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Alexander Condon

A Conservative Choice for President | Michele Bachmann for President | MicheleBachmann.com - 0 views

  • Michele wants government to make the kind of serious spending decisions that many families and small businesses have been forced to make.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Here she is aligning herself with the middle-class which could serve to distinguish her from some of the other Republican candidates who have been critiqued for over-looking the middle-class. It also alludes to her dissatisfaction with recent government spending and bailout packages. She is siding with the everyday American who protested the extreme government spending amid the recession. Provides pathos as it shows her sense of financial responsibility and similarity with everyday Americans.
  • Michele is a leading advocate for tax reform, a staunch opponent of wasteful government spending, and a strong proponent of adherence to the Constitution, as intended by the Founding Fathers.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The sentence is elegantly written and effectively uses parallel structure which appeals to the audience's logic. The sentence concludes with a reference to the Founding Fathers which rouses nostalgia for the beginning of the United States. This nostalgia can be very affective as many Americans (especially Republicans) feel that government was best under the Founding Fathers. The Founding Fathers personify all that is great about being American-independence, democracy and strength. Founding Fathers also alludes to the joyous celebration of the Fourth of July (Independence Day) which provokes pathos.There is also a simile here as she compares herself to the Founding Fathers.
  • She is also a defender of the unborn and staunchly stands for religious liberties.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      As " a defender of the unborn", Bachmann positions herself as pro-life. The phrase is a euphemism as it is a nicer way of saying against abortion. The second part of the sentence "staunchly stands for religious liberties" is likely a second euphemism stating her siding with the bible on topics such as same-sex marriage. Both stances develop ethos especially amongst Republicans and may also appeal to emotion as the topics are deeply personal.
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  • In July 2010, Michele hosted the first Tea Party Caucus meeting. She is seen as a champion of Tea Party values
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Here she positions herself of a leader of the Tea Party which adds considerable credibility (ethos) to her candidacy because of the Tea Party's considerable resources and growing popularity. It is important for Bachmann to identify herself as a leader as that is what people are voting for. Also note how the term "champion" is consistent with the website's continued emphasis on winning.
  • Michele and Marcus have five children, Lucas, Harrison, Elisa, Caroline, and Sophia. In addition, the Bachmann family has opened their home to 23 foster children
    • Alexander Condon
       
      This sentence develops both ethos and pathos. Ethos as she is seen more reputable and trustworthy by having such a large and seemingly happy family. The main purpose here is pathos as she depicts herself as a loving and devoted humanitarian. She is portrayed here as a mother figure, someone responsible that can look after a large and diverse household (a metaphor for the United States?).This last statement develops a paradox between her portrayal throughout the passage as a tough candidate like one of the Founding Fathers, and her portrayal as a loving, responsible mother who can take care of the nation. Very Interesting.
  • Michele is the first Republican woman to be elected to the U.S. House of Representatives from Minnesota
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Interestingly, this is the only line in the passage that directly points to Bachmann's uniqueness as a female candidate. Potential supporters who were unsure whether she could become the first female president will be reinforced by her being the first Republican elected to the House of Representatives from Minnesota. It achieves ethos as she becomes a more credible candidate as well as logos because "if she was the first woman from Minnesota than why can't she be the first woman president". For the female audience, it may also be pathos as she is seen as breaking down barriers to womens freedom.
  • Michele Bachmann is running for president to bring a new voice to the White House
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The main use of rhetoric in Bachmann's opening line is "bring a new voice to the White House". The new voice rhetoric is very common among presidential candidates as it is a metaphor for change. Indirectly this new voice represents the possibility of correcting the current governmental problems. It appeals mostly to ethos as it could inspire hope in the audience. 
  • She recognized the need for quality schools and subsequently started a charter school for at-­‐risk kids in Minnesota.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The sentence develops ethos and pathos in the audience. Ethos as her character and reputation is bolstered by her emphasis on education. Pathos as she highlights having started a school for at-risk kids; specifying "at-risk kids" adds emotion to the description and depicts her as empathetic. 
  • Serving on the Intelligence Committee, she has consistently advocated peace through strength to ensure America's national security. She has proudly taken a vow to support and defend the Constitution of the United States against all enemies, foreign and domestic.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Here she states her stance on foreign policy. She successfully aligns herself with the Americans who seek an end to the War in Afghanistan by stating that "she has consistently advocated peace". Also she answers the critics who think she won't be tough enough by saying that "she has proudly taken a vow to support and defend the Constitution of the United States against all enemies". She shows experience and ability by having served on the Intelligence Committee (logos). "Taking a vow" appeals to emotion as it carries the connotative meaning of commitment, dedication, and marriage. 
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The video introduction is a very persuasive addition to the website for several reasons:1. It provides a quick synopsis of the website that young voters and those pressed for time will greatly appreciate.2. Logos: She emphasizes having already been successful as a congresswoman. Describes herself as a hard-worker. Also note the attention to detail in having the message exactly one minute long.3. Ethos: She begins by establishing herself as an official candidate having done all the paperwork. Seems trustworthy through eye contact and fluent speech.4. Pathos:Talks about "taking your voice" to the White House and being a "winning team". Concludes by passionately telling viewers that "we can do this".
    • Alexander Condon
       
      It's worth noting that she's wearing the exact same outfit from the picture in the top. This aspect is puzzles me, perhaps it's done to depict her as simple and relatable to the everyday American. Very interesting. 
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Argument/PurposeThe website is intended to convince Republican delegates and all other voting-age American citizens that Michele Bachmann should become the next US President and that they should vote for her.  Audience: The audience is voting-age Americans. It is not intended for Canadians or audiences from any other nationalities.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The picture depicts Bachmann as patriotic (the flag on her collar), conservative (seems to be conservatively dressed), and happy (the big smile-ethos). It's interesting that she's not looking at the camera but rather up and to the side. Might have been done because she looks better from this angle, or potentially to show her as ambitious and aspiring. -also note her husband's smiling picture located underneath the video. He is well-dressed (ethos) and again smiling (pathos). Showing that she's married also adds to her candidacy especially among the more conservative Republicans.  
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Bachmann logo found here at the top as well as at the very bottom serves to authenticate the document. It's symbolic of an official stamp or even the presidential seal. Of note are the stars (again the allusion to success and winning, as well as patriotic); the red, white, and blue classic American colours; and the red and white stripes through the 'H' in Bachmann which allude to the American flag. The authenticity of the stamp appeals to the logic (logos) of the viewer as well as adding to Bachmann's credibility (ethos). The patriotic symbolism appeals to the strong patriotic emotions of the visitors. 
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The page is entitled "A Conservative Choice for President | Michele Bachmann for President". It is significant because Michele is a Republican candidate and the party is built on conservatism. She is evoking ethos as stressing herself as a "Conservative Choice" establishes her as a good fit for the party. 
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The page exhibits a red, white, and blue theme. These symbolic American colours are used to evoke both pathos and ethos in visitors. Pathos as the colours appeal to emotions by giving American's a comforting patriotic feeling. Ethos as the colours help develop Bachmann's character as patriotic, loyal, and trust worthy. The colours also make it nice to read as they provide visual continuity.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      also of note are the American flags hanging down from both sides which could be metaphoric of the hanging flags during the presidential inauguration
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Notice how she puts social media options: email, texting, facebook, right at the top of the page where they will be seen by most visitors. This increases the accessibility to her site and updates and will be welcomed by younger voters especially. It also shows her as technically savvy and in-touch with the latest in technology (ethos).  
    • Alexander Condon
       
      It's interesting the attention being payed to social media in the wake of Obama being so effective using these tools in the last election
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Another purpose of the site is to bring in donations from supporters to fund her campaigning. Notice how the donate button is coloured red so to stand out and draw attention. The red colour actually makes the audience want to click it, especially as it stands out from the other white tabs. It's that red button that we all want to press.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Pictures of Bachmann speaking with people in the community are persuasive by developing logos, ethos, and pathos. Logos: seeing her speaking with seemingly everyday people adds support to her claims of being "the voice of the people". Ethos: the pictures make her appear more trustworthy and reputable. especially the picture of her shaking a woman's handPathos: She is again smiling in the pictures which evokes happiness. She is also photographed speaking with hand gestures which shows passion. 
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Notice the applauding crowd in the background; the viewer assumes that the crowd is applauding for Bachmann and this provokes ethos as her credibility is enhanced by the image. It is also potentially pathos as it can be seen as a metaphoric image of a crowd during a (presidential) victory speech. The symbolic image of the victory speech evokes happy emotions of winning; relate it back to the video where she calls it "a winning team".
    • Alexander Condon
       
      the audience almost seems to be looking up and towards the webpage, as if applauding Bachmann's message
  • she spent five years as a federal tax litigation attorney, working on hundreds of civil and criminal cases. That experience solidified her strong support for efforts to simplify the Tax Code and reduce tax burdens on family and small business budgets.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Here she documents her considerable experience with the tax system (logos). It serves to back her claims at being able to reform the tax system. Also we again see her aligning with the middle-class.
Antonia Gujinovic

Heart and Stroke Foundation - Healthy Living - 1 views

    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      This banner is successful in reminding the reader of current fund-raising events, programs and important information. It is successful because it remains constant on all pages/sections of the entire Heart and Stroke website.
    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      This "donate now" button is also something that stays constant in all sections of the website. The yellow colour nicely contrasts with the red background to draw more attention to it.  The only downside of this "donate now" button is the size. A bigger size would draw more attention to it. Thus potentially getting more donations.
    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      There is a 'Home' link on all pages to allow a reader to easily access the home page incase they get lost or find themselves in a spot they don't need to be.
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    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      The side bar is a great way of keeping important sections of the website always in the readers view. The Canvass Online box is something that stays on top as the most important item on all pages. The consistency and repetitiveness of the side bar on all sections of the web site is a great way of getting more people to sign up. Also the colour scheme again is important here. It sticks to the red colour representing heart health.
    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      This passage shows an appeal to ethos and logos. In the first sentence (ethos) it mentions that experts have reviewed the section. The second sentence (logos) states that the information is based on scientific evidence.
  • based on scientific evidence
  • experts
    • Antonia Gujinovic
       
      The organization of the topics are well done. The colour red is chosen to emphasize the heart health theme. The topics are sub-categorized alphabetically making it user-friendly and logically organized.
Sabina Donnelly

Detox campaign | Greenpeace International - 2 views

  • Many hazardous chemicals can also be transported in our oceans, atmosphere and food chains and accumulate in places far away from their original source. They have been found to build up in the bodies of animals including birds, fish, whales, polar bears and even human breast milk. The problem and the solution are therefore not only a cause of local concern. This is a truly global issue.
    • Sabina Donnelly
       
      Again, this is aimed at readers who are far away from where this problem is occurring. It brings the issue close to home and hopefully motivates the reader to action
  • “Just do it”
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  • “Impossible is nothing”
  • “Make the Change”
  • Of these brand owners, one group stood out in particular as the most likely champions of a toxic-free future - the world’s largest sports brands. Not only are these brands self-proclaimed leaders and innovators, but they have the size and influence to work with their suppliers to begin bringing about real change on the ground and eliminate the use and release of these hazardous chemicals.
    • Sabina Donnelly
       
      This rhetoric is aimed at Nike and Adidas. Greenpeace uses irony by highlighting these companies' slogans.
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  • nols and PFCs found in the samples are a cause for serious concern, as these chemicals are known hormone disruptors and can be hazardous even at very low levels
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  • ter is not only a basic human right - it is the world’s most threatened essential resource
    • Sabina Donnelly
       
      Greenpeace has gone to these companies' websites and selected quotes which express their commitment to environmentally friendly practices. This shows the hypocracy of these companies as they advertise green initiatives while they really do not know or control where their supplies come from.
  • 2/12 Play A Greenpeace campaigner takes a sample of yellow-coloured waste water from the discharge pipe at the Youngor Textiles Factory.
  • A Greenpeace campaigner takes a sample of yellow-coloured waste water from the discharge pipe at the Youngor Textiles Factory.
  • Greenpeace
  • A Greenpeace campaigner takes a sample of yellow-coloured waste water from the discharge pipe at the Youngor Textiles Factory
    • Sabina Donnelly
       
      This photo and its caption have a lot of impact on the reader. The caption describes discoloured water which can be seen in the collector's sample bottle. Futhermore, the photo shows an odd yellow sludge/waste coming out for the pipe. In the background of the photo, you can see the turbid river water and smoggy air. What is particularily effective is the use of hyperbole. The odd looking sludge is the largest and central object in the photo, dwarfing the person standing next to it.
    • Sabina Donnelly
       
      another aspect of visual rhetoric that is used in this photo is accent. Compared to the bleak and grey background, the yellow sludge jumps out from the photo
  • At 6:00pm in the evening, a pipe on the north side of the Youngor International Garments City factory dumps large quantities of foul smelling waste water into the river
    • Sabina Donnelly
       
      Photo # 11 in the slide is particularily effective because the subject of the photo is covering his mouth and nose with his hand while looking down at the discoloured redish purple water coming out of the discharge pipe. When we read the caption, we find that he is doing this due to the terrible stench of the water. Both the caption and the subject's reaction in the photo make the experience more real for the reader as we can imagine the experience as if we were there.
  • Wastewater is intended to be treated at the treatment plant.
    • Sabina Donnelly
       
      Greenpeace uses irony in the photo and its caption. We see settling ponds of water in a textile factory and learn in the caption that it is supposed to be treated. The irony is that this is for show was chemical analysis of water shows that the water is not treated
  • A Greenpeace campaigner takes a sample of yellow-coloured waste water from the discharge pipe at the Youngor Textiles Factory
    • Sabina Donnelly
       
      This photo and its caption have a lot of impact on the reader. The caption describes discoloured water which can be seen in the collector's sample bottle. Futhermore, the photo shows an odd yellow sludge/waste coming out for the pipe. In the background of the photo, you can see the turbid river water and smoggy air. What is particularily effective is the use of hyperbole. The odd looking sludge is the largest and central object in the photo, dwarfing the person standing next to it. Sabina Donnelly 1 minute ago Radney's Business Writing Course another aspect of visual rhetoric that is used in this photo is accent. Compared to the bleak and grey background, the yellow sludge jumps out from the photo
Hiliary Leon

Karma Wilson - author of Bear Snores On and other children's books - 1 views

    • Hiliary Leon
       
      The colour Karma has chosen for her background and themed colour of the website is brownish-red. Brown meaning friendship and reliability and red use most commonly use to catch the attention of the eye. The colour used on this page is eye catching and also sending a new friendly vibe out as if you would like to explore the website more.   
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      There is a display of a big photo of her characters from all of her books, so the reader are getting to know who Karma's characters are without even realizing the reader knows it. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      Facebook link to connect Karma with her fans and they can ask her question and comments on Facebook.  
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  • features for teachers
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      The link for teacher's resource is a really great link she has created resource for most of her books this includes ways educators can use the books in the centres and how it can be use effectively.
  •  karma’s blog
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      another form of communication between reader and the author, Karma
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    Welcome to the world of Karma Wilson, Children's Book Author
Jordan Turgeon

Kinect - Xbox.com - 2 views

shared by Jordan Turgeon on 23 Nov 10 - No Cached
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Easily understandable heading list of different sections of the web-site
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Videos provide an insight towards how the product is used. Also, it promotes a fun factor for various ages and families alike
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Similar heading style that directs people to specific and well-identified areas. The added colours makes them easily distinguishable
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    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Lots of visuals which help the reader further understand the product without the need for large amounts of text
  • You are the controller. No gadgets, no gizmos, just you!
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Strong statement and direct. States exactly what the product does up front
  • Kinect brings games and entertainment to life in extraordinary new ways without using a controller. Imagine controlling movies and music with the wave of a hand or the sound of your voice. With Kinect, technology evaporates, letting the natural magic in all of us shine.
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Gives a small description of the product in text. It supports the given images by providing meaning to what the people are actually doing. It's simple and short so people will take the time to read or skim it
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Clever use of drop down menus. Prevents unnecessary clutter
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Neat features; however, they should be placed on another page for those who are interested. All these do is slow the page down and provide distractions
  • Controller-free gaming means full body play. Kinect responds to how you move. So if you have to kick, then kick. If you have to jump, then jump. You already know how to play. All you have to do now is to get off the couch.
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Generally points towards the involvement of a form of physical activity - something that is an issue today
  • It's All About You Once you wave your hand to activate the sensor, your Kinect will be able to recognize you and access your Avatar. Then you’ll be able to jump in and out of different games, and show off and share your moves.
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Gives a personalized image of what the product actually does and is supported with the given picture. This implies you are in control
  • Endless Entertainment Enjoy HD movies, music and sports through Xbox LIVE without any extra accessories. Just use a wave of your hand or the sound of your voice to enjoy 3,500 games on ESPN, HD movies through Zune, streaming music from Last.fm.
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Adds persuasive appeal by commenting that almost anything you'd want can be accessed from one common place using this device
  • Something For Everyone Whether you’re a gamer or not, anyone can play and have a blast. And with advanced parental controls and movies for the family, Kinect promises a gaming experience that’s safe, secure and fun for everyone.
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      This statement argues that this product is good for anyone, and not just gamers. The whole family can have fun and enjoy
  • You're Ready to Play Easy to use and instantly fun, Kinect gets everyone off the couch and moving, laughing and cheering. See a ball? Kick it. Want to join a friend in the fun? Simply jump in.
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      creates appeal using ease of use and fun as a basis
  • Games For Everyone
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Repetition that increases the message that this product is fit for anyone
  • More Than Just Games
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Further repetition - lets people know again that you can do more than just game with this product
  • Games Anyone Can Enjoy Kinect™ for Xbox 360® has a collection of games to suit any style of play. And they're designed for full body play, so each one is as unique as the person playing them. Yep, that means you.
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      More repetition aimed at diverse levels of enjoyment and uniqueness. It's different for everyone
  • Xbox 360 and Xbox LIVE offer more than just games With Xbox LIVE, whole world of extraordinary entertainment experiences await, including music, movies, Facebook and more.
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Again re-iterates the other possibilities this product offers
  • *Media content sold separately. Zune music streaming requires an Xbox LIVE Gold membership and a Zune Pass subscription. Live sports and highlights from ESPN on Xbox LIVE requires an Xbox LIVE Gold membership and and ESPN3.com affiliated broadband provider and may include affiliate-specific access requirements. See ESPN3.com for providers. **190 MB storage required. ***Download tokens included in marked packages at launch, at participating retailers, while supplies last.  80 MB required to download from Xbox LIVE.
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Necessary information but it's not something they want people to see - smaller fonts and colours that blend in
  • Which Kinect bundle is right for you?
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Statement in large font that attracts the attention of the reader. Makes them think an option is right for them
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Cool design that attracts attention to the center of the page
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Seems like something is missing from this side. And I don't think grey is the best colour for this spot. It conflicts with the happy environment they are creating in the middle section of the page
  • Why Kinect?
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Catches the users attention - they will be attracted to the information that follows
Jovan Gill

what is yoga? types of yoga, videos & more | lululemon athletica - 2 views

shared by Jovan Gill on 03 Dec 10 - No Cached
  • Yoga energizes our bodies and calms our minds.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      This simple statement is very powerful. By claiming that yoga energizes our bodies and clams our minds will appeal to many people, as everyone wants peace of mind and an energized body.
  • yoga quickguide
    • Jovan Gill
       
      A quick and easy description of the different types of yoga is a definite attraction. One doesn't have to read the complete pararaphs below to get small description about the various types of yoga. One can also find out what types they are interested in and then read in further detail about those certain types.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      The video showcases a certain type of yoga, which catches the eye and appeal of those watching. If you watch some of the video you can't help but wonder what it would be like to try antigravity yoga, and how much a hammock could make a diffeerence in your stretching compared to just the sterotypical on the ground yoga.
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  • This practice is very athletic and made up of six vigorous series of postures
    • Jovan Gill
       
      This type of yoga attracts those who are looking for a high intensity workout, and maybe did not expect that yoga could be a very athletic activity.By putting very athletic and vigourous in the same sentence a picture of a tough but appealing activity comes to mind, well appealing for those who want a intense workout.
  • Heads up - humidity is 40% and will knock you over the first time.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      By saying that the humdity will knock you out the first time, the reader knows that this type of yoga is not for those who are looking for a leisurely activity. It attracts those to it by clearly saying "Heads up", which implies an important point that should likely not be missed.
  • By adding heat it is said that classes will help you lose weight, loosen your muscles (by adding increased range of motion) and improve your cardiovascular system.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      By simply adding heat to yoga, so much more is achieved from exercises. Many people do yoga in order to lose weight, and by adding heat that goal can be achieved all the much easier.
  • Don't be surprised if your waving your hands like you just don't care or laughing uncontrollably, this practice is intended to wake up the kundalini energy coiled at the base of your spine while activating chakras (energetic centers in the body), as well as detox the body and mind.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      This paragraph gives a different aspect of yoga that most people don't think about. "Laughing uncontrollably" and "waving your hands like you just don't care" imply a fun and energetic workout, which attracts anyone that wants to have a good time. It's a great thing that kundalini yoga awakens the energy coiled up at the base of your spine. So you get energized and receive a detoxification of the body and mind.
  • Remember: your body is your best guide. You don't have to stick to one kind of yoga, just do what your body needs!
    • Jovan Gill
       
      This sentence relieves any tension or stress one may feel when they are thinking about taking up yoga. It tells the reader that if you don't feel right about doing a certain type of yoga, try a different kind. There is no pressure to keep up with the same type of yoga if your body doesn't feel right doing it. This lessens the anxiety most people feel when they are considering taking up a new activity.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      In this picture a sense of community is felt. The many legs with black yoga pants on top of the colourful yoga mats with a sunset in the background give a sense of happiness and belonging. Everyone is doing the same pose which shows that anyone can do yoga. Since only legs are shown and no faces or bodies, it implies that it doesn't matter what race, age, sex or athletic ability you are, anyone can participate in yoga and become a part of a community while getting healthier.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      In this picture the bright colours of the woman's clothing and the prop that is helping her with her yoga poses immediately grabs the attention of the reader. Her closed eyes imply a relaxed state, which shows that props help enhance a peace of mind and serenity.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      The lush green field with the three people doing a sun salutation makes most people want to be there and do yoga. The bright sunlight in the video, with a luscious green field act as a open invitation to those who want to practice yoga. And in this video they are teaching the perfect exercise for that scenery, the sun salutation.
    • Jovan Gill
       
      The light pink/peachish colour brings the readers attention to this quote. On a page that is full of black text on a white background our eyes are drawn to the saying which sticks out like a sore thumb on the web page. Also the swirly type text pulls in the reader, since the rest of the page has a standard text that is easy to read but not nearly as appealing. This quote changes everytime one opens the page, and it is also a part of the lululemon manifesto. These quotes appear on many pages of the site, and they are the attention grabing text on every page.
Brandon Del Debbio

Kamloops Community YMCA-YWCA Home Page - 2 views

  • Did you know that the Y believes that no-one should be denied the opportunity to participate in our programs and facilities? If you need financial assistance, please contact us.
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      Attracts the emotion of equalitity anong people. Offers financial assistance which may appeal to one's logic of reasoning for why they should go since money issues can be worked out.
  • facilities
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      This picture shows customers having a pleasant time on the machines. All the machines in this image are being occupied by customers that seem satisfied. This may appeal to pathos because people may want to work out in an happy environment
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  • Y members!Please help us serve you better by filling out the 2012 Member Satisfaction Survey.
  • Click HERE for more details. All proceeds from both events go to the Y Strong Kids Campaign.
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      Direct information on where money is donated.
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      The "Donate Now" button contains the colors of red and orange. This may be to attract attention. It also may may appeal to ethos in a way since some may want to click on an unique coloured button.
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      The picture with the young child swimming with a parent while in a lifejacket may appeal to pathos, ethos, and logos. Pathos because it appeals to the emotion of fun and saftey of child. Also there is "Tell us about your Y" title under which makes it more personal. Ethos because the guardian and child do seem like real patrons which gives credability.Logos because it makes sense of taking your child for a swim where it is safe and happy.
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  • Y Gold and Y Platinum Members Check HERE for the winner of the Y Gold Y Platinum monthly draw and other exclusive benefits!
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      Notice the letters in gold color. May suggest supreme or top notch.
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      The "YMCA-YWCA Strong Kids Campaign" logo is in red rectangular box with an orange box in the background. Possibly to make it stand out on a white coloured background.
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      The YMCA logo where it says "We Build Strong Kids, Strong Families, Strong Communities" appeals to pathos. It appeals to community pride.
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      On this homepage/dontation page, selected typing is pink. May be pink to help make it stand out but pink may also be seen as a positive color and health.
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      The Y logo is black with a little red. This color scheme may make it memorible.
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      The options/links of other pages are blue. This makes it a different eye catcher than all the different colors.
    • Brandon Del Debbio
       
      This text also appeals to emotion and logos by providing good service by trying to get feedback for improvement
Hiliary Leon

Fetal Alcohol Spectrum Disorder (FASD) - Childhood and Adolescence - Public Health Agen... - 0 views

  • Fetal Alcohol Spectrum Disorder (FASD) is an umbrella term used to describe the range of disabilities that result from prenatal alcohol exposure.
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      This page lays out there information clearly and neat.
  • Fetal Alcohol Spectrum Disorder (FASD) Initiative
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    • Hiliary Leon
       
      The links are in a column easy for the reader to read. The light background colour is dark enough to recognize from the page background colour.   
  • Division of Childhood and
  • Division of Childhood and
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      This title has a dark and more noticeable to catch the readers attention. 
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    Fetal Alcohol Spectrum Disorder (FASD) is an umbrella term used to describe the range of disabilities that result from prenatal alcohol exposure. It is the leading known cause of developmental disability in Canada.
eliza ediger

The Morgan Horse - 2 views

  • Beginning in 1789 from a single stallion, Justin Morgan, today’s Morgan continues to carry the features of its founding sire.
    • eliza ediger
       
      the first paragraph of this site tells a little about the Morgan horse. It also discribes the horse, making it sound like a well built horse, that can be used for any riding type. Finally they end the first paragraph, telling us that once you have one Morgan you would most likely like another.
    • eliza ediger
       
      This paragraph appeals to character, since the first morgan horse was so willing and strong the Morgan today should carry some of the originals personality.
  • A short broad head, small sharp ears, a long laid-back shoulder, deep body and straight, clean-boned legs, make the Morgan the choice of both casual rider and the earnest professional. Once you have owned one Morgan, you will want another.
    • eliza ediger
       
      Black and white picture, show the old roots of the Morgan horse breed, this lets you feel comfortable if someone wants to learn more or thinks of buying a Morgan horse.
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  • Agility, athletic ability and stamina, make the Morgan and ideal working horse - whether it is used for stock horse events, competitive trail riding, or jumping. The in-bred ground-covering trot make the Morgan the first choice as a driving horse, for pleasure or show.
    • eliza ediger
       
      What types of riding the morgan horse is used for and is good at is described in short paragraph, showing how much the horses can do and how useful this horse can be.
  • The Morgan Horse     Athletic, Agile and Active For Sport, Pleasure and Show Alert, Intelligent and Kind
    • eliza ediger
       
      This website has a kind of slogan for the morgan horse, this would apeal to emotion.
    • eliza ediger
       
      The website colours are shades of green and white. The white is useful for contrast between the words and pictures making the words easy to read and pictures standout. Altrough the green looks good on the title banner and menu bar, the green colour around the page seems not to go good with the website.
    • eliza ediger
       
      The title banner has show pictures of morgan horses and some morgans relaxing. This banner's green shade is relaxing and comforting, it makes the Alberta Morgan Horse Club seem like it will be a comfortable environment to learn about the activities of the Morgan horse.
  • And did someone mention Verstatile?
  • The finest and oldest of North America’s light horse breeds     The Horse with a Future     Elegant, Willing and Versatile
    • eliza ediger
       
      Appeals to pathos, by saying that his horse has a future and has had a historicla past.
  • Sales of Alberta-bred Morgan horses throughout Canada and the United States attest to the high quality of stock produced
    • eliza ediger
       
      This appeals to logic beacause if some one is buying a morgan horse to breed or show, they would want a "well-bred" horse. And this site is saying that the horses bred in Alberta are sold in Canada and the United States. So if you want a horses they say you could get a good one from Alberta.
    • eliza ediger
       
      All the pictures of the morgan horse doing different disciplines, shows and pleasure riding shows how the horse is verstatile. These pictures appeal to emotion because the rider who gets a morgan could use them for anything. And logic because they may want a hore that is willing to do whatever discipline they want to pursue.
Hiliary Leon

The Official Eric Carle Web Site - 1 views

    • Hiliary Leon
       
      The background colour is plain white to really make the link options to stand out. When I first opened this page my eye had to adjust, I find it very unusually that Carle has made his back ground colour white. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      Very simple but it could almost be too simple but I believe that is page is more geared towards people who don't go online very often or children. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      Carle displays some of his characters on this page so it really gives a sense of who Carle is.
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    • Hiliary Leon
       
      This icon flashing makes me want to click on this link to explore the icon.
  • Welcome to The Official Eric Carle Web Site
  • Resources
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      the resources isn't really that great of ideas, however, I like that there is a bulletin board exchange is this is where educates or parents can exchange ideas on how to use the stories. 
  • About Eric CarleEric Carle’s BlogNews
Brittny Buchner

Pro Clinical Hydroxycut | Success Stories - 2 views

    • Brittny Buchner
       
      This page has a great visual layout. The colour schemes go well and it is easy to direct your way around the site. The success story candidates all have their names underneath their photos, when you drag the mouse over the name is changes colour to red and to number or pounds lost. It is then easy to click on the name and see more pictures of the model. One criticism is that some of the before and after pictures don't look like the same person. This takes credibility away from Hydroxycut as the potential consumer may feel like they're being lied to.
    • Brittny Buchner
       
      The real life success story models are all happy with big smiles on their faces. This appeals to pathos (appealing to the audiences emotion.) Hydroxycut wants the viewer to envy and want to look like the models, maybe even draw out jelousy in the viewer. This will in turn entice the viewer of the website to purchase Hydroxycut in hopes of being as happy and in shape as the models are.
    • Brittny Buchner
       
      " I Lost 32lbs. with Hydroxycut!" is an example of a real life testimonial. This comment has credibility and entices the consumer to want to go out and purchase the product.
  • Individuals used Hydroxycut with diet and exercise and have been remunerated
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J.Randolph Radney

Seth's Blog: Don't forget about color - 0 views

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    Here's an idea about the use of colour.
jenna swift

Charitable Gift Giving that Makes a Difference | Heifer International - 4 views

    • jenna swift
       
      Heifer Logo is consistently in this location to allow easy access to the home screen from any linked page.
  • Heifer International, 1 World Avenue, Little Rock, AR/USA 72202 (800) 422-0474 | 501(c)(3
    • jenna swift
       
      Company's identification information.
  • Contact Us
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    • jenna swift
       
      The home page is lacking an informative introduction which explains the corporations purpose.
    • jenna swift
       
      This horizontal navigation bar is handy and consistent on each linked page. The titles are informative but could use some colour to make them more obvious.
    • jenna swift
       
      Colour coding each title with its subsequent link would make this website more interesting and increase accessibility.
    • jenna swift
       
      The drop down menus under each title are also very convenient. This means you can find what you are looking for faster, without having to filter through information you don't want. In addition, you can easily move between the linked pages.
    • jenna swift
       
      These changing graphics give the viewer an overall sense of the organizations purpose (if they wait for the five sequences to shuffle through). They provide pictures of hope and a few words of information, seeking to appeal to the viewer's feelings.
    • jenna swift
       
      A few of the messages also persuade the viewer logically and ethically, giving strong facts and personal testimonies.
  • Sign up for Heifer's email updates:
    • jenna swift
       
      This is the organizations way of telling you even more about the charity and reminding you by sending regular e-mail updates. This seems like a good idea for any business.
    • jenna swift
       
      The text is easy to read with lots of whitespace. The black lettering on white background is consistent throughout the website but it's a bit boring.
    • jenna swift
       
      The highlighting techniques are appropriate; hyperlinks are underlined and headings are in red or blue.
    • jenna swift
       
      The site uses pronouns throughout to engage the viewer.
    • jenna swift
       
      The writing style throughout this website is serious yet personal.
    • jenna swift
       
      The corporation's message is obvious: please donate! There are numerous links on this page for the viewer to click to contribute, making it an easy process.
    • jenna swift
       
      Heifer wants to spread the word about their charity. These links provide a way to tell the people you know about this great organization.
  • Contact Us
    • jenna swift
       
      Conventional search bar.
    • jenna swift
       
      This picture is a great use of pathos. Unlike an organization such as World Vision, Heifer influences its viewers by giving positive images of success and happiness.
    • jenna swift
       
      The video does not require an add-on that needs to be downloaded and does not play immediately when this page opens. The video must be clicked on to play it, meaning it won't slow down the site once you navigate here.
  • Story Of Hope
    • jenna swift
       
      The "Contact Us" page does not actually provide information for getting a hold of anyone at Heifer. This link would be more appropriately titled "Questions".
  • Pierre Ferrari, Heifer's CEO, addresses web visitors in this short video.
    • jenna swift
       
      This video provides the website with a strong ethical argument. The CEO informs the viewer that this organization is trustworthy and credible; it has been increasing sustainability in needy villages for 66 years!
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    Jenna's Rhetorical Analysis Assignment
Annie Wong

Apple: It's All About the Brand - 1 views

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  • Ask marketers and advertising experts why Mac users are so loyal, and they all cite the same reason: Apple's brand.
    • Annie Wong
       
      This sentence describes what will be discussed in the article. It dips into the logical argumentation section of a rhetorical triangle.
    • Annie Wong
       
      This paragraph here is giving the audience facts, and statistics of why/how Apple has become such a successful brand
  • $11 billion in annual sales.
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  • boosting
  • advertising budget
  • 15 million to $100 million
  • "It was the marketing company of the decade."
    • Annie Wong
       
      Ethical argumentation is present here. This quote is from John Sculley, he was the marketing exec of Pepsi (as mentioned above) and everybody knows how popular and well known Pepsi is, so he is seen as a reliable voice for marketing facts because of his success in the Pepsi company.
  • awarded
  • powerful brand
    • Annie Wong
       
      You can sway an audience into deeper consideration into the brand by describing it as a "powerful brand" (Ethos)
  • Apple "Brand of the Year"
  • overwhelming presence of Apple
    • Annie Wong
       
      As a reader, this statement shows that Apple is a brand which is very passionate about their products, and they want everyone to know just how great their products are. However, consumers could find the marketing of the brand to be overkill and too obnoxious, or feel as if its being shoved down their throats, which could be a negative and turn off, and cause them to invest in other brands.
  • comes through in everything they do."
    • Annie Wong
       
      Another logical point. It can be seen as a testimony. The success of the iMac and iPod rely solely on the brand. If it weren't for the brand, it very well might not be a popular/successful item.
  • "Without the brand
  • Apple would be dead
  • It's got nothing to do with products
  • branding is all that keeps them alive
  • intimate with its customers
  • is loved
  • branding has become as powerful as religion
    • Annie Wong
       
      Similie. Here they are trying to make people realize just how important branding is by comparing it to religion.
  • about imagination, design and innovation
    • Annie Wong
       
      Emotional aspect. At the end of the day, no matter what, there are loyal customers, who will support brand regardless. This is what makes people love the brand and its products
  • one of the reasons Apple has been rebranded
  • rejuvenate the brand
  • emotional brand
  • company projects a humanistic corporate culture and a strong corporate ethic, characterized by volunteerism, support of good causes or involvement in the community
    • Annie Wong
       
      Emotional - Shows Apple cares and wants to give back. Also shows that it's not just a flashy brand with cool gadgets, but the products also help better the lives of many..Positively sways audience because of the education aspect
  • Apple, on the other hand, comes across as profoundly humanist. Its founding ethos was power to the people through technology, and it remains committed to computers in education. "It's always about people,
    • Annie Wong
       
      Visually, products are colourful and many times, there are choices to suit personal preferences, this also makes the product easily identifiable. (ex. any brightly coloured, music player, even if not Apple, will probably be associated with Apple because they were they ones who first introduced it.)
  • products and advertising are clearly recognizable
  • Apple's design is people-driven
  • unique visual and verbal vocabulary, expressed in product design and advertising
  • products are designed around people
  • established a "heartfelt connection" with its customers.
  • Apple has always projected a human touch
  • pple used great leaders -- Cesar Chavez, Gandhi and the Dalai Lama -- to persuade people
  • Apple's famous "1984" Super Bowl ad
Brian Beck

Electric Guitars | Ibanez guitars - 0 views

    • Brian Beck
       
      The background image creates a page that isn't dull, but does not take away from the content overtop of it
    • Brian Beck
       
      Here Ibanez uses well known musicians to help sell their guitars. They show you guitars each person uses, backing the guitars with credible musicians.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      What sort of appeal is this?
    • Brian Beck
       
      This is using Ethos backing your product with someone who knows the subject, but also this can appeal to one's emotions, possibly getting someone to buy a more expensive guitar because their favourite musician uses it.
    • Brian Beck
       
      On this electric guitars page they show pictures of guitars from the different electric guitar series. This is a great alternative to just text, as it catches your attention and appeals you the reader more. This also helps if you are looking for a guitar with a specific look.
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    • Brian Beck
       
      I find that even with a simple texture on this frame, it looks much better than a solid colour frame would.
    • Brian Beck
       
      Noticing that the electric guitar section seems to be all about rocking out, the texture could be seen as kind of "grungy", appealing to a rocker more than a simple plain colour might.
J.Randolph Radney

Understand Food Packaging Colors to Get the Message Behind the Marketing - 0 views

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    Colours aren't 'just a pretty face'. They stand for attributes.
lindsay jmaiff

fultonco.com HOME - 1 views

    • lindsay jmaiff
       
      Colours blue and gold: give a sence of royalty or astutness possibly. The picture with old books shows knowledge and wisdom, the slideshow if photos displays the companies use of technology. The Logo is in cursive and has a watermark which is visually pleasing to the eye, the cursive reidderates the old fashion trusted skill, also the date of establishment is highlighted in the logo-- being an old company puts value, trust and loyalty into it
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    Kamloops Law Firm, Rhetorical Analysis
J.Randolph Radney

Jenni Parker, BA(T&D) - WikiEducator - 1 views

  • Hello, my name is Jenni Parker and I live in Perth, Western Australia. I was born in Sydney, NSW and grew up in the outer western suburbs. I moved to Perth in 1982 and except for 3 years when I lived and worked overseas (refer to When & Where), I've been here ever since and I love it!
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      This is a placeholder, demonstrating a sticky note.
  • I grew up in a family of 3 boys and 1 girl (me) so I'm a bit of a "Tom Boy" (and a bit spoilt)
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      This background colour is quite bland...
  •  
    "Hello, my name is Jenni Parker and I live in Perth, Western Australia. I was born in Sydney, NSW and grew up in the outer western suburbs. I moved to Perth in 1982 and except for 3 years when I lived and worked overseas (refer to When & Where), I've been here ever since and I love it! "
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    This is the example page from class.
Hiliary Leon

ECEBC :: Early Childhood Educators of BC - 0 views

  • Early Childhood Educators of British Columbia (ECEBC) has been advancing early childhood education and care since 1969. We educate early childhood educators and the broader community about the importance of early childhood education and care. We provide professional development opportunities to early childhood educators across the province.
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      This is getting the interest of childcare providers, educator and parents. Also show that they help children. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      The back ground colours are sublet and easy to follow. The darker green is dark enough so that the reader knows that that is the title and what the site is about. having the board in grey and the main page white draws the readers eyes towards the font. 
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    Early Childhood Educators of British Columbia (ECEBC) has been advancing early childhood education and care since 1969. We educate early childhood educators and the broader community about the importance of early childhood education and care. We provide professional development opportunities to early childhood educators across the province.
Hiliary Leon

Books | The Official Website of Robert Munsch - 1 views

    • Hiliary Leon
       
      Munsch has all of his book laid out is an orderly fashion. He is displaying what he has to offer the reader.
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      These books are all links to information about the books and verbal recording of a book. I really like this because it gives you the idea how the writer wants the book read. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      The links looks like they are book titles to go with the theme of him being a children's book Author.
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      This site is to catch the eye of the children and to advertise some of the characters of the books. This is a very significant to his image and what Munsch is persuading to his audience  
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    • Hiliary Leon
       
      It is nice that he has posted his photo on to the website to give an insight to the author. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      This website is showing me pathos due to the emotion that robert is sending emotions of silliness, happiness, curiosity, eagerness, adventurous and cheerful. The website would make me want to buy and use his book in my daily practices. 
    • Hiliary Leon
       
      The yellow is associated with the sun, cheerful, fun, laughter, happiness and good times. The yellow is the prefect colour to chose to go with the theme of his books, cheerful, happiness, laughter and good times.  
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    Robert Munsch books 
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