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Hiliary Leon

Child Care Network - Free Child Care Search for Canadian Parents Helping Find Local Day... - 1 views

www.childcarenetwork.ca

child network free search canadian parents find daycare local helping business education social Communication

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    • Hiliary Leon
      Hiliary Leon on 25 Feb 12
       
      This photo gives me a sense of family and friendliness.
  • Welcome
  • Join us in our effort to become Canada's #1 child care resource.
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  • Benefits for Parents Free access to national daycare listings Basic and advanced searching capabilities make it easy tofind daycare that meets your needs Ability to compare multiple daycares simultaneously Simple to use format with quick results Useful links on child care expenses and interviewing daycares One-stop resource for finding child care.
  • Benefits for Child Care Providers Personalized web page Printable business cards Newspaper and online advertising Increased client exposure Cost effective marketing Professional means of business promotions No more classified ads or homemade signs
    • Hiliary Leon
      Hiliary Leon on 25 Feb 12
       
      This website is very simple and easy for the read to find what they are reading. 
  • online
  • Hiliary Leon on 16 Feb 12
     
    Welcome to ChildCareNetwork.ca - Canada's newest resource for finding child care. Our company is dedicated to helping child care providers market their services while offering parents a fast, free, and easy resource for finding local child care. We offer both groups many benefits.
anonymous

Starbucks Coffee Company - 1 views

www.starbucks.com

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trehbein

Peace River Coal | Peace River Coal Home Page - 0 views

www.peacerivercoal.com

coal peace river mining bc

shared by trehbein on 07 Mar 11 - No Cached
  • Peace River Coal Inc., a producer of high-quality metallurgical coal for export, from Canada is jointly owned by Anglo American plc, Hillsborough Resources Ltd., and NEMI Northern Energy and Mining Inc. Anglo American holds a 74% interest in Peace River Coal. Peace River Coal owns substantial coal properties in the Peace River region of northeast British Columbia.
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      This paragraph seems a bit jumbled. Because it's the first text people read, it may be more beneficial to state something more general and audience-friendly. What is written here seems a bit technical to jump into right off the start. Or, instead of having it all in one paragraph, it could be split into bullet points for easier reading.
  •  local and other partners
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      'Local and others' seems very vague. Something like 'With the help of our local and global partners,' may be more straightforward. It almost seems like using 'others' could be misinterpreted for the reader to think that the company is hiding something about their partners.
  • Click here to view our photo gallery.
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Good lead-in to the photo gallery; straightforward and simple.
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  • Privacy Policy | Terms & Conditions
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Good use of the bottom of the page to give links to other parts of the site. Helps make the page look 'complete'.
  • trehbein on 07 Mar 11
     
    My Rhetorical Analysis Markup (Peace River Coal website)
  • trehbein on 07 Mar 11
     
    Tammy's Rhetorical Analysis Markup (Peace River Coal website)
Taylor Laird

Zero Waste | RECYCLING COUNCIL OF BRITISH COLUMBIA - 4 views

rcbc.bc.ca/zero-waste

shared by Taylor Laird on 16 Feb 12 - No Cached
  • Zero Waste means linking communities, businesses and industries so that one's waste becomes another’s feedstock. It means preventing pollution at its source. It means new local jobs in communities throughout British Columbia
  • Zero Waste is a goal that is ethical, economical, efficient and visionary
  • Zero Waste will eliminate all discharges to land, water or air that are a threat to planetary, human, animal or plant health
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    • Taylor Laird
      Taylor Laird on 16 Feb 12
       
      Blue-ethos Green-pathos and Pink-logos
    • Taylor Laird
      Taylor Laird on 16 Feb 12
       
      Colors of website are earthy. Background is white-indicates cleanliness. Colors are green like grass and trees, text is green and blue (like water) very environmental feel to it. Picture up top clean straight forward. Shows environment.
    • Mae Abano
      Mae Abano on 17 Feb 12
       
      Overall website layout is simple and accessible. Colors of different shades of green and blue are chosen to represent the colors of the Earth. The information you need to know are grouped into categories, and phone numbers are displayed at top. Font size and font text are simple as it represents the environment of simplicity and cleanliness. The logo, looks like a part of a continent of the globe with recycling logo in the middle, same colors of green,blue and white are also used.
  • The Cities of Vancouver, Richmond, Burnaby, New Westminster, Port Coquitlam, Coquitlam, and Port Moody have already implemented residential organics collection programs.
  • The strategy is broad-based, targeting increased materials efficiencies in businesses, local economic development through "resource recovery" and public policy renewal to facilitate the development of a zero waste economy
  • RDN banned commercial food waste from the landfill. A commercial food waste diversion program involving businesses and organizations diverts more than 6,000 tonnes of food waste and organic compostables annually from the landfill.
lindsay jmaiff

Fulton and Company, Kamloops law firm - 1 views

www.fultonco.com/community.htm

shared by lindsay jmaiff on 16 Feb 12 - No Cached
  • Our lawyers and staff continue to give back to the community by way of corporate sponsorships and personal involvement in local charity groups. Our firm has monthly Jeans Days and regularly fields teams to support local fundraising initiatives. We are proud to support the following events and charitable organizations:
    • lindsay jmaiff
      lindsay jmaiff on 16 Feb 12
       
      brings light to charity and fundraising, pathos, emotion, they're good people
Matthew Wallace

Oil Companies Should Put Their Profits to Good Use | We Agree | Chevron - 0 views

www.chevron.com/weagree

oil companies

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    • Matthew Wallace
      Matthew Wallace on 12 Mar 11
       
      Video The video shows staff at Chevron think that things need to be done about the big issues too. They show that they are on top of these issues by cleverly pairing the issue posed by the "average building contractor" with the solution that Chevron is putting theirprofits to good use. They are "pumping $21 billion into local economies, small business, and communities.
  • Emily, a Chevron engineer, and Joseph, a building contractor, agree on the need for oil companies to reinvest profits into jobs and growth.
    • Matthew Wallace
      Matthew Wallace on 12 Mar 11
       
      Parallelism. Shows a Chevron engineer and an "average building contracter" talking and AGREEING on the same issue.
  • Some say our profits are big, but our investments are equally big, too. So, yes, we do put our profits to good use.
    • Matthew Wallace
      Matthew Wallace on 12 Mar 11
       
      Counterpoints These two sentences address the fact that they do make large profits, but then dispell them by adding that their investments are just as large.
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  • Related Topics Chevron Creates Jobs in Kazakhstan How We Work With Local Suppliers Our Agbami Field Is One of Nigeria's Largest What It Took to Build Our Blind Faith Platform
    • Matthew Wallace
      Matthew Wallace on 12 Mar 11
       
      More links to other topics that chevron is doing things about.
  • Yes, we make profits doing it. I'm grateful for that. That's how we reinvest in future energy supplies. It takes a lot of money to find and produce the energy a growing economy needs.
    • Matthew Wallace
      Matthew Wallace on 12 Mar 11
       
      Gives reasoning for why they need to make the profits they do.
  • Energy helps create jobs.
    • Matthew Wallace
      Matthew Wallace on 12 Mar 11
       
      Non verbal The clean white backround looks professional, and it really makes the bright red text all pertaining to the agreement that current issues need solutions.
  • We also invest in people and provide thousands of good-paying jobs.
azizkhaled

About Us: Careers, Job Listings, Job Postings: HSBC Bank Canada - 0 views

www.hsbc.ca/...about-us-home

shared by azizkhaled on 17 Jul 11 - No Cached
    • azizkhaled
      azizkhaled on 17 Jul 11
       
      This slogan that make me respect them always, "The world's local bank" which emphasizes on the world being a one country and it is the local one for the whole world. It is nonnegotiable that it is a well deserved slogan since the bank is expanded to 100 countries. The Ethos is the mean of persuasion that is used claiming the proficiency that is approved by the whole world and the number of countries that are doing business with them. The slogan simply lays four words that appeal the high standard of knowledge, reputation and proficiency.
Mandy Atwal

Northern Trailer :: Community Sponsorship - 0 views

www.northerntrailer.com/communitysponsorship.htm

shared by Mandy Atwal on 05 Mar 12 - No Cached
  • At Northern Trailer, we pride ourselves in taking an active part in the communities we serve. We are supporters of local causes and charitable organizations that help build strong families and healthy communities. We focus our sponsorship into specific community activities that most closely reflect our corporate values and strategies. Our Priorities are to Support: • Safety Awareness • Arts & Culture • Education • Youth Development • Community Initiatives • Sustainable Development • Health and Wellness Programs • Seniors and Persons with Disabilities
    • Mandy Atwal
      Mandy Atwal on 05 Mar 12
       
      Pathos: An emotional appeal that the company is very involved within the community. They give a list of activities that they support that also reflect their company values.
Todd Scharien

Tricks Tutorials.com - 0 views

www.trickstutorials.com/index.php

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    • Todd Scharien
      Todd Scharien on 07 Dec 10
       
      This article relies on humor and knowledge (pathos and logos, respectively) to get its point across. The author of this site as a whole uses these techniques.
    • Todd Scharien
      Todd Scharien on 07 Dec 10
       
      The articles on this website are also not for the slightly faint-of-heart. Crude language and textual imagery lies ahead.
  • Also, pour it all over yourself so you're all slick... Mr. Slick... Slick... :)
  • Mrs. Houser's Food Science class 2002 Local Dietician sources
    • Todd Scharien
      Todd Scharien on 07 Dec 10
       
      Unfortunately these cannot be verified directly through the author, but a quick Google search should confirm the information presented.
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  • Once you convert you'll never go back. The feel is as incredible as the money you save! Be HARDCORE! Drink WATER!
    • Todd Scharien
      Todd Scharien on 07 Dec 10
       
      It's true.
  • You're gay
    • Todd Scharien
      Todd Scharien on 07 Dec 10
       
      The author could definitely get the same point across without the slang.
  • Obviously joint pain is the anti-christ of a trickster...
  • Lack of water is the #1 cause of daytime fatigue, causing you too feel sluggish
    • Todd Scharien
      Todd Scharien on 07 Dec 10
       
      Another application of logos.
  • Let's start with my own experiences.
    • Todd Scharien
      Todd Scharien on 07 Dec 10
       
      An application of pathos.
mazurharrison

WWF - Local to Global Environmental Conservation - 0 views

wwf.ca

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    • mazurharrison
      mazurharrison on 04 Dec 10
       
      This image appeals to our Pathos
    • mazurharrison
      mazurharrison on 04 Dec 10
       
      This title page has little info, though is easily navigatable. more posts on Nov.26 WWF news on Canada's freshwater work.
    • mazurharrison
      mazurharrison on 04 Dec 10
       
      and conservation Tab
  • mazurharrison on 04 Dec 10
     
    World Wildlife Federation Canada
Kim Tuerlings

RONA - 2010 Vancouver - 1 views

www.2010vancouver.rona.ca

First Nations YOUTH Local 2010 vancouver rona

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  • Kim Tuerlings on 20 Feb 10
     
    click on FAB SHOP link This is a personal friend of mine Trevor Wycotte . He is from Williams Lake Indian Band. This commercial willed aired 6 times in February during the 2010 Olympics. I was very Proud of him
J.Randolph Radney

Language Harmonization at Creative Commons - Creative Commons - 0 views

creativecommons.org/...25565

language creative harmonization

shared by J.Randolph Radney on 18 Jan 11 - No Cached
  • One of the most important values at Creative Commons is the usability of our tools. We strive to make all of our tools human-readable, often bridging dissonant vocabularies and frameworks to ensure our tools are compatible and understandable the world over. The challenge of localization is balancing legally sound terminology with culturally palatable translations. Sometimes the terms in which lawyers and courts communicate are unfamiliar or alienating to users outside of the legal profession. Moreover, even within the legal field, there can be a range of opinions about which terms are most appropriate.
trehbein

Peace River Coal | About Us - 0 views

peacerivercoal.com/aboutus.html

shared by trehbein on 07 Mar 11 - No Cached
  • PRC  conducts
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Too many spaces between these words; takes away from credibility.
  • The Peace River coalfield, which extends for 400 km through the northeast part of British Columbia, was first discovered in 1793. Due to lack of infrastructure, mining in the early days was limited to small operations serving local needs. The expansion of steel production in the mid-1960's, led by the Japanese steel mills, stimulated exploration for metallurgical (coking) coal on a global scale. Within ten years the majority of the land within the Peace River coalfield with coal mining potential had been acquired and explored by various mining and oil companies.
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Flashback: This paragraph talks about an earlier time in the company's history in order to give the reader a better understanding of how the company started out, and how it has progressed.
  • Tumbler Ridge has a population of approximately 3,300 people and sits on the edge of a vast, little-explored wilderness. Isolated, yet still accessible, the pristine mountain ridges and valleys around the town abound with rich natural resources and wildlife.
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Imagery: The use of descriptive language to add appeal to the prospect of living in the area near the mine.
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  • Tumbler Ridge was established in the early 1980s to service the Quintette and Bullmoose Mines, which were anticipated to provide 100 million tons of metallurgical coal to Japan in its first 15 years
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Narration: The recounting of an event to give more insight into the company's origins.
trehbein

Peace River Coal | Sustainability - 1 views

peacerivercoal.com/sustainabledevelopment.html

shared by trehbein on 07 Mar 11 - No Cached
  • ways  to
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Too many spaces between.
  • Environmental studies began at Peace River Coal's Trend mine in late 2003 and environmental monitoring continues to this day.  Environmental Assessment (EA) applications are in progress for the Roman Mountain Project which requires the collection of field data which includes air quality, geochemistry, climate and hydrology, groundwater, surface water and sediment, aquatic resources, soils and terrain, land use and tenure and heritage (archeology and traditional land use).
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Exemplification: Here they've used a case-in-point to explain their environmentally responsible practices.
  • Ethically sound practices result in a reduced environmental footprint and provides sustainable benefits to local and global communities alike.
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Cause and effect analysis: The statement suggests that because of ethically sound practices by the company, positive results occur.
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  • benefiting us now, and for generations to come.
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Appeal to pathos: Speaking about the benefits for future generations gives a warm, positive feeling to the reater.
  • Peace River Coal endeavors to minimize negative operational impacts on the surrounding ecology and terrain, affecting not only our present, but the future for generations to come
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Although this sentence is intended to show company responsibility, it could backfire by creating the thought in the reader's mind that the mine processes are damaging to the environment. The use of 'affecting not only our present, but the future for generations to come' is intended to refer to the company's attention to minimizing impacts, but it could easily be interpreted to the negative effects themselves affecting generations for years to come. You could present the information in a more positive instead of a negative light, by saying what the company is doing to minimize operational impacts, without saying that the impacts are negative, and without pairing it directly with the thought that future generations are involved.
trehbein

Peace River Coal | Peace River Coal Home Page - 0 views

peacerivercoal.com

shared by trehbein on 07 Mar 11 - No Cached
  • Peace River Coal Inc., a producer of high-quality metallurgical coal for export, from Canada is jointly owned by Anglo American plc, Hillsborough Resources Ltd., and NEMI Northern Energy and Mining Inc. Anglo American holds a 74% interest in Peace River Coal. Peace River Coal owns substantial coal properties in the Peace River region of northeast British Columbia.
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      It appears one of the main goals through this website is to explain and demonstrate who Peace River Coal's business afilliates are. The names are mentioned a number of times through the website and showing the reader that these names are present seems to be a large part of the website's focus.
  • with the help of local and other partners
    • trehbein
      trehbein on 07 Mar 11
       
      Credibility could be improved by re-wording to avoid saying 'and other partners', because it almost sounds like something is being hidden from the reader with that language, even if nothing is. It takes away slightly from Ethos.
hyram swenson

Taxes | Personal Income Tax | Canada Taxes | Online Income Tax Returns And Planning - H... - 0 views

www.hrblock.ca/index.asp

shared by hyram swenson on 04 Mar 11 - No Cached
  • Our Company
  • Personal TaxesStudent Tax PromoInstant Cash BackDebit Card FAQDebit Card BenefitsSecond LookThe H&R Block AdvantageAudit Assistance / CRA CorrespondanceFiling out of CountryU.S Citizens in CanadaSmall BusinessesBookkeeping and Accounting ServicesCorporate Tax ServicesTax TipsRRSPsDo Your Taxes OnlineHow Does It Work?NETFILE InformationSecurityPaymentOnline Tax FAQDesktop Software qm_create(0,false,0,500,false,false,false,false,false);
    • hyram swenson
      hyram swenson on 04 Mar 11
       
      A really nice feature, instant refund! i would do this if I had simple tax return
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    • hyram swenson
      hyram swenson on 04 Mar 11
       
      Try it for free! who wouldn't but whats the catch?
    • hyram swenson
      hyram swenson on 04 Mar 11
       
      there are lots of good headings and navigation bars to aid user in finding desired info fast
    • hyram swenson
      hyram swenson on 04 Mar 11
       
      the color green is associated with growth, safety, and harmony.
  • With more than 1,100 locations, H&R Block is a member of hundreds of communities across Canada. We believe that strong communities benefit everyone. From our Block Builders program to help lower income Canadians file a tax return to providing free tax advice days to sponsoring world-class athletes, H&R Block Canada believes that supporting local initiatives in communities like yours can make a difference.
    • hyram swenson
      hyram swenson on 04 Mar 11
       
      many people are looking for organizations that invest in there community this could be a powerful marketing tool
    • hyram swenson
      hyram swenson on 08 Mar 11
       
      this is important stuff! the fine print...yikes
    • hyram swenson
      hyram swenson on 08 Mar 11
       
      wow! this is a really cool service. this builds trust because it is not very average for anyone to do anything for anyone in todays world.
Sabina Donnelly

Detox campaign | Greenpeace International - 2 views

www.greenpeace.org/...intro

shared by Sabina Donnelly on 14 Jul 11 - No Cached
  • Many hazardous chemicals can also be transported in our oceans, atmosphere and food chains and accumulate in places far away from their original source. They have been found to build up in the bodies of animals including birds, fish, whales, polar bears and even human breast milk. The problem and the solution are therefore not only a cause of local concern. This is a truly global issue.
    • Sabina Donnelly
      Sabina Donnelly on 14 Jul 11
       
      Again, this is aimed at readers who are far away from where this problem is occurring. It brings the issue close to home and hopefully motivates the reader to action
  • “Just do it”
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  • “Impossible is nothing”
  • “Make the Change”
  • Of these brand owners, one group stood out in particular as the most likely champions of a toxic-free future - the world’s largest sports brands. Not only are these brands self-proclaimed leaders and innovators, but they have the size and influence to work with their suppliers to begin bringing about real change on the ground and eliminate the use and release of these hazardous chemicals.
    • Sabina Donnelly
      Sabina Donnelly on 16 Jul 11
       
      This rhetoric is aimed at Nike and Adidas. Greenpeace uses irony by highlighting these companies' slogans.
  • The alkylphe
  • nols and PFCs found in the samples are a cause for serious concern, as these chemicals are known hormone disruptors and can be hazardous even at very low levels
  • Clean w
  • ter is not only a basic human right - it is the world’s most threatened essential resource
    • Sabina Donnelly
      Sabina Donnelly on 16 Jul 11
       
      Greenpeace has gone to these companies' websites and selected quotes which express their commitment to environmentally friendly practices. This shows the hypocracy of these companies as they advertise green initiatives while they really do not know or control where their supplies come from.
  • 2/12 Play A Greenpeace campaigner takes a sample of yellow-coloured waste water from the discharge pipe at the Youngor Textiles Factory.
  • A Greenpeace campaigner takes a sample of yellow-coloured waste water from the discharge pipe at the Youngor Textiles Factory.
  • Greenpeace
  • A Greenpeace campaigner takes a sample of yellow-coloured waste water from the discharge pipe at the Youngor Textiles Factory
    • Sabina Donnelly
      Sabina Donnelly on 17 Jul 11
       
      This photo and its caption have a lot of impact on the reader. The caption describes discoloured water which can be seen in the collector's sample bottle. Futhermore, the photo shows an odd yellow sludge/waste coming out for the pipe. In the background of the photo, you can see the turbid river water and smoggy air. What is particularily effective is the use of hyperbole. The odd looking sludge is the largest and central object in the photo, dwarfing the person standing next to it.
    • Sabina Donnelly
      Sabina Donnelly on 17 Jul 11
       
      another aspect of visual rhetoric that is used in this photo is accent. Compared to the bleak and grey background, the yellow sludge jumps out from the photo
  • At 6:00pm in the evening, a pipe on the north side of the Youngor International Garments City factory dumps large quantities of foul smelling waste water into the river
    • Sabina Donnelly
      Sabina Donnelly on 17 Jul 11
       
      Photo # 11 in the slide is particularily effective because the subject of the photo is covering his mouth and nose with his hand while looking down at the discoloured redish purple water coming out of the discharge pipe. When we read the caption, we find that he is doing this due to the terrible stench of the water. Both the caption and the subject's reaction in the photo make the experience more real for the reader as we can imagine the experience as if we were there.
  • Wastewater is intended to be treated at the treatment plant.
    • Sabina Donnelly
      Sabina Donnelly on 17 Jul 11
       
      Greenpeace uses irony in the photo and its caption. We see settling ponds of water in a textile factory and learn in the caption that it is supposed to be treated. The irony is that this is for show was chemical analysis of water shows that the water is not treated
  • A Greenpeace campaigner takes a sample of yellow-coloured waste water from the discharge pipe at the Youngor Textiles Factory
    • Sabina Donnelly
      Sabina Donnelly on 17 Jul 11
       
      This photo and its caption have a lot of impact on the reader. The caption describes discoloured water which can be seen in the collector's sample bottle. Futhermore, the photo shows an odd yellow sludge/waste coming out for the pipe. In the background of the photo, you can see the turbid river water and smoggy air. What is particularily effective is the use of hyperbole. The odd looking sludge is the largest and central object in the photo, dwarfing the person standing next to it. Sabina Donnelly 1 minute ago Radney's Business Writing Course another aspect of visual rhetoric that is used in this photo is accent. Compared to the bleak and grey background, the yellow sludge jumps out from the photo
Garrett Paluck

League of Legends - Free Online Game | LoL - League of Legends - 2 views

www.leagueoflegends.com

rhetoric

shared by Garrett Paluck on 13 Jul 11 - Cached
    • Garrett Paluck
      Garrett Paluck on 13 Jul 11
       
      The first thing you notice when you come to this website is the big red button labeled ``Play For Free`` It`s big,bright, in your face, and it tries to send a message. (Text)
    • Garrett Paluck
      Garrett Paluck on 14 Jul 11
       
      The background image is eye catching. A red woman and a blue entity are fighting on a cliffside, it shows wonder and mystery.
    • Garrett Paluck
      Garrett Paluck on 14 Jul 11
       
      non-text
    • Garrett Paluck
      Garrett Paluck on 15 Jul 11
       
      The news board show alternating images of new/important information. Each new concept is supported by an attractive picture which makes people want to look into what the images mean.
    • Garrett Paluck
      Garrett Paluck on 15 Jul 11
       
      non-text
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    • Garrett Paluck
      Garrett Paluck on 15 Jul 11
       
      The logo itself is pretty eye catching. Gold Letters against a grayish black background look pretty appealing. On top of that, the logo takes up lots of space; they are trying to make people remember it. (non-text)
    • Garrett Paluck
      Garrett Paluck on 15 Jul 11
       
      The text that reads "Join Riot Games" is big, noticeable, and written weird. This could just be an add to attract new employees, but I think it's also a marketing tool. This add makes this company seem more like a locally owned business, rather than a big corporate giant, making people feel more comfortable around it. (text)
    • Garrett Paluck
      Garrett Paluck on 15 Jul 11
       
      The tabs on this website are simple to read, easy to find, and link people to the relevant part of the website. (text)
    • Garrett Paluck
      Garrett Paluck on 15 Jul 11
       
      These tabs will link people to relevant in game content. Each tab is included with an interesting picture. (text/non-text)
    • Garrett Paluck
      Garrett Paluck on 15 Jul 11
       
      These links are feature interesting looking characters to appeal to people to click on them. By doing so (linking to their facebook, twitter, or youtube) they will be informed about the game's future news and be inticed to return. (text/non-text)
azizkhaled

Personal and Business Banking | Moving to Canada: HSBC Bank Canada - 0 views

www.hsbc.ca/home

shared by azizkhaled on 17 Jul 11 - No Cached
    • azizkhaled
      azizkhaled on 17 Jul 11
       
      Just under their slogan, the sentence starts with "We are committed to meet your needs locally". And it ended with "... experience and expertise that spans the globe". Of course this is repeating their slogan in a more detail yet its not a long introductory to deliver their message to their clients. It said what it needed to say to appeal to customers by ethos.
    • J.Randolph Radney
      J.Randolph Radney on 21 Jul 11
       
      This is a good start, but I would expect more commentary on the page than just one note.
Khalid Alomar

Willis eTech Web Sites | Web Site SEO | Social Media | Photography | Video - 1 views

www.willisetech.ca/index.php

shared by Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11 - No Cached
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      Their logo is good, simple, and uses only two colors which is a good example of logo practice. However, the way it presents this logo in the website made it as a new logo because of the big line behind it and the clip-arts a long with it. 
  • Rate this item 1 2 3 4 5 (0 votes)
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      there is no point of having rate this item in the home page of the website that presenting the company objectives. 
  • "Your Partner in Promotion"
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      Liked their slogan. 
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  • Social Media Twitter Sign UpFaceBook Sign UpYou Tube Sign UpLinkedIn Sign UpTwellow Sign UpDownload TweetdeckMashableSocial Media ExaminerSendible Tweet Scheduler
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      A bad way of presenting the social website with the "Sign Up" along with it! and why they referee to these social website if they well known website?
  • Let's Talk About... content management facebook Internet Marketing Media social social media social media circle social media training tool kit Training training Tweetdeck tweetdeck Tweetdeck Training twellow twitter web design web sites youtube
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      A good way of using the trends that's shows the most using words in Willis eTech website pages.
  • Main Menu HOMECONTACT USLATEST NEWSSite MapPrivacy Statement
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      should be up in the page not in the middle. 
  • Read 7505 times | Like this? Tweet it to your followers! Social sharing Add to Google Buzz Add to Facebook Add to Delicious Digg this Add to Reddit Add to StumbleUpon Add to MySpace Add to Technorati
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      uses the social networks tools is indeed a good way of communicating and distributing their website. 
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      use social networks icons and pictures is more effective than text and it gets the attention of the person faster than usual. Willis eTech website did a good job on it here. 
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      The feedback button one of the good practice to do in website that want to interactive with the visitors. 
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      the quality of the image is not that good which needs some improvements. 
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      The usability buttons presented here in well shape. 
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 17 Jul 11
       
      The website has used this picture (the handshake) to welcome their visitors to their website, though I wanted it to be larger than now.
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 18 Jul 11
       
      the background white color of this home page should be separate with a different color than the middle thread or the main topic we could call it. 
    • Khalid Alomar
      Khalid Alomar on 18 Jul 11
       
      Having a twitter block streaming into the website will increase the followers in twitter as well as having a connection between Wills eTech website and twitter. 
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