Grade 4:

This paper has a good argument with really good points. However, the paper could have been more organized in the sense that it could have separated the parts of the paper. The paper just seemed to run together. Also, there was only one resource to back up their arguments.

Beth Summerhill wrote:
> Grade: 5
> For only having two people in your group I think your group did a great job. I really like your great description of the different situations that might cause adult learners to seek a degree other than a face to face class. All of your reasons and description of online learners were great. I also like how you talked about the different types of learning environments especially how you brought in creativity, that is a key point and what inspires a lot of adult learners to participate in an online learning environment is that it brings out the learners creativity.

Grade 5:

This paper had very powerful arguments. It was a well organized paper that followed the APA format. However, some of the organization did not match throughout the paper. This paper was very insightful.

Beth Summerhill wrote:
> Grade: 5
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> I think your group did a great job on your paper. I really like how you included some history in your paper, it made the reader compare and contrast technology and education then and now, great special touch! I think your paper had some really good quotes included and great resources. Also, reading your paper made the reader feel at ease and it was like you were reading the readers mind, you would mention a term related to technology but included the definition for the reader nice touch to throw in you never know the technological knowledge of your reader. Your group did a great job!

Grade 5:

Overall, good arguments. This paper was organized very well. The APA format was followed. All topics were discussed in detail. This paper also discussed major aspects of online learning.
Follows APA format.

Beth Summerhill wrote:
> Grade: 5
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> This paper is well organized and provides great details as well as resources. The paper defines terminology for the reader as well as provides benefits of an online learning environment. Our group worked well together and put together a well formatted paper.