to the viewer's feelings.
    • jenna swift
       
      A few of the messages also persuade the viewer logically and ethically, giving strong facts and personal testimonies.
  • Sign up for Heifer's email updates:
    • jenna swift
       
      This is the organizations way of telling you even more about the charity and reminding you by sending regular e-mail updates. This seems like a good idea for any business.
    • jenna swift
       
      The text is easy to read with lots of whitespace. The black lettering on white background is consistent throughout the website but it's a bit boring.
    • jenna swift
       
      The highlighting techniques are appropriate; hyperlinks are underlined and headings are in red or blue.
    • jenna swift
       
      The site uses pronouns throughout to engage the viewer.
    • jenna swift
       
      The writing style throughout this website is serious yet personal.
    • jenna swift
       
      The corporation's message is obvious: please donate! There are numerous links on this page for the viewer to click to contribute, making it an easy process.
    • jenna swift
       
      Heifer wants to spread the word about their charity. These links provide a way to tell the people you know about this great organization.
  • Contact Us
    • jenna swift
       
      Conventional search bar.
    • jenna swift
       
      This picture is a great use of pathos. Unlike an organization such as World Vision, Heifer influences its viewers by giving positive images of success and happiness.
    • jenna swift
       
      The video does not require an add-on that needs to be downloaded and does not play immediately when this page opens. The video must be clicked on to play it, meaning it won't slow down the site once you navigate here.
  • Story Of Hope
    • jenna swift
       
      The "Contact Us" page does not actually provide information for getting a hold of anyone at Heifer. This link would be more appropriately titled "Questions".
  • Pierre Ferrari, Heifer's CEO, addresses web visitors in this short video.
    • jenna swift
       
      This video provides the website with a strong ethical argument. The CEO informs the viewer that this organization is trustworthy and credible; it has been increasing sustainability in needy villages for 66 years!
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    Jenna's Rhetorical Analysis Assignment
ivanhartling

7 Secrets to Getting Your Next Job Using Social Media - 10 views

  • About 1 year ago Dan Schawbel 607 Secrets to Getting Your Next Job Using Social Media
    • Kai Zhao
       
      hello team?
  • About 1 year ago Dan Schawbel 607 Secrets to Getting Your Next Job Using Social Media
    • Yingpeng Wu
       
      hi there
  • 7 Secrets to Getting Your Next Job Using Social Media
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  • The current environment
    • Yingpeng Wu
       
      FBI
    • Yingpeng Wu
       
      gg
    • nikki hogg
       
      Really lengthy homepage, it would be nice if they have a sort of table of contents with hyperlinks that could take you to each of the 7 secrets
    • ivanhartling
       
      I don't like how long this page is. It requires a lot of scrolling to navigate and I think it would be easier if the 7 secrets were seperated into seperate pages.
    • nikki hogg
       
      the sidebar on the right is a bit distracting and it makes it challenging to focus. it isnt that easy to quickly navigate through this site
  • 1. Conduct a people search instead of a job search
    • ivanhartling
       
      Title catches your attention.
  •  
    This supplements Chapter Seven of the course text, providing some social media job search ideas.
Anna Banana

Victims of Violence - Protecting Children from Sexual Abuse - 5 views

    • Anna Banana
       
      I am very happy to see that the age of consent and power has changed to reflect that even young children can sexually abuse. Any kind of sexual act without consent is rape, no matter the age.
  • It is a criminal offence in Canada under section 150.1 to engage in sexual activity with a child under the age of sixteen, regardless of the child’s perceived or actual consent.
  • Incest, or sexual contact with a family member, is always illegal
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  • under section 155 of the Criminal Code of Canada.
  • If a person touches a child directly or indirectly “for a sexual purpose” they can be charged and convicted of Sexual Interference under section 151.
  • If a person asks a child to touch them directly or indirectly “for a sexual purpose” they can be charged and convicted with Invitation to Sexual Touching under section 152.
    • Anna Banana
       
      What is it that makes sexual abuse so 'acceptable' in society? Why isn't sexual abuse looked at as a devestating-traumatic-life-altering-soul-crushing violation? What can we do to make this change and get tougher on these predators?
  • According to the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of Mental Disorders, pedophilia is a paraphilia in which an individual has intense and recurring sexual urges towards prepubescent children
  • there are basically two groups [of pedophiles]: those oriented exclusively toward children and those oriented toward both adults and children.” Thus, there are two main categories of pedophiles; the first category consists of Preferential Pedophiles, who like children of a certain age group and tend not to stray from that. The second category consists of Situational Pedophiles, who are often incapable of forming relationships with an equal (adult), sometimes because of a mental disability. The Situational Pedophile may turn to children after experiencing humiliation or frustration in an adult relationship.
  • large percentage of individuals who suffer from pedophilia were sexually abused as children. However, the vast majority of adults who were abused as children do not develop pedophilia or pedophilic behaviours
  • Younger children may not display signs of being harmed by sexual abuse because often the perpetrator is a person they know and trust; the child may seem unaffected by the perpetrators actions and may not show signs of resistance. However, this does not mean that the child has not been harmed by the sexual abuse. The lack of resistance children sometimes show also contributes to their feelings of guilt and their fear of disclosing because they do not want others to assume they “invited” the incident. Disclosure of sexual abuse varies. Some children disclose their abuse immediately, while some are unable to due to their feelings of fear, shame, guilt and confusion.
    • Anna Banana
       
      What a sweet baby, who would want to hurt this innocent babe?
    • Anna Banana
       
      This bright red box attracts my eye and tells me that I am on the right page. I like the tittle but it should really say Survivors of Violence
    • Anna Banana
       
      I like that the phone number is VERY visible and one of the first things you notice, and it's toll free and pretty easy to remember
  • Victims of Violence is a federally registered charitable organization.
  • To generally promote public safety and the protection of society.
    • Anna Banana
       
      I would really love to know in what part of the brain do these thoughts come from? What causes these urges in the brain? In which part of the brain do these urges stem from? Is it part of an addictive personality?
    • Anna Banana
       
      Sexual Abuse I found can be a broad topic and I have narrowed the topic down to Pedophilia before, but I was not aware of the two 'groups' of pedophiles
  • My wish is that each survivor will one day be able to give all the guilt and shame back to the perpetrator so that they can heal and live a healthy happy life.
  • My wish is that each survivor will one day be able to give all the guilt and shame back to the perpetrator so that they can heal and live a healthy happy life.
  • There seems to be a vicious cycle of this crime
  • Triggers are predictable patterns signalling when the perpetrator is most likely to offend.
  • the tendency to sexually assault children begins with a predictable circumstance or pattern of behaviour called a "trigger”
  • The best method of prevention is for the offender to abstain from contact with children until treatment is initiated and a clinical risk assessment is made.
    • Anna Banana
       
      I like that the content tab is right at the top so that you immediately know where you are and where to look :)
    • Anna Banana
       
      I like that this site is a FEDERALLY registered CHARITABLE organization
    • Anna Banana
       
      Hmmmm, does this mean that Pedophiles do not only focus on children? I find it interesting that there are different levels of pedophilia and that it is not only targeted at children. Wow.
    • Anna Banana
       
      95% of abusers know their victims. These people can be someone in our family, our doctor, our coaches, our troop leaders, our clergy, our teachers. This means that as parents we need to be more vigilant and ask questions about those who are in our childrens lives. Keep your eyes and ears open, listen to your child when they are talking to you as they often insert warnings into their conversations with us to test how we will react.
  • The effects of child sexual abuse are different for everyone.
  • Research has shown that these negative consequences most often include anxiety, refusal to eat, nightmares, anger, fear of adults and authority figures, chronic stress, posttraumatic stress disorder, drug abuse, inappropriate sexual and self-destructive behaviour, increased risk of victimization, delinquency, depression, suicide, and the inability to trust and have intimate relationships
  • Many factors can influence a victim’s response to their abuse including being believed, the relationship between the victim and the perpetrator, the duration of the abuse, personal support resources (emotional, financial), cultural factors, age and maturity of the victim, degree to which the victim feels responsible for the incident, life stressors, and time between the abuse and the beginning of therapy.
  • Psychologist Frederick Mathews’ research on child molesters, “Help for Adults Who Molest Children,” is written for individuals who sexually abuse children. The literature emphasizes that individuals who have molested a child must immediately receive help to decrease their chance of reoffending. Mathews stresses that child molesters are not likely to stop sexually victimizing children on their own, intervention is required. It is important that child molesters ask for help so that they can learn to understand why they commit these crimes, the sexual assault cycle and their triggers. There is not a quick fix to this problem, it requires a lifetime of work and treatment.
    • Anna Banana
       
      Not sure this is totally right as every piece pf research I have read states that 98% of pedophiles reoffend and that there is NO CURE for pedophilia.
    • Anna Banana
       
      No shit Sherlock! This has been happening for who knows how long, since the Romans and their grand orgies perhaps, and although many sexual abuse victims do not go on to repeat and reoffend, sexual abuse is a VICIOUS cycle that needs to stop!!
  • Protection of children from this harmful crime and its life-long negative effects must be a primary goal.
    • Anna Banana
       
      THIS IS MY MISSION!!!!
  • In 2001, Researchers at the Royal Free Hospital School of Medicine and University College London reviewed the case notes of 225 male sex abusers and 522 other male patients being treated in a London clinic. The study found that the child abusers had been victims of sexual violence more often than the patients who had not committed sexual abuse. This finding suggests that there is a victim-to-perpetrator cycle in some men who commit sex crimes. Psychoanalytic theory proposes that a hostile childhood can create a need to replace feelings of “defeat” with those of “triumph.” For an individual to accomplish this emotional shift they may become a sexual aggressor as an adult.
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    Child sexual abuse occurs when an older child, adolescent or adult engages in sexual activity with a younger child or youth; sexual activity includes a variety of sexual contact ranging from sexual touching to sexual intercourse.
Hiliary Leon

The Official Eric Carle Web Site - 1 views

    • Hiliary Leon
       
      The background colour is plain white to really make the link options to stand out. When I first opened this page my eye had to adjust, I find it very unusually that Carle has made his back ground colour white. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      Very simple but it could almost be too simple but I believe that is page is more geared towards people who don't go online very often or children. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      Carle displays some of his characters on this page so it really gives a sense of who Carle is.
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    • Hiliary Leon
       
      This icon flashing makes me want to click on this link to explore the icon.
  • Welcome to The Official Eric Carle Web Site
  • Resources
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      the resources isn't really that great of ideas, however, I like that there is a bulletin board exchange is this is where educates or parents can exchange ideas on how to use the stories. 
  • About Eric CarleEric Carle’s BlogNews
Kim Tuerlings

How Disney Works to Win Repeat Customers - BusinessWeek - 1 views

  • Train employees to be respectful of all customers, including children. If employees are kind and engage a child, a parent may be more likely to stay in the store, says Jones. For example, a small business in Valparaiso, Ind.—Flanagin's Bulk Mail—uses coloring sheets to keep clients' children and grandchildren occupied while in the store. Each time a child comes in to her store, the owner, Donna Flanagin, asks the child to color a sheet so it can be displayed on the front door. When the child's birthday arrives, Flanagin sends the coloring sheet and a birthday card to the child. "It costs virtually nothing, yet reminds the parents and grandparents about her business and helps her makes a connection with her customers," says Jones. Make waiting in line an entertaining experience. Nobody likes to wait in line, even for a Disney attraction. But it's a fact of life. At Disney, employees are trained to strike up conversations with guests and to offer useful information about new attractions, fun facts, and upcoming show times. A small grain company in Kansas that learned this concept at the Disney Institute applied the idea to its plain waiting room. Since customers often brought children or grandchildren along, the grain company added magazines and toys and books for kids to its waiting room. The company also trained front-desk employees to let customers know the approximate waiting time and offer tips on less busy stretches of the day, in case customers preferred to return later. Be "show-ready." Your "stage" communicates a lot about who you are. Disney will not tolerate trash and trains all employees to pick it up so that the resorts remain "clean, friendly, and fun." If a leader were to walk by trash without picking it up, it would send the wrong message to staff. For a small business that might not even have a physical location, this concept can be as simple as making sure your Web site is professional and easy to navigate. According to Jones: "your Web site is your front door. If it's not show-ready, it can make or break your business." Keep the show on stage. Disney employees must always follow company guidelines for dress and customer service in guest areas. They can take a break and relax in areas unavailable to guests. As a small business owner, try walking the floor as a customer. Do you see or hear conversations that are best held amid the privacy of employee areas? Can your team members be easily seen by customers as they take a smoke break or talk on cell phones? If so, explain the difference between on-stage and off-stage. Encourage your team to be "assertively friendly." Disney encourages its employees to actively seek contact with guests. For example, they will approach a family that appears confused about its park map or has misplaced its car in one of the vast Disney parking lots. They will proactively offer assistance instead of waiting for people to ask. All these tips require leaders who understand the importance of communications and how to extend the conversation to secondary guests. The effort will pay off. Disney has discovered that if a customer appreciates your store or service and speaks highly of her experience, then her children and grandchildren are likely to become loyal customers, along with their friends, neighbors, and acquaintances.
J.Randolph Radney

Protecting Your Privacy On Social Networking Sites : NPR - 1 views

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    Privacy is an important issue when Web 2.0 technologies are used widely (especially for business).
Cassaundra Rowe

Personal Characteristics & Skills of a Probation Officer | eHow.com - 2 views

    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The toolbar makes it easy to navigate the website
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The search box will make looking up certian keywords easier for any user
  • References Bureau of Labor Statistics: Probation Officers and Correctional Treatment Specialists
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      Allows for users to look at referances
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The list of Characteristics and Skills allows it to be read easily.
  • Top 5 To Try How to Become a Probation Officer in Canada Juvenile Probation Officer Qualifications The Training Required for a Probation Officer in Pennsylvania Definition of a Juvenile Probation Officer Probation Officer Rights
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      Top 5 links related to the subject helps to further the research aspect.
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      This clutters the web page. It is too close to the body of text.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The colour scheme is easy on the eyes. It is a nice contrast.
  • print email favorite share
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I don't like the flashing of this picture. It draws the attention away.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I do not like pictures on a web page that I am trying to read.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      This one really does not communicate anything about Probation Officers.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I like how these are at the bottom of the page. Some websites have them on the side or on top.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I am refering to the other unrelated articles at the very bottom
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I feel this should be put somewhere else not right below the text of the article. For a few moments I thought it was a part of it.
  • Law-Abiding
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The large font of the characteristics allows the reader to know what the characteristics are, as they stand out.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The font on thsi website is a perfect reading font. The background also is perfect for this type of website.
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      This looks as if it is a part of the text.
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      This is another repeat of the Top 5 to try and the related articles.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I am unsure if th comment box is really needed. But I like how it is at the end. It might be a basic thing ont he website, however some articles don't really need it.
  • Read Next Article UserAction.add(function() { $.getScript("http://s7.addthis.com/js/250/addthis_widget.js#username=dmseo", function(){ addthis.init(); }); });
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      This is another navigation key that is helpful for users. It just needs to be moved closer to the actualy text.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I also find it nice that the next article is related to this topic
J.Randolph Radney

Skillful writing of an awful research paper - Analytical Chemistry (ACS Publications) - 3 views

  • My advice is solely based on principles of presenting the objectives, experiments, results, and conclusion in a fashion that as such no one will finish reading them or, if they do, readers will have little chance of understanding or remembering them.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Thesis of the article.
  • practice and a lack of mental concentration
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      it is important to see the irony in this phrasing.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      The colour choice represents solid foundation and conservative values.
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    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      The logo and tag represent serious marketing.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      The site seems to be written in frames, which is not the best format for today's Web standards.
  • Royce Murray University of North Carolina - Chapel Hill, ChemistryAnal. Chem., 2011, 83 (3), p 633DOI: 10.1021/ac2000169Publication Date (Web): January 12, 2011Copyright © 2011 American Chemical Society
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Prominence of the bibliography of the article provides useful information that is readily retrievable.
  • Rule 1.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      It might have been better to have used some sort of highlighting device to make the rules stand out better. Also, punctuating what are not sentences is not really standard form.
Amy Simcox

Why Buy Organic, Organic farming methods improve soil health and prevent erosion - This... - 3 views

    • Amy Simcox
       
      This border is not linear or hard... it has kind of an organic shape (No punn intended). It looks like a cornucopia. Also, the fuzzy edges makes it feel like the fruit and veggies have a halo. They look nummy.
  • The average child receives 4-5 times more exposure than an adult to at least eight widely used cancer-causing pesticides in food.
    • Amy Simcox
       
      I have gone through the text and highlighted blue the points that I find appeal to my emotion in a negative manner (fear, anger or unhappiness). These points use pathos by appealing to negative emotions regarding any product that is not deemed organic.
    • Amy Simcox
       
      This is also the beginning of a number of facts that they use to back up some of their claims. I wish they had included references for some of these facts. It would provide more umph for their argument
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Do you mean 'more credibility'?
  • Organic farming methods improve soil health and prevent erosion. They aim to maintain long-term soil fertility, increased soil biological activity and ensure effective pest management
    • Amy Simcox
       
      I have gone through and highlighted all the points that appeal to my happy emotions. I notice that there are more scary blue text than happy green text on the page.
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    • Amy Simcox
       
      I'm not sure what they plan to do with this large empty space on the side... it seems unsettling in the design of the web page.
    • Amy Simcox
       
      I was wondering why the authors chose purple for their background. It doesn't seem very much like a back to earth kind of color. After doing a little research on the color purple it makes a little sense. Purple is associated with good judgement, peace of mind and people seeking spiritual fullfilment. Also, it has been associated with magic, mystery and royalty. I'm not certain but I would think people willing to pay extra for organic food would be trying to make a good judgement and spiritula fullfillment maybe?
  • In addition, irrigating large tracts of land is increasing soil salinity resulting in the decommissioning of farm land worldwide
    • Amy Simcox
       
      This is actually true. I didn't know until recently that overhead watering can increase salinity in soil. This happens because small particles in the water, such as salt, are concentrated when the water evaporates before it seeps into the ground. Again, I wish they had cited this fact.
    • Amy Simcox
       
      Their question is short and sweet and right up front for the reader to see immediately. I think that was well done.
    • Amy Simcox
       
      They have drawn attention to their main points nicely by making them bold and a larger font.
Antonia Gujinovic

Heart and Stroke Foundation - Healthy Living - 1 views

    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      This banner is successful in reminding the reader of current fund-raising events, programs and important information. It is successful because it remains constant on all pages/sections of the entire Heart and Stroke website.
    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      This "donate now" button is also something that stays constant in all sections of the website. The yellow colour nicely contrasts with the red background to draw more attention to it.  The only downside of this "donate now" button is the size. A bigger size would draw more attention to it. Thus potentially getting more donations.
    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      There is a 'Home' link on all pages to allow a reader to easily access the home page incase they get lost or find themselves in a spot they don't need to be.
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    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      The side bar is a great way of keeping important sections of the website always in the readers view. The Canvass Online box is something that stays on top as the most important item on all pages. The consistency and repetitiveness of the side bar on all sections of the web site is a great way of getting more people to sign up. Also the colour scheme again is important here. It sticks to the red colour representing heart health.
    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      This passage shows an appeal to ethos and logos. In the first sentence (ethos) it mentions that experts have reviewed the section. The second sentence (logos) states that the information is based on scientific evidence.
  • based on scientific evidence
  • experts
    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      The organization of the topics are well done. The colour red is chosen to emphasize the heart health theme. The topics are sub-categorized alphabetically making it user-friendly and logically organized.
anonymous

Starbucks Coffee Company - 1 views

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caitlin molson

Googling and Facebooking to a job | Marketplace From American Public Media - 5 views

  • Social media more often seems to be a way to get kicked out of a job -- unseemly photos, an off-color post -- but some job-seekers are using it to land their dream jobs
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Engaging opening sentence.
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      I don't particularly like this colour choice here. Perhaps it is a branding artifact?
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      Vertical layout works well for this site
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    • Carly Madsen
       
      Nice to have a picture to catch your attention along with a brief sentence to tell you what the article is about.
    • caitlin molson
       
      Is it just me or is anyone else distracted by the amount of advertising here, the actual content is pushed to a third of the page
  • When they Googled themselves, they would see Brownstein's ads asking for a job, and directing them to his website. Total cost of placing the ads? Six dollars
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    Someone in a class recently told me they would like to work at Google. Here's how some people went after the job they wanted.
Jordan Turgeon

Kinect - Xbox.com - 2 views

shared by Jordan Turgeon on 23 Nov 10 - No Cached
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      Easily understandable heading list of different sections of the web-site
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      Videos provide an insight towards how the product is used. Also, it promotes a fun factor for various ages and families alike
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      Similar heading style that directs people to specific and well-identified areas. The added colours makes them easily distinguishable
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    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Lots of visuals which help the reader further understand the product without the need for large amounts of text
  • You are the controller. No gadgets, no gizmos, just you!
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      Strong statement and direct. States exactly what the product does up front
  • Kinect brings games and entertainment to life in extraordinary new ways without using a controller. Imagine controlling movies and music with the wave of a hand or the sound of your voice. With Kinect, technology evaporates, letting the natural magic in all of us shine.
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      Gives a small description of the product in text. It supports the given images by providing meaning to what the people are actually doing. It's simple and short so people will take the time to read or skim it
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      Clever use of drop down menus. Prevents unnecessary clutter
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      Neat features; however, they should be placed on another page for those who are interested. All these do is slow the page down and provide distractions
  • Controller-free gaming means full body play. Kinect responds to how you move. So if you have to kick, then kick. If you have to jump, then jump. You already know how to play. All you have to do now is to get off the couch.
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      Generally points towards the involvement of a form of physical activity - something that is an issue today
  • It's All About You Once you wave your hand to activate the sensor, your Kinect will be able to recognize you and access your Avatar. Then you’ll be able to jump in and out of different games, and show off and share your moves.
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      Gives a personalized image of what the product actually does and is supported with the given picture. This implies you are in control
  • Endless Entertainment Enjoy HD movies, music and sports through Xbox LIVE without any extra accessories. Just use a wave of your hand or the sound of your voice to enjoy 3,500 games on ESPN, HD movies through Zune, streaming music from Last.fm.
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      Adds persuasive appeal by commenting that almost anything you'd want can be accessed from one common place using this device
  • Something For Everyone Whether you’re a gamer or not, anyone can play and have a blast. And with advanced parental controls and movies for the family, Kinect promises a gaming experience that’s safe, secure and fun for everyone.
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      This statement argues that this product is good for anyone, and not just gamers. The whole family can have fun and enjoy
  • You're Ready to Play Easy to use and instantly fun, Kinect gets everyone off the couch and moving, laughing and cheering. See a ball? Kick it. Want to join a friend in the fun? Simply jump in.
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      creates appeal using ease of use and fun as a basis
  • Games For Everyone
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      Repetition that increases the message that this product is fit for anyone
  • More Than Just Games
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      Further repetition - lets people know again that you can do more than just game with this product
  • Games Anyone Can Enjoy Kinect™ for Xbox 360® has a collection of games to suit any style of play. And they're designed for full body play, so each one is as unique as the person playing them. Yep, that means you.
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      More repetition aimed at diverse levels of enjoyment and uniqueness. It's different for everyone
  • Xbox 360 and Xbox LIVE offer more than just games With Xbox LIVE, whole world of extraordinary entertainment experiences await, including music, movies, Facebook and more.
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      Again re-iterates the other possibilities this product offers
  • *Media content sold separately. Zune music streaming requires an Xbox LIVE Gold membership and a Zune Pass subscription. Live sports and highlights from ESPN on Xbox LIVE requires an Xbox LIVE Gold membership and and ESPN3.com affiliated broadband provider and may include affiliate-specific access requirements. See ESPN3.com for providers. **190 MB storage required. ***Download tokens included in marked packages at launch, at participating retailers, while supplies last.  80 MB required to download from Xbox LIVE.
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      Necessary information but it's not something they want people to see - smaller fonts and colours that blend in
  • Which Kinect bundle is right for you?
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      Statement in large font that attracts the attention of the reader. Makes them think an option is right for them
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      Cool design that attracts attention to the center of the page
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      Seems like something is missing from this side. And I don't think grey is the best colour for this spot. It conflicts with the happy environment they are creating in the middle section of the page
  • Why Kinect?
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      Catches the users attention - they will be attracted to the information that follows
Jovan Gill

what is yoga? types of yoga, videos & more | lululemon athletica - 2 views

shared by Jovan Gill on 03 Dec 10 - No Cached
  • Yoga energizes our bodies and calms our minds.
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      This simple statement is very powerful. By claiming that yoga energizes our bodies and clams our minds will appeal to many people, as everyone wants peace of mind and an energized body.
  • yoga quickguide
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      A quick and easy description of the different types of yoga is a definite attraction. One doesn't have to read the complete pararaphs below to get small description about the various types of yoga. One can also find out what types they are interested in and then read in further detail about those certain types.
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      The video showcases a certain type of yoga, which catches the eye and appeal of those watching. If you watch some of the video you can't help but wonder what it would be like to try antigravity yoga, and how much a hammock could make a diffeerence in your stretching compared to just the sterotypical on the ground yoga.
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  • This practice is very athletic and made up of six vigorous series of postures
    • Jovan Gill
       
      This type of yoga attracts those who are looking for a high intensity workout, and maybe did not expect that yoga could be a very athletic activity.By putting very athletic and vigourous in the same sentence a picture of a tough but appealing activity comes to mind, well appealing for those who want a intense workout.
  • Heads up - humidity is 40% and will knock you over the first time.
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      By saying that the humdity will knock you out the first time, the reader knows that this type of yoga is not for those who are looking for a leisurely activity. It attracts those to it by clearly saying "Heads up", which implies an important point that should likely not be missed.
  • By adding heat it is said that classes will help you lose weight, loosen your muscles (by adding increased range of motion) and improve your cardiovascular system.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      By simply adding heat to yoga, so much more is achieved from exercises. Many people do yoga in order to lose weight, and by adding heat that goal can be achieved all the much easier.
  • Don't be surprised if your waving your hands like you just don't care or laughing uncontrollably, this practice is intended to wake up the kundalini energy coiled at the base of your spine while activating chakras (energetic centers in the body), as well as detox the body and mind.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      This paragraph gives a different aspect of yoga that most people don't think about. "Laughing uncontrollably" and "waving your hands like you just don't care" imply a fun and energetic workout, which attracts anyone that wants to have a good time. It's a great thing that kundalini yoga awakens the energy coiled up at the base of your spine. So you get energized and receive a detoxification of the body and mind.
  • Remember: your body is your best guide. You don't have to stick to one kind of yoga, just do what your body needs!
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      This sentence relieves any tension or stress one may feel when they are thinking about taking up yoga. It tells the reader that if you don't feel right about doing a certain type of yoga, try a different kind. There is no pressure to keep up with the same type of yoga if your body doesn't feel right doing it. This lessens the anxiety most people feel when they are considering taking up a new activity.
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      In this picture a sense of community is felt. The many legs with black yoga pants on top of the colourful yoga mats with a sunset in the background give a sense of happiness and belonging. Everyone is doing the same pose which shows that anyone can do yoga. Since only legs are shown and no faces or bodies, it implies that it doesn't matter what race, age, sex or athletic ability you are, anyone can participate in yoga and become a part of a community while getting healthier.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      In this picture the bright colours of the woman's clothing and the prop that is helping her with her yoga poses immediately grabs the attention of the reader. Her closed eyes imply a relaxed state, which shows that props help enhance a peace of mind and serenity.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      The lush green field with the three people doing a sun salutation makes most people want to be there and do yoga. The bright sunlight in the video, with a luscious green field act as a open invitation to those who want to practice yoga. And in this video they are teaching the perfect exercise for that scenery, the sun salutation.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      The light pink/peachish colour brings the readers attention to this quote. On a page that is full of black text on a white background our eyes are drawn to the saying which sticks out like a sore thumb on the web page. Also the swirly type text pulls in the reader, since the rest of the page has a standard text that is easy to read but not nearly as appealing. This quote changes everytime one opens the page, and it is also a part of the lululemon manifesto. These quotes appear on many pages of the site, and they are the attention grabing text on every page.
J.Randolph Radney

ENGL 181_WL: Plain English Orientation Videos for Web 2.0 Media - 2 views

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    This set of links is on the MOODLE course site for English 181; students should be able to access the links once they have supplied a username and password for MOODLE.
Victor Andrucson

A Brief History of Friends of the Nemaiah Valley - 2 views

  • We are an all-volunteer society with patrons and supporting organizations far beyond the Nemiah Valley and outside the borders of our home province.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      "All-volunteer" probably is intended to make me have greater confidence in the things this group is advocating.
    • Victor Andrucson
       
      While "all-volunteer" might seem to make them more trustworthy and possibly deserving to receive donations might it also be a contrast to "all professional" and thus allows for lower expectations on the parts of the reader leading to a higher possibility of satisfaction?
  • Nemiah Valley and of the Xeni Gwet’in FNG struggle to protect their homeland.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      Excellent Smithers!
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    This site is where we worked on rhetorical analysis in class.
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