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Garrett Paluck

League of Legends - Free Online Game | LoL - League of Legends - 2 views

    • Garrett Paluck
       
      The first thing you notice when you come to this website is the big red button labeled ``Play For Free`` It`s big,bright, in your face, and it tries to send a message. (Text)
    • Garrett Paluck
       
      The background image is eye catching. A red woman and a blue entity are fighting on a cliffside, it shows wonder and mystery.
    • Garrett Paluck
       
      non-text
    • Garrett Paluck
       
      The news board show alternating images of new/important information. Each new concept is supported by an attractive picture which makes people want to look into what the images mean.
    • Garrett Paluck
       
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    • Garrett Paluck
       
      The logo itself is pretty eye catching. Gold Letters against a grayish black background look pretty appealing. On top of that, the logo takes up lots of space; they are trying to make people remember it. (non-text)
    • Garrett Paluck
       
      The text that reads "Join Riot Games" is big, noticeable, and written weird. This could just be an add to attract new employees, but I think it's also a marketing tool. This add makes this company seem more like a locally owned business, rather than a big corporate giant, making people feel more comfortable around it. (text)
    • Garrett Paluck
       
      The tabs on this website are simple to read, easy to find, and link people to the relevant part of the website. (text)
    • Garrett Paluck
       
      These tabs will link people to relevant in game content. Each tab is included with an interesting picture. (text/non-text)
    • Garrett Paluck
       
      These links are feature interesting looking characters to appeal to people to click on them. By doing so (linking to their facebook, twitter, or youtube) they will be informed about the game's future news and be inticed to return. (text/non-text)
Victor Andrucson

A Brief History of Friends of the Nemaiah Valley - 2 views

  • We are an all-volunteer society with patrons and supporting organizations far beyond the Nemiah Valley and outside the borders of our home province.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      "All-volunteer" probably is intended to make me have greater confidence in the things this group is advocating.
    • Victor Andrucson
       
      While "all-volunteer" might seem to make them more trustworthy and possibly deserving to receive donations might it also be a contrast to "all professional" and thus allows for lower expectations on the parts of the reader leading to a higher possibility of satisfaction?
  • Nemiah Valley and of the Xeni Gwet’in FNG struggle to protect their homeland.
    • Kimberly McCoy
       
      Excellent Smithers!
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    This site is where we worked on rhetorical analysis in class.
Kim Tuerlings

Default Viral Title Player - 2 views

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    LOL this is one way to motivate
J.Randolph Radney

YouTube - lynda.com: Moodle Essential Training for Students - 2 views

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    This is the introductory video from a series designed to help you better understand how MOODLE works in courses.
trehbein

Peace River Coal | Sustainability - 1 views

  • ways  to
    • trehbein
       
      Too many spaces between.
  • Environmental studies began at Peace River Coal's Trend mine in late 2003 and environmental monitoring continues to this day.  Environmental Assessment (EA) applications are in progress for the Roman Mountain Project which requires the collection of field data which includes air quality, geochemistry, climate and hydrology, groundwater, surface water and sediment, aquatic resources, soils and terrain, land use and tenure and heritage (archeology and traditional land use).
    • trehbein
       
      Exemplification: Here they've used a case-in-point to explain their environmentally responsible practices.
  • Ethically sound practices result in a reduced environmental footprint and provides sustainable benefits to local and global communities alike.
    • trehbein
       
      Cause and effect analysis: The statement suggests that because of ethically sound practices by the company, positive results occur.
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  • benefiting us now, and for generations to come.
    • trehbein
       
      Appeal to pathos: Speaking about the benefits for future generations gives a warm, positive feeling to the reater.
  • Peace River Coal endeavors to minimize negative operational impacts on the surrounding ecology and terrain, affecting not only our present, but the future for generations to come
    • trehbein
       
      Although this sentence is intended to show company responsibility, it could backfire by creating the thought in the reader's mind that the mine processes are damaging to the environment. The use of 'affecting not only our present, but the future for generations to come' is intended to refer to the company's attention to minimizing impacts, but it could easily be interpreted to the negative effects themselves affecting generations for years to come. You could present the information in a more positive instead of a negative light, by saying what the company is doing to minimize operational impacts, without saying that the impacts are negative, and without pairing it directly with the thought that future generations are involved.
Annie Wong

Apple: It's All About the Brand - 1 views

shared by Annie Wong on 08 Mar 11 - Cached
  • Ask marketers and advertising experts why Mac users are so loyal, and they all cite the same reason: Apple's brand.
    • Annie Wong
       
      This sentence describes what will be discussed in the article. It dips into the logical argumentation section of a rhetorical triangle.
    • Annie Wong
       
      This paragraph here is giving the audience facts, and statistics of why/how Apple has become such a successful brand
  • $11 billion in annual sales.
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  • boosting
  • advertising budget
  • 15 million to $100 million
  • "It was the marketing company of the decade."
    • Annie Wong
       
      Ethical argumentation is present here. This quote is from John Sculley, he was the marketing exec of Pepsi (as mentioned above) and everybody knows how popular and well known Pepsi is, so he is seen as a reliable voice for marketing facts because of his success in the Pepsi company.
  • awarded
  • powerful brand
    • Annie Wong
       
      You can sway an audience into deeper consideration into the brand by describing it as a "powerful brand" (Ethos)
  • Apple "Brand of the Year"
  • overwhelming presence of Apple
    • Annie Wong
       
      As a reader, this statement shows that Apple is a brand which is very passionate about their products, and they want everyone to know just how great their products are. However, consumers could find the marketing of the brand to be overkill and too obnoxious, or feel as if its being shoved down their throats, which could be a negative and turn off, and cause them to invest in other brands.
    • Annie Wong
       
      Another logical point. It can be seen as a testimony. The success of the iMac and iPod rely solely on the brand. If it weren't for the brand, it very well might not be a popular/successful item.
  • comes through in everything they do."
  • "Without the brand
  • Apple would be dead
  • It's got nothing to do with products
  • branding is all that keeps them alive
  • emotional brand
  • is loved
  • branding has become as powerful as religion
    • Annie Wong
       
      Similie. Here they are trying to make people realize just how important branding is by comparing it to religion.
  • about imagination, design and innovation
    • Annie Wong
       
      Emotional aspect. At the end of the day, no matter what, there are loyal customers, who will support brand regardless. This is what makes people love the brand and its products
  • one of the reasons Apple has been rebranded
  • rejuvenate the brand
  • intimate with its customers
  • company projects a humanistic corporate culture and a strong corporate ethic, characterized by volunteerism, support of good causes or involvement in the community
    • Annie Wong
       
      Emotional - Shows Apple cares and wants to give back. Also shows that it's not just a flashy brand with cool gadgets, but the products also help better the lives of many..Positively sways audience because of the education aspect
  • Apple, on the other hand, comes across as profoundly humanist. Its founding ethos was power to the people through technology, and it remains committed to computers in education. "It's always about people,
    • Annie Wong
       
      Visually, products are colourful and many times, there are choices to suit personal preferences, this also makes the product easily identifiable. (ex. any brightly coloured, music player, even if not Apple, will probably be associated with Apple because they were they ones who first introduced it.)
  • products and advertising are clearly recognizable
  • Apple's design is people-driven
  • established a "heartfelt connection" with its customers.
  • products are designed around people
  • unique visual and verbal vocabulary, expressed in product design and advertising
  • Apple has always projected a human touch
  • pple used great leaders -- Cesar Chavez, Gandhi and the Dalai Lama -- to persuade people
  • Apple's famous "1984" Super Bowl ad
J.Randolph Radney

YouTube - docs's Channel - 1 views

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    Some good videos on Google Docs.
Brian Beck

Basses | Ibanez guitars - 1 views

    • Brian Beck
       
      On all the guitar pages they will have basically the same layout, but with a different background image and colour scheme. It helps you to stay familiar with how to find what you are looking for, while keeping the pages looking fresh and different.
hyram swenson

Income Tax Consultants | File Taxes | Tax Returns - H&R Block - 1 views

    • hyram swenson
       
      pictures on the site are of happy successful looking folks. People tend to associate themselves in this positive light while on the website.
  • If you qualify for Instant Cash Back, we'll give you 85 percent of the first $300 of your income tax refund and 95 percent of the rest. For example, if you have a $600 refund, the amount you'll receive from H&R Block is $540**. The $60 fee covers the entire cost of the Instant Cash Back service, including tax preparation.
    • hyram swenson
       
      Its nice that they provide this upfront cost information and this honestly goes a long way to persuading me to try the service.
  • Walk in with your taxes and walk out with your money
    • hyram swenson
       
      This is the tag line for the company. or at least it is a very memorable bit of text!
J.Randolph Radney

Walmart Canada - Save Money Live Better. - 1 views

shared by J.Randolph Radney on 08 Mar 11 - Cached
    • Jordan Sallenbach
       
      "Save money, live better" Tells customers that if they shop at wal-mart they will have a better life because they will save money
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Yes, but what sort of appeal is this (in terms of rhetoric)?
    • Jordan Sallenbach
       
      The blue colour has a calming effect, it makes people feel safe.
    • Jordan Sallenbach
       
      Lots of images
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  • Featured Items
    • Jordan Sallenbach
       
      Lots of items to draw people in, "featured items" show customers the most appealing items
J.Randolph Radney

TeachPaperless: 10 Ways to Help Students Ask Better Questions - 1 views

  • The points students bring up are thought-provoking. However, I'm most impressed by the questions they ask one another. They clarify and ask follow-up questions. They make inferences. They ask connecting questions and critical thinking questions. It's a messy process, but it's beautiful messy. It's art.
  • As long as a question is respectful, I want students to question their world. This applies to analyzing mathematical processes, thinking through social issues, making sense out of a text or analyzing the natural world for cause and effect.
  • I require students to ask questions before, during and after reading.
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  • Three times a week, we do inquiry days, where students begin with their own question in either social studies or science and they research it, summarize it and then ask further questions. While my initial goal involved teaching bias, loaded language and summarization, I soon realized that students were growing the most in their ability to ask critical thinking questions.
  • Feedback on questions: I highlight their questions in Google Docs and leave comments on their blogs with very specific feedback.
  • Sometimes I'll ask a really lame question and then say, "Someone tell my why that question sucked?" or I'll ask a deeper question and say, "Why was that a hard question to answer?" The goal is to get them to see deeper questions and to also think about why a question is deep or shallow.
  • Some students have a really hard time with questioning strategies.
  • I teach students about inquiry, clarifying, critical thinking and inference questioning.
  • Students sometimes ask me questions. Other times they ask partners or small group questions. Still other times they ask the questions to the whole class.
  • Technology allows students to take their time in crafting a question while having access to the questions of their peers.
Kristina Moller

SMART SET - Fashion retail store for style-savvy young women - 1 views

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    This is the page I chose to do my informal analysis on for Radneys English 2290 class.
Annie Wong

Apple: It's All About the Brand - 1 views

    • Annie Wong
       
      This site appeals to many readers because of all the different sections they provide. The tabs keep the page organized and easy to use.
    • Annie Wong
       
      the ads on the side here are slightly distracting.. makes the eye wander from the actual content.
  • Move over Michael Bull, there's a new "Professor iPod" in town
    • Annie Wong
       
      There is a tone in this sentence.. can't quite put my finger on it.. I almost want to say sarcasm/humorous? Or like a radio announcer..
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    • Annie Wong
       
      Paragraphs are kept short, and with spacing in between.. allows for an easier read
  • Giesler has researched and written extensively on technology, consumption and marketing. He has
    • Annie Wong
       
      This whole article uses the element of exemplification. The author is Leander Kahney, but not once in the article does he speak/have input.. it is all based on his interview of Markus Giesler and his research findings/experiences.
  • users give their iPods names
  • entirely new beas
  • IPod and user form a cybernetic unit," said Giesler. "We're always talking about cyborgs in the context of cultural theory and sci-fi literature, but this is an excellent example that they're out there in the marketplace.... I have seen the future, and it is called the cyborg consumer
  • storing the soundtrack of a lifetime, as well as names, addresses, calendars and notes.
    • Annie Wong
       
      iPod is a person's second brain
  • hybrid entertainment matrix -- iPod, computer and music store
  • a revolutionary device that transforms listeners into "cyborgs" through a process he calls "technotranscendence."
    • Annie Wong
       
      and to the listeners as "cyborgs" or robots
    • Annie Wong
       
      personification.. refering to the iPod as a beast..
  • allow consumers to become "technotranscendent
  • They're not sitting in front of the TV, they're inside the game
  • "They're not sitting in front of the TV, they're inside the game
    • Annie Wong
       
      gives examples of what he means by transcendence
  • "hybrid entertainment matrix"
  • online music stores,
  • iPod, a computer, the internet,
  • "Consumers often say the iPod has become part of themselves," Giesler said. "The iPod is no longer just an instrument or a tool, but a part of myself. It's a body extension. It's part of my memory, and if I lose this stuff, I lose part of my identity.
    • Annie Wong
       
      Points out to readers and consumers just how much the iPod means to them.. makes them realize just how much they rely on their iPods.. and just how sad/devastating it could be if they lost it.. pulls on the emotional strings
    • Annie Wong
       
      Refers to iPod as a part of themselves, would be lost without them
  • only really useful when it's interconnected
  • Pod is important
J.Randolph Radney

Skype Emoticons & Flags Cheatsheet - 1 views

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    For those of you who love a complete list of emoticons.
Japjot Singh

Justice Institute of British Columbia | Canada's leading public safety educator - 1 views

shared by Japjot Singh on 09 Mar 11 - No Cached
    • Japjot Singh
       
      The website uses blue color to appeal to its viewer.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      There are different sorts of appeal; what kind is blue likely to evoke? What sort of appeal is this (logos, ethos, pathos)?
    • Japjot Singh
       
      Blue color is likely to evoke the emotional approach of the reader. So, i would say it pathos
    • Japjot Singh
       
      The website uses various links at the bottom of the first page, so that viewer can get a better understand of the website. It also provides the company's contact details at the top right and bottom of the page, making it really easy for someone who wants to quickly look at some important data and then contact the company for more detailed information.
    • Japjot Singh
       
      The main page has a very strong impression on the viewer as it provides a very detailed information about six main outlines on the top of the first page and can be really helpful.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      What do you mean by 'impression'?
    • Japjot Singh
       
      By " Impression", I mean to say that the website impresses the viewer by providing almost all the required information under six main outlines on the front page. These "Drop down" boxes give an impression of a good website.
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  • Future Students Current Students Alumni International Clients Faculty & Staff
    • Japjot Singh
       
      Use of Quicklinks to target particular individuals for simplification of information.
  • Five things to know about JIBC
    • Japjot Singh
       
      Describes how jibc is changing itself to get more better(Enhancing law enforcement capacity, New JIBC website)  and providing extended services (like tution tax receipts)
    • Japjot Singh
       
      Uses various social networks to be accepted by wide variety of viewers.
  • Find Programs Find Courses
    • Japjot Singh
       
      A handy quick search for easy individual approach.
    • Japjot Singh
       
      Rhetorical Analysis on www.jibc.ca
Brian Beck

| Ibanez guitars - 1 views

shared by Brian Beck on 09 Mar 11 - No Cached
    • Brian Beck
       
      Links to all the different types of guitars makes it easy to navigate to where you want to go, and the images paried with them help to catch your eye.
    • Brian Beck
       
      A larger set of links at the bottom of the page can take you away from the products to information on artists, news, archives and more. This is good, as it helps find information faster.
Rohan Venugopal

Frontpage - 1 views

  • On par with the clout of X-Games, Pipeline Masters, and the Hannenkahm
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      A positive appeal to passion. Brings about happiness
  • air-infused downhills to dirt dominatrix dual slaloms, massive slopestyle stunts to epic enduros,
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      Description given based on past experience and puts readers in the shoes of the writer
  • Kokanee Crankworx promises to do what it’s become so famous for: blowing the past away with the future.
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      A big logical claim. They have been sucessful as they say their new is going to blow away the past with bigger and better things.
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  • enter the VIDEO ROOM for daily highlights and video on demand
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      Balanced information: the opportunity for the audience to go back to previous videos and make their own judgements.
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      Yellow - Ethos appeal Blue - Pathos appeal Green - Logos appeal
  • Join the conversation
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      Inviting the audience to join the conversation - gains their acceptance.
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      The sponsers' logos serves as a way of making sure this whole thing is legit.
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      The date and year answering one of the first questions the audience will have on this page after learning about it.
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