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How to Link Social Learning to Work and Performance - 5 views

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  • Start with the end in mind
Todd Scharien

Tricks Tutorials.com - 0 views

    • Todd Scharien
       
      This article relies on humor and knowledge (pathos and logos, respectively) to get its point across. The author of this site as a whole uses these techniques.
    • Todd Scharien
       
      The articles on this website are also not for the slightly faint-of-heart. Crude language and textual imagery lies ahead.
  • Also, pour it all over yourself so you're all slick... Mr. Slick... Slick... :)
  • Mrs. Houser's Food Science class 2002 Local Dietician sources
    • Todd Scharien
       
      Unfortunately these cannot be verified directly through the author, but a quick Google search should confirm the information presented.
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  • Once you convert you'll never go back. The feel is as incredible as the money you save! Be HARDCORE! Drink WATER!
    • Todd Scharien
       
      It's true.
  • You're gay
    • Todd Scharien
       
      The author could definitely get the same point across without the slang.
  • Obviously joint pain is the anti-christ of a trickster...
  • Lack of water is the #1 cause of daytime fatigue, causing you too feel sluggish
    • Todd Scharien
       
      Another application of logos.
  • Let's start with my own experiences.
    • Todd Scharien
       
      An application of pathos.
J.Randolph Radney

Skillful writing of an awful research paper - Analytical Chemistry (ACS Publications) - 3 views

  • My advice is solely based on principles of presenting the objectives, experiments, results, and conclusion in a fashion that as such no one will finish reading them or, if they do, readers will have little chance of understanding or remembering them.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Thesis of the article.
  • practice and a lack of mental concentration
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      it is important to see the irony in this phrasing.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      The colour choice represents solid foundation and conservative values.
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    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      The logo and tag represent serious marketing.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      The site seems to be written in frames, which is not the best format for today's Web standards.
  • Royce Murray University of North Carolina - Chapel Hill, ChemistryAnal. Chem., 2011, 83 (3), p 633DOI: 10.1021/ac2000169Publication Date (Web): January 12, 2011Copyright © 2011 American Chemical Society
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Prominence of the bibliography of the article provides useful information that is readily retrievable.
  • Rule 1.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      It might have been better to have used some sort of highlighting device to make the rules stand out better. Also, punctuating what are not sentences is not really standard form.
trehbein

Peace River Coal | Peace River Coal Home Page - 0 views

shared by trehbein on 07 Mar 11 - No Cached
  • Peace River Coal Inc., a producer of high-quality metallurgical coal for export, from Canada is jointly owned by Anglo American plc, Hillsborough Resources Ltd., and NEMI Northern Energy and Mining Inc. Anglo American holds a 74% interest in Peace River Coal. Peace River Coal owns substantial coal properties in the Peace River region of northeast British Columbia.
    • trehbein
       
      It appears one of the main goals through this website is to explain and demonstrate who Peace River Coal's business afilliates are. The names are mentioned a number of times through the website and showing the reader that these names are present seems to be a large part of the website's focus.
  • with the help of local and other partners
    • trehbein
       
      Credibility could be improved by re-wording to avoid saying 'and other partners', because it almost sounds like something is being hidden from the reader with that language, even if nothing is. It takes away slightly from Ethos.
J.Randolph Radney

How to create a great Prezi by Adam Somlai-Fischer on Prezi - 0 views

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    This is a prezi demonstration.
Matthew Wallace

It's Time Oil Companies Get Behind the Development of Renewable Energy | We Agree | Che... - 0 views

  • We agree.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Constant Repitition of "We Agree." These are written in red on the pages and are the most eye catching items on the page.
  • Related Topics Investing in Innovative Startups Saving by Going Solar Chevron Supports Clean Technology Innovation We're Helping Diversify the World's Energy Supply Chevron Energy Solutions Leads in Efficienc
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Chevron is constantly trying to show it's vistors how much it is doing about many different environmental issues. Here, they provide more links to guide you to more detail on each topic.
  • They're part of the solution. If we're going to meet future demand, we need every molecule, every megawatt of energy that's available and viable
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Hyperbole or is it? I would say this is a hyperbole. Although it is true that we will need this energry, it is not realistic to expect that we will be able to harness energy down to the level of every molecule.
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  • Growing a tree is a long-term commitment. So is meeting tomorrow's energy needs through renewable energy sources.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Analogy
  • Together, we're committed to finding the answer to low-carbon transportation fuel, even if that answer doesn't come tomorrow.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Very pesitive tone. The tone used in this sentence is very positive and inspired. Shows that they're in for the long haul.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Video The video shows that head staff at Chevron think that things need to be done about the big issues too. They show that they are on top of these issues by cleverly pairing the issues posed by the "average teacher" with the solutions that Chevron is backing "now" and trying to deal with "now."
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      A running tally shows how many people agree on the issues presented and gives you the option dierectly above to "See what else we agree on."
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Note: When you click I Agree, this number does increase by one right away. I checked to ensure the number wasn't entirely arbitrary.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Double Note: While you are on this site you can actually see the number increase from people other than yourself "agreeing."
  • We invest in energy technologies that satisfy, or have the potential to satisfy, four basic criteria: economics, scale, customer expectations and density—that is, the ability to be delivered on demand and in quantity. And we never stop looking.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Shows that Chevron is actively searching for better solutions to main issues.
  • And that's why we're the only major international oil company with an energy services company that delivers efficiency and renewable power to clients.
Annie Wong

Apple: It's All About the Brand - 1 views

shared by Annie Wong on 08 Mar 11 - Cached
  • Ask marketers and advertising experts why Mac users are so loyal, and they all cite the same reason: Apple's brand.
    • Annie Wong
       
      This sentence describes what will be discussed in the article. It dips into the logical argumentation section of a rhetorical triangle.
    • Annie Wong
       
      This paragraph here is giving the audience facts, and statistics of why/how Apple has become such a successful brand
  • $11 billion in annual sales.
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  • boosting
  • advertising budget
  • 15 million to $100 million
  • "It was the marketing company of the decade."
    • Annie Wong
       
      Ethical argumentation is present here. This quote is from John Sculley, he was the marketing exec of Pepsi (as mentioned above) and everybody knows how popular and well known Pepsi is, so he is seen as a reliable voice for marketing facts because of his success in the Pepsi company.
  • awarded
  • powerful brand
    • Annie Wong
       
      You can sway an audience into deeper consideration into the brand by describing it as a "powerful brand" (Ethos)
  • Apple "Brand of the Year"
  • overwhelming presence of Apple
    • Annie Wong
       
      As a reader, this statement shows that Apple is a brand which is very passionate about their products, and they want everyone to know just how great their products are. However, consumers could find the marketing of the brand to be overkill and too obnoxious, or feel as if its being shoved down their throats, which could be a negative and turn off, and cause them to invest in other brands.
  • comes through in everything they do."
    • Annie Wong
       
      Another logical point. It can be seen as a testimony. The success of the iMac and iPod rely solely on the brand. If it weren't for the brand, it very well might not be a popular/successful item.
  • "Without the brand
  • Apple would be dead
  • It's got nothing to do with products
  • branding is all that keeps them alive
  • intimate with its customers
  • is loved
  • branding has become as powerful as religion
    • Annie Wong
       
      Similie. Here they are trying to make people realize just how important branding is by comparing it to religion.
  • about imagination, design and innovation
    • Annie Wong
       
      Emotional aspect. At the end of the day, no matter what, there are loyal customers, who will support brand regardless. This is what makes people love the brand and its products
  • one of the reasons Apple has been rebranded
  • rejuvenate the brand
  • emotional brand
  • company projects a humanistic corporate culture and a strong corporate ethic, characterized by volunteerism, support of good causes or involvement in the community
    • Annie Wong
       
      Emotional - Shows Apple cares and wants to give back. Also shows that it's not just a flashy brand with cool gadgets, but the products also help better the lives of many..Positively sways audience because of the education aspect
  • Apple, on the other hand, comes across as profoundly humanist. Its founding ethos was power to the people through technology, and it remains committed to computers in education. "It's always about people,
    • Annie Wong
       
      Visually, products are colourful and many times, there are choices to suit personal preferences, this also makes the product easily identifiable. (ex. any brightly coloured, music player, even if not Apple, will probably be associated with Apple because they were they ones who first introduced it.)
  • products and advertising are clearly recognizable
  • Apple's design is people-driven
  • unique visual and verbal vocabulary, expressed in product design and advertising
  • products are designed around people
  • established a "heartfelt connection" with its customers.
  • Apple has always projected a human touch
  • pple used great leaders -- Cesar Chavez, Gandhi and the Dalai Lama -- to persuade people
  • Apple's famous "1984" Super Bowl ad
azizkhaled

Personal and Business Banking | Moving to Canada: HSBC Bank Canada - 1 views

shared by azizkhaled on 17 Jul 11 - Cached
  • Personal Banking - For you
  • Business Banking
    • azizkhaled
       
      The Bank Understands the importance of both types of costumers and put both sides in the home page to value all costumers and ensure the clarity easiness to get what they need online.
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    • azizkhaled
       
      The background is very simple that it gets boring looking at a white with some gray colors. perhaps the bank wants to transfer this image to its costumer, that this site is professional and only for business and acquiring information.
    • azizkhaled
       
      Now we have to remember that this site in only for Canada and Canadian costumers. After my visits to multiple sites from different countries I noticed the differences in the layout of the home page. Maybe its a strategy that the bank takes to make whats proper for users in different countries and have the services available for each country presented differently in each website for them.
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    One of the leading banks in the world, it has many branches world wide centered in London, U.K. I believe this bank has given time and effort in creating this website and took care of all details to meet with the high standard this bank claims.
J.Randolph Radney

When Working From Home Doesn't Work - The Atlantic - 0 views

  • the research starts to make a little more sense if you ask what type of productivity we are talking about.
  • If it’s personal productivity—how many sales you close or customer complaints you handle—then the research, on balance, suggests that it’s probably better to let people work where and when they want.
  • But other types of work hinge on what might be called “collaborative efficiency”—the speed at which a group successfully solves a problem. And distance seems to drag collaborative efficiency down. Why? The short answer is that collaboration requires communication. And the communications technology offering the fastest, cheapest, and highest-bandwidth connection is—for the moment, anyway—still the office.
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  • For jobs that mainly require interactions with clients (consultant, insurance salesman) or don’t require much interaction at all (columnist), the office has little to offer besides interruption.
  • The power of presence has no simple explanation. It might be a manifestation of the “mere-exposure effect”: We tend to gravitate toward what’s familiar; we like people whose faces we see, even just in passing. Or maybe it’s the specific geometry of such encounters. The cost of getting someone’s attention at the coffee machine is low—you know they’re available, because they’re getting coffee—and if, mid-conversation, you see that the other person has no idea what you’re talking about, you automatically adjust.
  • But IBM has clearly absorbed some of these lessons in planning its new workspaces, which many of its approximately 5,000 no-longer-remote workers will inhabit. “It used to be we’d create a shared understanding by sending documents back and forth. It takes forever. They could be hundreds of pages long,” says Rob Purdie, who trains fellow IBMers in Agile, an approach to software development that the company has adopted and is applying to other business functions, like marketing. “Now we ask: ‘How do we use our physical space to get on and stay on the same page?’ ”
  • The answer, of course, depends on the nature of the project at hand. But it usually involves a central table, a team of no more than nine people, an outer rim of whiteboards, and an insistence on lightweight forms of communication. If something must be written down, a Post‑it Note is ideal. It can be stuck on a whiteboard and arranged to form a “BVC”—big, visual chart—that lets everyone see the team’s present situation, much like the 727’s instrument panels. Communication is both minimized and maximized.
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