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started by Peter E. Rowe on 01 Apr 14
  • Peter E. Rowe
    #1 Peter E. Rowe on 01 Apr 14
     
    Write the first 4 lines of your response to you recent writing assignment-Journal Entry- "How long have you been on the planet?"
  • Gigi Chen
    #3 Gigi Chen on 02 Apr 14
     
    I have been on this boring and strange planet for a year. This is a huge blue planet. we came here to look for my grand-grand mother's necklace. That was the only way I can find where my dog went.
  • Dean Tian
    #5 Dean Tian on 02 Apr 14
     
    I have been on the dark planet for 500 years. This planet was beautiful, a lot of areas had water, so we called it water ball. We came here because our spaceship was damaged badly by our enemy, that person name is Crawley. Who had more advanced weapons than us.
  • Aaron Leffert
    #6 Aaron Leffert on 02 Apr 14
     
    About 48 hours ago, on a ship being commanded by a small crew of 3 went a wall and crash landed on a strange planet. They were on a 5 day trip orbiting the earth, taking pictures for scientific experiments. The 3 man crew included me, my copilot and his dog. The ship went off course, using up the rest of its fuel. There were some smaller damages to the exterior of the ship when landing in center field of what seems to be AT&T Park in San Francisco.
  • Henry Passerini
    #7 Henry Passerini on 02 Apr 14
     
    Today has marked the 364th day on the god forsaken planet, it is warm and damp outside. I came out on this adventure to explore this land and find something useful to bring back to my homeland. This young man who came with me is a nerdy sales clerk at a thrift shop up the road from my home. The second person is a tall rasta man with dreads down to the tops of the back of his knees.
  • zeyuan tang
    #8 zeyuan tang on 02 Apr 14
     
    Due to the accident, we have to stay at the planet a little while, so i do not have specific time. At this planet, we walked around try to find any creature or resource, but we met a scared animal chased us and we escape it. At the end, we found every things were a dream.
  • Dow Drukker
    #9 Dow Drukker on 03 Apr 14
     
    I have floated my thoughts from dusk to dawn on this ambiguous planet.
    For too long i have watched my brothers and sisters abolish one a-nothers equality.
    As angels have descended down from Afrihdidiys immortal love.
    Us men ascend from the inner depth of Hatys barren blood.
    The nights when stars glimmers life into ones self.
    Rape, war, genocide, and mistreating of ones soul, glows only our true light.
    For simply the connections we build, and the laughs we share make it all worth it.-TENZIN.CRANE

    (MY DIIGO DOESNT WORK SO I AM USING THIS ONE)
  • Ryan Moran
    #11 Ryan Moran on 03 Apr 14
     
    I have been on the unique and intriguing planet for just over a year now. I named it Planet X and I went there because a giant asteroid was about to destroy Planet Earth.
  • Frederik Lasson
    #12 Frederik Lasson on 03 Apr 14
     
    I have been on this loud and smelly planet for 18 long years.
  • Paul Eleven
    #13 Paul Eleven on 03 Apr 14
     
    Day 3, this wretched planet is treating me no better than an insect. Everyone else onboard is dead up to this
    point, I'm all alone here. Funny how everyone back on Kerbin called it the Blue Planet, right now all I see is a green forest surrounding me. When the space program first intercepted their communiqu, we were shocked by what we discovered. A small satellite containing information about this planet and its indigenous people, and a picture of it from space.
  • Cris Boeckel
    #14 Cris Boeckel on 03 Apr 14
     
    Day 137: It has been about sixteen weeks since we landed on this planet. We are starting to run out of supplies quickly and we are currently in the process of finding alternative ways to survive. We found these small orange like fruits with deep purple seeds that give extreme hallucinations. Note to self, never eat those again.
  • Jeans Jiaraksa
    #15 Jeans Jiaraksa on 03 Apr 14
     
    Day 1 on Planet 67 of the 20375 Solar System AKA The second son.
  • Jeans Jiaraksa
    #16 Jeans Jiaraksa on 03 Apr 14
     
    Day 1 on planet 67 of the 20375 solar system AKA The Second Son. No sign of any life forms, we are on our second stage of setting up our camp. the planet's gravitational pull is less than that of our planet and the atmosphere is uninhabitable.
  • sam millard
    #17 sam millard on 03 Apr 14
     
    It's been 20 hard days since we landed on this mystery of a planet. Nothing on this rock makes sense. We came here as scared refugees from our morbid battleground of a planet. Our ship had already almost rotted completely to dust by now due to the odd liquid we had landed in. It is now approaching night, me and the two other starving refugees haven't eaten for days.
  • Yi Lin
    #18 Yi Lin on 04 Apr 14
     
    EA20, a planet that made of glass. I've been stay at this starving infernal for years. I'm here for billion dollars of business. However, things did not work well as I wished, I ended up wasted years in this tiny little coven on this god damn planet.
  • sam zanta
    #19 sam zanta on 04 Apr 14
     
    we have been on this small green planet for 2 days now. our mission is simple; collect the hard white bricks from the opps and bring them back to the Lamron galaxy. my right hand man of this dangerous mission is chief keef and our trusted mechanic lil reese.
  • Bixi Zeng
    #20 Bixi Zeng on 06 Apr 14
     
    Today is 6th day on the plante which looks like our beautiful earth. Our primary mission is to find new resources to supply people life. So we came to this plante. Also there are two people who came with me in this mission.
  • Hang Zhao
    #22 Hang Zhao on 07 Apr 14
     
    　　While I was hiding my body close to a wet slimy rock which could hide the damn red alarm, the unknown monster was walking by. The shake of the ground faded away, I let my breath out which I held in for long, sat down on the ground and wiped the sweat off my forehead. Before I got here, my memory had been cleaned; I had no idea about why I was in this horrible place.
  • Bryan Wang
    #23 Bryan Wang on 14 Apr 14
     
    The water has a lonely cell who has been survived from the time was start. He copy himself that cell created the first life of the planet. The life found the way to reproduced more life. The lonely cell does not feel lonely anymore.
  • zach harrison
    #24 zach harrison on 15 Apr 14
     
    Its been 62 hours, survival unlikely, my oxygen is down to 7%, every one is dead, even the survivors. everywhere I look, there is a body floating haphazardly near by. Maybe Novak was right, why stare at death with the little time I have left. There's nothing left to reflect upon, my life has been meaningless, I have no relatives, hell I couldn't even keep a girl friend for more than a month, I'm just going to be another statistic of this attack, just a number on a paper. But instead of dying with panic on my face, my face shall be one at peace. Right now im fine with death, in 5 hours, I might not. Best to go out with a smile.
  • xiaogang wu
    #25 xiaogang wu on 15 Apr 14
     
    I have been on this planet for 3 endless days with two trustful assistants. I was trying to find a place with abundant resources, in order to save our exhausted homeland. The giant guy with ugly face and ridiculous outfit is my fighter and fashion adviser. The tiny girl with beatiful and blonde hair is my lover and driver.
  • james lee
    #26 james lee on 18 Apr 14
     
    Its been three years since I crashed on this planet, I don't know where I am and the only way to start the ship again is by building my character.

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