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Vincent DiDomenico - 0 views

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- Janice Perez Rivera on 28 Nov 08
  
  I agree with the comment that conveience can at time bring laziness.... before I got to that sentence as I was reading that same thought came to my mind.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">I agree with the comment that conveience can at time bring laziness.... before I got to that sentence as I was reading that same thought came to my mind.</div>
  
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lest their message be skewed or viewed
- Janice Perez Rivera on 29 Nov 08
  
  This sentence could have a better flow. Maybe try "Unless their message was skewed or viewed...etc.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">This sentence could have a better flow. Maybe try "Unless their message was skewed or viewed...etc.</div>
  
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One from the sovereignty group might say the FP group didn’t put enough concerning their issues in
- Janice Perez Rivera on 29 Nov 08
  
  this sentence needs to be structured better. especially starting at the "FP group didn't put eough conncerning their issues in" it seemed like to me when I read this sentence that the word "concerning" did not fit, in that particular sentence.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">this sentence needs to be structured better. especially starting at the "FP group didn't put eough conncerning their issues in" it seemed like to me when I read this sentence that the word "concerning" did not fit, in that particular sentence.</div>
  
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These kinds of disagreements are the biggest enemy to any group or person fighting against social injustice, as they can hurt the team effort, and can cause the finished product to look sloppy. This could also put their message out as looking skewed or disorganized,
- Janice Perez Rivera on 29 Nov 08
  
  Good point.... It is also easier for a person to commplain about another group or person over the internet because they don't have to see the person...... things like this happen all the time in regular groups or organizations as well.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Good point.... It is also easier for a person to commplain about another group or person over the internet because they don't have to see the person...... things like this happen all the time in regular groups or organizations as well.</div>
  
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picking up a book and reading takes too long, or is too uninteresting.
- Janice Perez Rivera on 29 Nov 08
  
  try to stay away from "extra words" such as too, or, and etc, (suggestion for this sentence) ...picking up a book and reading it takes too long or is uninteresting.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">try to stay away from "extra words" such as too, or, and etc, (suggestion for this sentence) ...picking up a book and reading it takes too long or is uninteresting.</div>
  
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- Janice Perez Rivera on 29 Nov 08
  
  overall I feel that this is agood paper. Just a little more review and I think you will de great. Just don't forget to place your bibliography.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">overall I feel that this is agood paper. Just a little more review and I think you will de great. Just don't forget to place your bibliography.</div>
  
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Brian Russo - 0 views

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I believe that they should include some of the videos that are currently posted on YouTube of the actual killings.
- Janice Perez Rivera on 28 Nov 08
  
  This is a very good point. this would be a great way of showing and building up people's emotions on what is occuring to these animals
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">This is a very good point. this would be a great way of showing and building up people's emotions on what is occuring to these animals</div>
  
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The thinking capacity for the average dolphin is amazing, because they are highly intelligent.
- Janice Perez Rivera on 28 Nov 08
  
  maybe here you should add some stats on how intelligent dolphins are.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">maybe here you should add some stats on how intelligent dolphins are.</div>
  
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Warning: this meant contains mercury and puts you at risk for serious health problems
- Janice Perez Rivera on 28 Nov 08
  
  Don't forget to put direct quotations if yoour using a direct quote "Warning.........."
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Don't forget to put direct quotations if yoour using a direct quote "Warning.........."</div>
  
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into the lunches of school students!
- Janice Perez Rivera on 28 Nov 08
  
  wow... I never knew .... that. That is crazy!!
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">wow... I never knew .... that. That is crazy!!</div>
  
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meat to try to raise
- Janice Perez Rivera on 28 Nov 08
  
  should be and try to raise the public's...etc.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">should be and try to raise the public's...etc.</div>
  
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especially when the meat from the kills is contaminated
- Janice Perez Rivera on 28 Nov 08
  
  tr to make this flow a little better.
  
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Discussion: Your rhetorical life - 53 views

started by Ryan Meehan on 17 Nov 08 no follow-up yet

#4 Janice Perez Rivera on 18 Nov 08

The one example that I can think of that I used recently was in my Racism class the day after the election. We were having a class discussion about the candidates and whether this presidential election was a race election. People were arguing that black people voted for Obama just because he was black, and other people were stating that people voted for McCain because he was white and they were afraid of change. When I discussed this issue in class I wanted to prove that although some people did vote because of race, it was not the majority of the people so I use logos and pathos to explain my reasons on why I believe people voted on whom they wanted to vote for because they felt that, that particular candidate would be a better candidate for their country and not just because of color or race.

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Angela Moneck - 0 views

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In the only 2008 vice presidential
- Janice Perez Rivera on 07 Nov 08
  
  take out the word only. it's extra .. In the 2008 vice presidential....
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">take out the word only. it's extra .. In the 2008 vice presidential....</div>
  
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The war hits close to home with the vice presidential nominee. His son Beau is now in Iraq. He commented that he did not want his son going, but also does not want his grandchildren to have to go back later on
- Janice Perez Rivera on 07 Nov 08
  
  very interesting point. I did not know that the war for him was so close to home like you stated. i also did not know that he supported the war at first.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">very interesting point. I did not know that the war for him was so close to home like you stated. i also did not know that he supported the war at first.</div>
  
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“How we leave [Iraq] makes a big difference.”
- Janice Perez Rivera on 07 Nov 08
  
  notice how he used the word "we" which makes the audience really connect with him. Because we includes everyone.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">notice how he used the word "we" which makes the audience really connect with him. Because we includes everyone.</div>
  
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    Sarah Palin seems to feel more comfortable with oral rather than written communication. In her oral communication, it is obvious that she holds back nothing.
- Janice Perez Rivera on 07 Nov 08
  
  this is a very good and interesting point that you brought out
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">this is a very good and interesting point that you brought out</div>
  
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Sean McMillan - 0 views

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he just feels that he doesn’t have the right personality to run the United States.
- Janice Perez Rivera on 07 Nov 08
  
  That last sentence does not flow as well as it should.I think it's the word run "personality to run the United States" Maybe you should try,...he just feels that he doesn't have the correct personality to lead this country. or you can use the United States.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">That last sentence does not flow as well as it should.I think it's the word run "personality to run the United States" Maybe you should try,...he just feels that he doesn't have the correct personality to lead this country. or you can use the United States.</div>
  
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George bush
- Janice Perez Rivera on 07 Nov 08
  
  Make sure you capitalize Bush
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Make sure you capitalize Bush</div>
  
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When addressing and issue or speaking to the audience,
- Janice Perez Rivera on 07 Nov 08
  
  Instead of using and use an issue.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Instead of using and use an issue.</div>
  
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This theme was a great example of ethos, where he connected to people’s emotions with something they deal with everyday and love dearly, the family.
- Janice Perez Rivera on 07 Nov 08
  
  This is a very valid point on how he connected with the middle class. Just a suggestion another way that Obama connected with the middle class and getting them to feel connected to him in someway were they feel like he completely understands them was by advertisement through the internet... not just his websites but through facebook and myspace. That is how he reach to college students. Also the radio.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">This is a very valid point on how he connected with the middle class. Just a suggestion another way that Obama connected with the middle class and getting them to feel connected to him in someway were they feel like he completely understands them was by advertisement through the internet... not just his websites but through facebook and myspace. That is how he reach to college students. Also the radio.</div>
  
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He a great example of someone
- Janice Perez Rivera on 07 Nov 08
  
  He is a great example of someone verses He a great....
  
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myliblog: Uncle Bobby's Wedding - 0 views

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gay marriage usf readings argument persuasion rhetoric marriage religion civil rights

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Janice Perez Rivera on 30 Oct 08

Here Jamie is stating the facts that the lady stated which are extremely important because they are true.

<div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Here Jamie is stating the facts that the lady stated which are extremely important because they are true.</div>

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Janice Perez Rivera on 30 Oct 08

When Jamies states that Sara Brannen was trying to portray that gay marriage is normal.... Sara was not focusing on what was important which was the relationship between the uncle and the young person. i like the fact that he pointed that out.

<div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">When Jamies states that Sara Brannen was trying to portray that gay marriage is normal.... Sara was not focusing on what was important which was the relationship between the uncle and the young person. i like the fact that he pointed that out.</div>

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Peer Review Project One Thread - 148 views

draft first one project

started by Ryan Meehan on 12 Oct 08 1 follow-up, last by Dena Rennie on 20 Oct 08

#19 Janice Perez Rivera on 17 Oct 08

http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dcz3dswh_1g6tb9fdb&hl=en (Charlotte Randolph)

http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dd4mqbc9_0chhnf2gf (Angela Moneck)

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#29 Janice Perez Rivera on 19 Oct 08

Angela and Charlotte I have not received permission to access your documents. I have been trying and trying. I can see your papers however I try to send you guys the info and it does not work. Please e-mail me at Jperezri@mail.usf.edu..... Thank you guys

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First draft of Torture paper - 55 views

started by Brian Russo on 11 Oct 08 no follow-up yet

#5 Janice Perez Rivera on 11 Oct 08

http://docs.google.com/a/mail.usf.edu/Doc?id=dg38jkf7_1cz95qhcd

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Public Writing Assignment #1 - 80 views

pwa1

started by Ryan Meehan on 29 Sep 08 no follow-up yet

#15 Janice Perez Rivera on 02 Oct 08

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This video is about Human trafficking.
My User name Jperezri

Human Trafficking is a huge problem all over the world. People don't even realize it. Also our generation is not educated in Human Trafficking at all. There has been many cases were the young childern are taken from their home forcefully or their parents sell them or they are tricked. What do I mean when I say tricked? A great example is the life movie Human Trafficking it shows how a young girl thaought she was going on a study abroad program to the states and ended up in a basement with her identity taken away and no way out. People need to be educated in this issue, so stuff like this can be prevented.

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