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  #2 MJ Hall on 15 Apr 09

   

  Grade 4:
  
  This paper has a good argument with really good points. However, the paper could have been more organized in the sense that it could have separated the parts of the paper. The paper just seemed to run together. Also, there was only one resource to back up their arguments.
  
  Beth Summerhill wrote:
  > Grade: 5
  > For only having two people in your group I think your group did a great job. I really like your great description of the different situations that might cause adult learners to seek a degree other than a face to face class. All of your reasons and description of online learners were great. I also like how you talked about the different types of learning environments especially how you brought in creativity, that is a key point and what inspires a lot of adult learners to participate in an online learning environment is that it brings out the learners creativity.

   

  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Grade 4: <br /> <br /> This paper has a good argument with really good points. However, the paper could have been more organized in the sense that it could have separated the parts of the paper. The paper just seemed to run together. Also, there was only one resource to back up their arguments. <br /> <br /> Beth Summerhill wrote: <br /> > Grade: 5 <br /> > For only having two people in your group I think your group did a great job. I really like your great description of the different situations that might cause adult learners to seek a degree other than a face to face class. All of your reasons and description of online learners were great. I also like how you talked about the different types of learning environments especially how you brought in creativity, that is a key point and what inspires a lot of adult learners to participate in an online learning environment is that it brings out the learners creativity.</div>

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  #3 Marta Herrera on 15 Apr 09

   

  Grade: 4
  
  I thought the argument was presented well. I had a good description on what online learning is and understood what tools make online learning effective; however I think other resources could have been used to support your argument.
  
  
  MJ Hall wrote:
  > Grade 4:
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  > This paper has a good argument with really good points. However, the paper could have been more organized in the sense that it could have separated the parts of the paper. The paper just seemed to run together. Also, there was only one resource to back up their arguments.
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  > Beth Summerhill wrote:
  > > Grade: 5
  > > For only having two people in your group I think your group did a great job. I really like your great description of the different situations that might cause adult learners to seek a degree other than a face to face class. All of your reasons and description of online learners were great. I also like how you talked about the different types of learning environments especially how you brought in creativity, that is a key point and what inspires a lot of adult learners to participate in an online learning environment is that it brings out the learners creativity.

   

  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Grade: 4 <br /> <br /> I thought the argument was presented well. I had a good description on what online learning is and understood what tools make online learning effective; however I think other resources could have been used to support your argument. <br /> <br /> <br /> MJ Hall wrote: <br /> > Grade 4: <br /> > <br /> > This paper has a good argument with really good points. However, the paper could have been more organized in the sense that it could have separated the parts of the paper. The paper just seemed to run together. Also, there was only one resource to back up their arguments. <br /> > <br /> > Beth Summerhill wrote: <br /> > > Grade: 5 <br /> > > For only having two people in your group I think your group did a great job. I really like your great description of the different situations that might cause adult learners to seek a degree other than a face to face class. All of your reasons and description of online learners were great. I also like how you talked about the different types of learning environments especially how you brought in creativity, that is a key point and what inspires a lot of adult learners to participate in an online learning environment is that it brings out the learners creativity.</div>

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