Evaluation Group 2 - 9 views
This group is for ETC677 students enrolled in spring 2009 to conduct Treatise paper peer evaluations.
Hello Group 1, 5 (FIVEEEEE!!!!) From the beginning of the paper, I was immediately informed of the topics,arguments,etc. From reading the introduction alone, I knew that this paper would flow qui...
Again, I have noticed papers that have a nice, smooth word flow. This is great to allow the reader to feel as if the writers are knowledgeable of the content. This paper did provide useful, infor...
The "hook" discussed in education is always important to capture your audience and I think the illustration and explanation in the beginning of this paper were great. Painting pictures for your au...
The "hook" discussed in education is always important to capture your audience and I think the illustration and explanation in the beginning of this paper were great. Painting pictures for your au...
Score: 5 Excellent paper. Very well thought out and great information. Your paper really flowed. You used several different references and covered a variety of issues.
Score: 5 Very well written paper. You cited several different references. I liked how you titled each section. I also love the quote that starts off your paper!!
This paper get a score of 5. Was clear and well thought out, ideas went smoothly from one to the next, and good resources to support the argument.
This overall was a good paper. It had good points and a great deal of personal knowledge. I think it could have been organized a bit better (transitions) and it could have had more resources to bac...
Paper was well organized and addressed the topic well. The information was well presented and it did a great job explaining various tools available to the learner and teacher. However, there was...
Nice job evaluating and overcoming the challenges of online learning as faced by both the students and instructors. You also seemed to concentrate your research on the collegiate setting. This al...
Your conclusion underscores the somewhat compelling argument you made for the role of the instructor in the body of the treatise which was failrly well organized. I would have like to have seen mor...
I felt a real sense of powerful advocacy for the learner in this tretaise. However the organization and grammar were distractions for me. I can see you put a lot of thought into it. I was also ver...
In evaluating my own group's work I have to say that the paper came out very organized and unified, if a bit long. We intended to make a case for the important connectiion between pedagogy and the ...