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Kai Zhao

The Philosophy of the Matrix - 0 views

    • Kai Zhao
       
      I found this website that introduces and analyzes the philosophy of the Matrix in details.
    • Kai Zhao
       
      Two comments for this site: 1) Less explaination for jargons, readers must have some knowledge about math, computer science and even logic. Without these knowledge readers might not understand everything it talks about. 2) Add the website design is VERY bad, no pictures, and no visual stuffs. Those make me tired to finish reading it.
trehbein

Peace River Coal | Peace River Coal Home Page - 0 views

shared by trehbein on 07 Mar 11 - No Cached
  • Peace River Coal Inc., a producer of high-quality metallurgical coal for export, from Canada is jointly owned by Anglo American plc, Hillsborough Resources Ltd., and NEMI Northern Energy and Mining Inc. Anglo American holds a 74% interest in Peace River Coal. Peace River Coal owns substantial coal properties in the Peace River region of northeast British Columbia.
    • trehbein
       
      It appears one of the main goals through this website is to explain and demonstrate who Peace River Coal's business afilliates are. The names are mentioned a number of times through the website and showing the reader that these names are present seems to be a large part of the website's focus.
  • with the help of local and other partners
    • trehbein
       
      Credibility could be improved by re-wording to avoid saying 'and other partners', because it almost sounds like something is being hidden from the reader with that language, even if nothing is. It takes away slightly from Ethos.
azizkhaled

Personal and Business Banking | Moving to Canada: HSBC Bank Canada - 1 views

shared by azizkhaled on 17 Jul 11 - Cached
  • Personal Banking - For you
  • Business Banking
    • azizkhaled
       
      The Bank Understands the importance of both types of costumers and put both sides in the home page to value all costumers and ensure the clarity easiness to get what they need online.
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    • azizkhaled
       
      The background is very simple that it gets boring looking at a white with some gray colors. perhaps the bank wants to transfer this image to its costumer, that this site is professional and only for business and acquiring information.
    • azizkhaled
       
      Now we have to remember that this site in only for Canada and Canadian costumers. After my visits to multiple sites from different countries I noticed the differences in the layout of the home page. Maybe its a strategy that the bank takes to make whats proper for users in different countries and have the services available for each country presented differently in each website for them.
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    One of the leading banks in the world, it has many branches world wide centered in London, U.K. I believe this bank has given time and effort in creating this website and took care of all details to meet with the high standard this bank claims.
Hiliary Leon

Child Care Network - Free Child Care Search for Canadian Parents Helping Find Local Day... - 1 views

    • Hiliary Leon
       
      This photo gives me a sense of family and friendliness.
  • Welcome
  • Join us in our effort to become Canada's #1 child care resource.
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  • Benefits for Parents Free access to national daycare listings Basic and advanced searching capabilities make it easy tofind daycare that meets your needs Ability to compare multiple daycares simultaneously Simple to use format with quick results Useful links on child care expenses and interviewing daycares One-stop resource for finding child care.
  • Benefits for Child Care Providers Personalized web page Printable business cards Newspaper and online advertising Increased client exposure Cost effective marketing Professional means of business promotions No more classified ads or homemade signs
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      This website is very simple and easy for the read to find what they are reading. 
  • online
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    Welcome to ChildCareNetwork.ca - Canada's newest resource for finding child care. Our company is dedicated to helping child care providers market their services while offering parents a fast, free, and easy resource for finding local child care. We offer both groups many benefits.
Hiliary Leon

The Official Eric Carle Web Site - 1 views

    • Hiliary Leon
       
      The background colour is plain white to really make the link options to stand out. When I first opened this page my eye had to adjust, I find it very unusually that Carle has made his back ground colour white. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      Very simple but it could almost be too simple but I believe that is page is more geared towards people who don't go online very often or children. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      Carle displays some of his characters on this page so it really gives a sense of who Carle is.
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    • Hiliary Leon
       
      This icon flashing makes me want to click on this link to explore the icon.
  • Welcome to The Official Eric Carle Web Site
  • Resources
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      the resources isn't really that great of ideas, however, I like that there is a bulletin board exchange is this is where educates or parents can exchange ideas on how to use the stories. 
  • About Eric CarleEric Carle’s BlogNews
J.Randolph Radney

Students learn to be better 'digital citizens' - USATODAY.com - 0 views

    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      The original design of this website can be improved by using "Readability", an online web display tool from Arc-90. I will attempt a screenshot of implementation on this page as a demonstration.
  • As more students spend large chunks of study and leisure time online, schools across the USA are adding coursework focused on privacy, cyberbullying and electronic plagiarism.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Schools are finding that training is superior to blocking as a strategy to protect students.
Sarah English

fiercebitchstew - 0 views

  • @fiercebitchstew recent entries archive fierce bitches community info fiercebitchstew
    • Sarah English
       
      Links to twitter and other places on the website. Right under the banner so they are easily found.
Hiliary Leon

The Official Website of Robert Munsch - 1 views

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    Hi, welcome to robertmunsch.com. I hope you enjoy this selection of my work, as well as the creative art and short stories donated by kids and teachers.
Jennifer Rienks

Chahal Priddle LLP, Serving Kamloops & Merritt, BC, Canada. Lawyers for Personal Injury... - 4 views

  • Let's be honest, hiring a lawyer feels risky. Why should you trust Chahal Priddle LLP? We know your situation. Do you need a lawyer who suits you or someone who will get the job done? Both. You're likely skeptical and uncomfortable about your problem. But you've been prompted to take action. We understand. We'll sit down with you, find out what type of outcome you're looking for and then find the best remedy to your legal issue. You can rely on us. Most of our paralegals and assistants have been with the firm for a long time, which means they're very experienced and very good at helping you. You won't have to re-explain your file to a new assistant or wait for someone to find what should be a quick answer to your question . You'll recommend us. Past clients and fellow professionals recommend us. Repeatedly. They'll tell you that they do so because we're easy to deal with, accessible, straightforward and because we work hard to help them through a stressful process. We get results, too. Browse through our website and learn how we could help you. The quickest start to solving your problem is to make a simple phone call to our office, but we know that the decision to take action requires research. Enjoy the site and when you're ready to call, we'll help answer your questions.
    • Jennifer Rienks
       
      a use of an appeal to character.
    • Jennifer Rienks
       
      The catch Phrase " you can Rely on us" Is a very obvious appeal to character, Throughout the sight they ensure that you can trust their expertise. This cements this idea to the reader.
    • Jennifer Rienks
       
      The photo of the Kamloops area, ensured the reader and potential clients that they are a small town company and care about the community, not just the monetary benfits.
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    • Jennifer Rienks
       
      the type of language they use throughout the site, appears to have been designed to let the reader know that they are not just stuffy lawyers who use legaleze or complicated language, but are individuals who can relate and will fight for your well being.
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    Rhetorical Analysis
Brittny Buchner

Pro Clinical Hydroxycut | Success Stories - 2 views

    • Brittny Buchner
       
      This page has a great visual layout. The colour schemes go well and it is easy to direct your way around the site. The success story candidates all have their names underneath their photos, when you drag the mouse over the name is changes colour to red and to number or pounds lost. It is then easy to click on the name and see more pictures of the model. One criticism is that some of the before and after pictures don't look like the same person. This takes credibility away from Hydroxycut as the potential consumer may feel like they're being lied to.
    • Brittny Buchner
       
      The real life success story models are all happy with big smiles on their faces. This appeals to pathos (appealing to the audiences emotion.) Hydroxycut wants the viewer to envy and want to look like the models, maybe even draw out jelousy in the viewer. This will in turn entice the viewer of the website to purchase Hydroxycut in hopes of being as happy and in shape as the models are.
    • Brittny Buchner
       
      " I Lost 32lbs. with Hydroxycut!" is an example of a real life testimonial. This comment has credibility and entices the consumer to want to go out and purchase the product.
  • Individuals used Hydroxycut with diet and exercise and have been remunerated
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  • SUCCESSSTORIES Newsletter coordorig
  • Jessica Knight's Success m58,-138 c65,-164,91,-181,123,-171 l117,-139 c51,-161,56,-69,58,0 l25,0,25,-168
Antonia Gujinovic

Heart and Stroke Foundation of Canada - Homepage - 0 views

    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      This is a Canadian website, but the Heart and Stroke Foundations recognizes that heart disease can affect anyone and that Canada is a multicultural country. So they have included resources in other languages to accommodate more readers. (ethos)
    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      This box of info is an appeal to emotions. Not only is it stating what the #1 killer of women is, but it is listing what women are. Grandmothers, mothers, wives, daughters and sisters. This takes the reader from thinking about a woman in general to making the reader think of their own mother, sister, wife, daughter or grandmother.
    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      The three short words "Make Death Wait" are very impact-full. Just the name of the campaign appeals to the emotions before even knowing what the campaign is about. We all know death is inevitable and that for some it happens sooner than it should. So the thought of making something inevitable wait gives hope.
Cici Sterritt

Virtual Bubblewrap - Pop Now! Pop bubble wrap online - since 1996 - 0 views

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    Stressed? Visit this website and pop virtual bubblewrap ...extremely stressed, click on 'Manic Mode'
J.Randolph Radney

YouTube - Rory Sutherland: Sweat the small stuff - 0 views

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    There is a short video at the end of the main talk. What do you think the connection is between the two?
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    www.ted.com is the original website of this video ... it also offers many other motivational speakers videos
caitlin molson

Googling and Facebooking to a job | Marketplace From American Public Media - 5 views

  • Social media more often seems to be a way to get kicked out of a job -- unseemly photos, an off-color post -- but some job-seekers are using it to land their dream jobs
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Engaging opening sentence.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      I don't particularly like this colour choice here. Perhaps it is a branding artifact?
    • Carly Madsen
       
      Vertical layout works well for this site
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    • Carly Madsen
       
      Nice to have a picture to catch your attention along with a brief sentence to tell you what the article is about.
    • caitlin molson
       
      Is it just me or is anyone else distracted by the amount of advertising here, the actual content is pushed to a third of the page
  • When they Googled themselves, they would see Brownstein's ads asking for a job, and directing them to his website. Total cost of placing the ads? Six dollars
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    Someone in a class recently told me they would like to work at Google. Here's how some people went after the job they wanted.
Todd Scharien

Tricks Tutorials.com - 0 views

    • Todd Scharien
       
      This article relies on humor and knowledge (pathos and logos, respectively) to get its point across. The author of this site as a whole uses these techniques.
    • Todd Scharien
       
      The articles on this website are also not for the slightly faint-of-heart. Crude language and textual imagery lies ahead.
  • Also, pour it all over yourself so you're all slick... Mr. Slick... Slick... :)
  • Mrs. Houser's Food Science class 2002 Local Dietician sources
    • Todd Scharien
       
      Unfortunately these cannot be verified directly through the author, but a quick Google search should confirm the information presented.
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  • Once you convert you'll never go back. The feel is as incredible as the money you save! Be HARDCORE! Drink WATER!
    • Todd Scharien
       
      It's true.
  • You're gay
    • Todd Scharien
       
      The author could definitely get the same point across without the slang.
  • Obviously joint pain is the anti-christ of a trickster...
  • Lack of water is the #1 cause of daytime fatigue, causing you too feel sluggish
    • Todd Scharien
       
      Another application of logos.
  • Let's start with my own experiences.
    • Todd Scharien
       
      An application of pathos.
keeley powers

The Vegan Society - 2 views

This website had all of the rhetorical elements, and Diigo was so helpful for organization!

http:__www.vegansociety.com

started by keeley powers on 04 Dec 10 no follow-up yet
Travis Orange

Nike Overview - 6 views

The website page I looked at seemed to have many aspects of the rhetorical triangle so I sticky noted the heck out of it... http://diigo.com/0dzze

education social

started by Travis Orange on 04 Dec 10 no follow-up yet
romie_mui

Exercise and Physical Fitness: MedlinePlus - 2 views

  • Exercise and Physical Fitness
    • romie_mui
       
      Clear Topic
    • romie_mui
       
      This website talks about how could physical exercise maintain a healthy lifestyle, there are lots of evidence articles support it.
  • Most adults need at least 30 minutes of moderate physical activity at least five days per week.
    • romie_mui
       
      useful information, we should be aware and start our healthy lifestyle
J.Randolph Radney

How To Reduce Stress With Slow Breathing With Music - 1 views

  • The connection between our breathing and our emotions has been known since the earliest days of our ancestors. So have the links between our respiratory, circulatory and nervous systems.
    • salma moideen
       
      Ethos: this is ethos,since the breathing affects certain aspects of health and well being which has been known since the days of our ancestors.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      No, ethos would be an appeal to the credibility of the author.
  • Our response to music is universal. And relaxing to music is by no means just a matter of mood and "feel-good-factor". Recent research shows that external rhythms - such as music - do influence internal rhythms.
    • salma moideen
       
      Logos: This logically shows that music is just not for relaxing but also the research proves that the music's external rhythm influence the internal rhythm.
  • In its role as a neurotransmitter in the brain it relays our thoughts and feelings such as joy, sadness, pain... and stress! It repairs our cells and fights infection and tumours to help us live longer and healthier... It can increase blood flow by up to 200%, which has numerous health benefits. Not least among them, it allows men to produce erections and heightens sexual stimulation for both sexes. The principle action of Viagra, by the way, is to raise nitric oxide levels... Increasing blood flow also improves the circulatory system by keeping blood vessels clear of plaque and other harmful build-up... Nitric oxide plays a major role in maintaining healthy blood pressure by signalling blood vessels to expand!
    • salma moideen
       
      Pathos : this is pathos, since these actions helps to reduce stress and anxiety which influences the readers greatly.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      No; rather, I think you are confusing the rhetorical aim of the author with the practical value of the product.
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    • salma moideen
       
      The website needs to be more attractive to bring attention since it looks very simple and ordinary.
J.Randolph Radney

How To Write A Press Release - Best Practices For Writing Killer Press Releases | Searc... - 1 views

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    Here is a blog about media writing; you may find it useful on the job.
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