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Matthew Wallace

It's Time Oil Companies Get Behind the Development of Renewable Energy | We Agree | Che... - 0 views

  • We agree.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Constant Repitition of "We Agree." These are written in red on the pages and are the most eye catching items on the page.
  • Related Topics Investing in Innovative Startups Saving by Going Solar Chevron Supports Clean Technology Innovation We're Helping Diversify the World's Energy Supply Chevron Energy Solutions Leads in Efficienc
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Chevron is constantly trying to show it's vistors how much it is doing about many different environmental issues. Here, they provide more links to guide you to more detail on each topic.
  • They're part of the solution. If we're going to meet future demand, we need every molecule, every megawatt of energy that's available and viable
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Hyperbole or is it? I would say this is a hyperbole. Although it is true that we will need this energry, it is not realistic to expect that we will be able to harness energy down to the level of every molecule.
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  • Growing a tree is a long-term commitment. So is meeting tomorrow's energy needs through renewable energy sources.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Analogy
  • Together, we're committed to finding the answer to low-carbon transportation fuel, even if that answer doesn't come tomorrow.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Very pesitive tone. The tone used in this sentence is very positive and inspired. Shows that they're in for the long haul.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Video The video shows that head staff at Chevron think that things need to be done about the big issues too. They show that they are on top of these issues by cleverly pairing the issues posed by the "average teacher" with the solutions that Chevron is backing "now" and trying to deal with "now."
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      A running tally shows how many people agree on the issues presented and gives you the option dierectly above to "See what else we agree on."
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Note: When you click I Agree, this number does increase by one right away. I checked to ensure the number wasn't entirely arbitrary.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Double Note: While you are on this site you can actually see the number increase from people other than yourself "agreeing."
  • We invest in energy technologies that satisfy, or have the potential to satisfy, four basic criteria: economics, scale, customer expectations and density—that is, the ability to be delivered on demand and in quantity. And we never stop looking.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Shows that Chevron is actively searching for better solutions to main issues.
  • And that's why we're the only major international oil company with an energy services company that delivers efficiency and renewable power to clients.
Matthew Wallace

Chevron - We Agree - 0 views

    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Division and Classification Breaks up main issues and deals with them individually.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Non verbal. Deep stares from many demographics appeals to pathos. Almost everyone in the poster is staring right at you as if they're looking to you for help, contribution, and opinion
  • You might be surprised to see how many things we can agree on.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      This seems to be trying to direct you towards the idea that Chevron is not part of the problem, but rather part of the solution.
Matthew Wallace

Oil Companies Should Put Their Profits to Good Use | We Agree | Chevron - 0 views

    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Video The video shows staff at Chevron think that things need to be done about the big issues too. They show that they are on top of these issues by cleverly pairing the issue posed by the "average building contractor" with the solution that Chevron is putting theirprofits to good use. They are "pumping $21 billion into local economies, small business, and communities.
  • Emily, a Chevron engineer, and Joseph, a building contractor, agree on the need for oil companies to reinvest profits into jobs and growth.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Parallelism. Shows a Chevron engineer and an "average building contracter" talking and AGREEING on the same issue.
  • Some say our profits are big, but our investments are equally big, too. So, yes, we do put our profits to good use.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Counterpoints These two sentences address the fact that they do make large profits, but then dispell them by adding that their investments are just as large.
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  • Related Topics Chevron Creates Jobs in Kazakhstan How We Work With Local Suppliers Our Agbami Field Is One of Nigeria's Largest What It Took to Build Our Blind Faith Platform
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      More links to other topics that chevron is doing things about.
  • Yes, we make profits doing it. I'm grateful for that. That's how we reinvest in future energy supplies. It takes a lot of money to find and produce the energy a growing economy needs.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Gives reasoning for why they need to make the profits they do.
  • Energy helps create jobs.
    • Matthew Wallace
       
      Non verbal The clean white backround looks professional, and it really makes the bright red text all pertaining to the agreement that current issues need solutions.
  • We also invest in people and provide thousands of good-paying jobs.
Jennifer Rienks

Chahal Priddle LLP, Serving Kamloops & Merritt, BC, Canada. Lawyers for Personal Injury... - 0 views

    • Jennifer Rienks
       
      The photo of the Family is an appeal to emotion. The firm is trying to make sure you realize the importance of making a will and how it will effect your family. ( especially your children)
  • The statutory division in the Act cannot be deviated from. None of your friends or other relatives could benefit from your estate, nor would it be possible for any of your estate to be bequeathed to charities. You have no choice regarding who administers the estate. The Administrator will be appointed by court order. While anyone can apply to do this, preference goes to next of kin (usually the spouse, then children, then parents). If no one applies to do so, the Official Administrator for British Columbia will perform the task. This often prolongs the process. Court ordered appointment of an Administrator usually increases the legal costs to your estate. If you have outstanding debts when you die, your creditors will have to agree to the appointment of your Administrator without bond. If any of them don't agree to this, the court may require your Administrator to post a bond to protect the estate's assets. If you don't have a will, you cannot designate guardians for your children who are under the age of 19. If you have children younger than 19 when you die, their share of your estate will be paid to the Public Guardian and Trustee. It will be administered by this office until they reach the age of 19. You won't have any control over how the monies are paid out for the benefit of your children. Requests can be made for funds before they reach 19, but it's up to the discretion of the Public Guardian. Typically all assets must be converted to cash. Family heirlooms may not stay within your family. These heirlooms will be sold, and the proceeds distributed rather than passing down to your family members. The estate cannot be distributed until one year after your death. Some of your beneficiaries may experience financial hardship in the meantime, especially after payment of funeral expenses. You'll lose the opportunity to take advantage of any legal, tax or estate planning techniques that would have sped up the distribution of assets to your beneficiaries.
    • Jennifer Rienks
       
      In addition to the photo, much of the text in this section of the site is focused on how your family will be affected. However it also mentions what will happen to your estate and family possessions in the case of your death. Death is a scary thing for most people and therefore they do not want to talk about it, or even think about it. That is why it is important that the Lawyers involved attempt to sooth as many fears as possible for the clients especially regarding what will happen after they are gone and how a will, can make a difference.
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    Why make a will page on Chahal Priddle site
J.Randolph Radney

Discussion Board Etiquette - 1 views

  • Brevity is appreciated. Since reading other's comments or articles can be very time consuming, try to be straight to the point, although respect that this is an academic class. Too little is just as troublesome as too much!
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Brevity is a good idea, but not at the expense of clarity.
  • give a frame of reference in your post by quoting or summarizing the content to which you are responding
  • The me-too post certainly is a frustration in the online environment and does not add any depth to the discussion or learning.
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  • be sure to post substantive ideas and avoid the "I agree" posts which just clutter up a discussion board.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      This is not to say you can't agree with someone, but when you post, make it worth everyone's while to read a comment, extension, or application of ideas, rather than merely an agreement.
  • Subject lines that just repeat the original poster’s subject line with the Re: added (Re: Re: Re: Unoriginal subject line) give no indication to the reader if the new or added content will benefit him or her as a learner
  • Each time you post or reply to a post, update the subject line to match the content of your posting.
  • Make sure you are posting under the appropriate heading or thread.
  • The Discussion Board is part of a college course, so your writing style should conform to the rules of standard English.
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    What do you think of these principles as writing guidelines for forums and blogs?
J.Randolph Radney

How to Manage a Group Project in Google Wave - Google Wave - Lifehacker - 0 views

  • Here's how to manage a group project in Wave.
  • To keep all the project-specific waves into a single bucket, the first thing all the members of your group should do is agree on a project-specific tag.
J.Randolph Radney

Breatheasy Stress Relief | Stress Management - 2 views

    • salma moideen
       
      Add a proper video showing how these CD's actually work on person. it will help to impress and get the attention of the audience more.
  • "Science Meets Nature" - not just a meaningless marketing slogan! The BreathEasy System merges ancient, natural healing arts with clinical science to create a genuine breakthrough in stress management: lasting stress relief.
    • salma moideen
       
      Pathos: This is pathos, trying to persuade the audience in a pshycological approach.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      I don't agree with your analysis here. Pathos is an appeal to emotion.
  • That's how Breatheasy user Dr. George Szczerbaniuk puts it. The Breatheasy soundtrack contains a pleasant and natural-sounding breathing track (actually created from an ocean wave) actually woven into the fabric of the music. The breathing track gently and gradually slows your breathing from the overly tense and fast way we tend to breathe down to the slow and precise pattern proven to relieve chronic stress and anxiety and even reduce high blood pressure.
    • salma moideen
       
      Ethos : this is ethos,since it is strongly recommended by a Dr.George and convincing the readers how the CD's actually work on people
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  • And stress is not just a rotten feeling that makes us and those around us feel miserable. Chronic and severe stress is a killer. It provokes the release of harmful hormones like cortisol that attack and weaken our natural defenses. Cortisol can even penetrate a mother's womb to harm her unborn child.
    • salma moideen
       
      Logos: this is logos, since it is strongly admitting the logical reasons of having stress
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      While this is true, I believe the appeal to avoid death is more an appeal to pathos here than in the previously highlighted text.
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    • salma moideen
       
      Pathos: This is pathos, it is strongly influencing the audience by providing enough convenient.
trehbein

Peace River Coal | Peace River Coal Safety - 1 views

  • At Peace River Coal Safety is Paramount
    • trehbein
       
      Could be made more readable, such as: At Peace River Coal, Safety Is Paramount.' By putting a comma in, and ending with a period, it might make a bolder, more thought-out looking statement.
  • zero harm policy
    • trehbein
       
      If this is the name of an actual policy, it could be capitalized to emphasize it's importance.
  • same, non-negotiable rules
    • trehbein
       
      Should not be a comma after 'same', as it isn't really a listable descriptive term as used here.
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  • Ensure that all of our operations have fundamentally safe, well designed plant, equipment and infrastructure
    • trehbein
       
      The grammar here isn't quite correct. It's difficult to read 'All of our operations have... well designed plant,..'
  • Compliance with legislative and other requirements placed upon us, including those to which we voluntarily subscribe, is fundamental to the way we do business. 
    • trehbein
       
      This is a long and potentially confusing sentence that could be re-worded for readability.
  • Rescue team
    • trehbein
       
      'Rescue Team' should possibly all be capitalized, or be all lower-case, unless the team is just called 'Rescue'.
  • On September 18, 2009 Peace River Coal celebrated achieving the milestone of One-year Lost Time Injury Free operation.
    • trehbein
       
      Again, could be re-worded, to something such as "...Peace River Coal operation celebrated the achievement of One-year Lost Time Injury Free." Or, "..celebrated achieving the 'One-Year Lost Time Injury Free' milestone.
  • successful recipients of the "Best and Overall First Aid Award" at the Regional Mines Rescue Competition - July 2009
    • trehbein
       
      Ethos: Exemplifying this proud moment causes the reader to see more respectability in the company. This is not exactly using the company's pre-existing reputation to make a point believable, but it is making a believable point about how the company should be respected by using examples that appeal to the reader's view of the company overall.
  • We recognize that our strength as a company resides in the men and women who contribute to our business.
    • trehbein
       
      Logos: The logical statement here implies that happy, healthy workers contribute more strength to the company itself than unhappy, injured ones, so this statement clearly states that it's in the best interests of the company to keep everyone safe. This is something that the reader can take and agree with at face value because it's an honest, logical statement.
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