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Fighting the Darkness: My Secret Battle with Depression - 2 views

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      What I like about this site are the soothing colors.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      This appeals to pathos.
  • Change is in the air
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      Logos is achieved by the wording of hope, for me.
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      The red against the green background caught my attention.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      Red seems to be an urgent color and so I believe Pathos was achieved.
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      I find the site to look enlightened even as depression is discussed. Also, encouraging in it's attempt to provide for someone ways which they can fight depression
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      Although the video does appear to bring life to the page I don't see how it contributes to the site.
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      I suppose Pathos can be credited because it is a lovely ride down a beautiful mountain in and on a mountain top.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      This site caught my attention immediately. It looked soothing, it is easy to read and it deals with a delicate subject that affects many people. I think the colors of the page accomplished what it probably set out to do, which was create calm. Let's not forget, we are dealing with depression. This subject means something to me as I suffer from it on occasion. I can associate with this personally. The subject is not so much a controversial one, however, those who don't suffer from depression have been known to say, "Get over it!", which can be a negative experience for one in the throws of depression. I think the writers' purpose here it to inform and explain the symptoms of the disease as experienced by those it affects. I believe it also provides a forum for those who simply want to explain where they are at in their depression and to encourage others to understand that this is real and it affects many. It also serves more than one purpose as it provides suggestions on how to deal with it.The thesis, or the overall main point is basically to let the disease speak for itself and allow others to comment on the subjectThe tone of the text is relaxed and does not create feelings of unrest. It provides answers and links to all issues surrounding the subject of depression. I really liked the graphics of what appears to be grass. I imagine laying down in it and breathing in the fresh air. I also took a shine to the dandelions on the right side and I specifically liked the "I'm done hiding" at the top of the page. Many people hide the depression as they are embarrassed.  The highlighted areas are stand out texts for me.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      Logos is achieved as the words are logical. Pathos is achieved as it appeals to my emotions because I have first hand knowledge of this sickness called depression. Ethos is achieved because I trust and believe the written word.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      This full length essay is in google docs with access to you. Was unsure where you wanted this.
  • I'm done hiding.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      What I like about these 2 highlighted texts is that it appeals to ethos because I experienced these two statements. Ethos was achieved by what it says.
  • I hid my battle
  • Mountain Biking and Depression
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      This line appeals to my Pethos as I consider it emotional to have "Mountain Biking" and "Depression" in the same sentences. It affects my emotions by making me think.
  • I'm Drowning
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      Again, ethos and Pathos is achieved because I know how it feels to feel this way.
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      I don't feel the logo of Facebook contributes to the site at all.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      It did not appeal to my Pathos.
  • I can't breathe
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      Again, this affects me by Pethos as it brings memories that are unpleasant.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      The dandelions appeal to my pathos. They are innocent and carefree.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      The simplicity of the page appeals to ethos, logos and pathos. It is carefree and uncluttered and feels like a safe place.
Kimberly McCoy

A Brief History of Friends of the Nemaiah Valley - 2 views

  • Nemiah Valley and of the Xeni Gwet’in FNG struggle to protect their homeland.
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      Excellent Smithers!
Kimberly McCoy

Diigolet | Diigo - 0 views

shared by Kimberly McCoy on 05 Jul 11 - Cached
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      Is this what you want us to do?
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      Is this what you're looking for??
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  • Diigolet is not as feature-rich as the Diigo toolbar, but it can be set-up by simple drag-and-dr
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