Evaluation Group 6 - Mary Jones - 9 views
The "hook" discussed in education is always important to capture your audience and I think the illustration and explanation in the beginning of this paper were great. Painting pictures for your au...
This group is for ETC677 students enrolled in spring 2009 to conduct Treatise paper peer evaluations.
The "hook" discussed in education is always important to capture your audience and I think the illustration and explanation in the beginning of this paper were great. Painting pictures for your au...
The "hook" discussed in education is always important to capture your audience and I think the illustration and explanation in the beginning of this paper were great. Painting pictures for your au...
Again, I have noticed papers that have a nice, smooth word flow. This is great to allow the reader to feel as if the writers are knowledgeable of the content. This paper did provide useful, infor...
Hello Group 1, 5 (FIVEEEEE!!!!) From the beginning of the paper, I was immediately informed of the topics,arguments,etc. From reading the introduction alone, I knew that this paper would flow qui...
Tonya, Thanks for your evaluations! You indicated: "I liked how they included an appendix at the end and thought that it added to the paper. " Could be be more specific on the addenpix? Thanks!...
Group 2 has created an effective treaties paper. I appreciate that they provided an abstract. They made excellent use of resources and incorporated them into their arguments very well. They follo...
Chih, Yes, I do agree that oral discussions are very challenging in online environments. I was thinking about how oral discussions within group members make it easier to accomplish group project...
Grade 5: Overall, good arguments. This paper was organized very well. The APA format was followed. All topics were discussed in detail. This paper also discussed major aspects of online learnin...
Grade 4.5 Loved the first sentence, it was a great way to get started, good argument for constructivist learning. The history also added to the paper and definitely created a stronger argument in ...
Grade: 4 I thought the argument was presented well. I had a good description on what online learning is and understood what tools make online learning effective; however I think other resources ...
Grade: 5 I thought we did a good job organizing our argument and had relevant resources to back it up. We described online learning and the elements that make up online learning. We followed th...