Evaluation Group 5 - 4 views
This group is for ETC677 students enrolled in spring 2009 to conduct Treatise paper peer evaluations.
This paper gets a score of 5. Good argument that is well organized. It gives a good definition of online learning as well as evidence in learning theory and how individuals learn. It gives good sup...
I was a member of group 6 and I thought that we were able to come together to produce a good paper. It took some time for us to get to together and figure things out, but once we did, we seems to ...
Group 3, I thought you did a great job on your paper. I like the way you broke up each section and gave a summary of each. It was thorough and very detailed. I believe that it followed APA forma...
Group 4 Evaluation: 4 Group Members: Tracy Botts, Renee Marshall Group 4 provided a strong argument for online learning. They very effectively tied information together and gave a good overview of...
Group 3 Evaluation: 5 Group Members: Melissa Carroll, Marta Herrera, Nasreen Wahid Group 3 provided us with a very engaging introduction that set the tone for the paper. There is al a very strong ...
Group 2 Evaluation: 4 Group Members: MJ Hall, Jeanette Layton, Beth Summerhill Group 2 tied together the three sections of the paper together in a seamless manner. They thoroughly defined online l...
Group 1 Evaluation: 4.5 Group Members: Marilyn Robinson, Scott Pfister, Suzanne Sallee Group 1's introduction provided a basis for the entire paper and guided the reader through what they should e...
Score: 5 Fantastic paper. It was very thorough and very interesting. You used several different resources & references. The paper flowed very well, you all write well together!!
Score: 5 Very well written paper. You cited several different references. I liked how you titled each section. I also love the quote that starts off your paper!!
Score: 5 Excellent paper. Very well thought out and great information. Your paper really flowed. You used several different references and covered a variety of issues.
The "hook" discussed in education is always important to capture your audience and I think the illustration and explanation in the beginning of this paper were great. Painting pictures for your au...
The "hook" discussed in education is always important to capture your audience and I think the illustration and explanation in the beginning of this paper were great. Painting pictures for your au...
Again, I have noticed papers that have a nice, smooth word flow. This is great to allow the reader to feel as if the writers are knowledgeable of the content. This paper did provide useful, infor...
Hello Group 1, 5 (FIVEEEEE!!!!) From the beginning of the paper, I was immediately informed of the topics,arguments,etc. From reading the introduction alone, I knew that this paper would flow qui...
Tonya, Thanks for your evaluations! You indicated: "I liked how they included an appendix at the end and thought that it added to the paper. " Could be be more specific on the addenpix? Thanks!...
Group 2 has created an effective treaties paper. I appreciate that they provided an abstract. They made excellent use of resources and incorporated them into their arguments very well. They follo...