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Kim Tuerlings

community - a review of the theory - 2 views

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    Excellent find, Kim! From what I've read of this, it is in complete agreement with an essay I wrote in 2004 on communication (I hadn't seen this previously).
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    I came across this by mistake, when I was researching information about the Sense of belonging to a Community, but then I realized it was meant to be.
Mike Howard

SONY make.believe - 2 views

    • Mike Howard
       
      Division and classification exemplified buy organized menus and side nav bars
  • It’s a sight you see more and more often in a place you might not expect, e-readers mingling with paperbacks in libraries across the United States
    • Mike Howard
       
      Imagery, Appeals to Pathos. Hyperbole.
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  • don’t know about you but I get hungry each time I see an amazing food photo. Taking gourmet shots is growing across the globe and n
  • Every now and then, the SGNL team gets a rare opportunity to peek into the behind-the-scenes world of Sony
  • The eye catching VAIO Concept PCs (pictured above) previewed at the the Consumer Electronics Show in January this year were officially announced today
J.Randolph Radney

ENGL 181_WL: Plain English Orientation Videos for Web 2.0 Media - 2 views

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    This set of links is on the MOODLE course site for English 181; students should be able to access the links once they have supplied a username and password for MOODLE.
J.Randolph Radney

YouTube - lynda.com: Moodle Essential Training for Students - 2 views

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    This is the introductory video from a series designed to help you better understand how MOODLE works in courses.
J.Randolph Radney

Walmart Canada - Save Money Live Better. - 1 views

shared by J.Randolph Radney on 08 Mar 11 - Cached
    • Jordan Sallenbach
       
      "Save money, live better" Tells customers that if they shop at wal-mart they will have a better life because they will save money
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Yes, but what sort of appeal is this (in terms of rhetoric)?
    • Jordan Sallenbach
       
      The blue colour has a calming effect, it makes people feel safe.
    • Jordan Sallenbach
       
      Lots of images
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  • Featured Items
    • Jordan Sallenbach
       
      Lots of items to draw people in, "featured items" show customers the most appealing items
Brian Beck

Basses | Ibanez guitars - 1 views

    • Brian Beck
       
      On all the guitar pages they will have basically the same layout, but with a different background image and colour scheme. It helps you to stay familiar with how to find what you are looking for, while keeping the pages looking fresh and different.
Annie Wong

Apple: It's All About the Brand - 1 views

shared by Annie Wong on 08 Mar 11 - Cached
  • Ask marketers and advertising experts why Mac users are so loyal, and they all cite the same reason: Apple's brand.
    • Annie Wong
       
      This sentence describes what will be discussed in the article. It dips into the logical argumentation section of a rhetorical triangle.
    • Annie Wong
       
      This paragraph here is giving the audience facts, and statistics of why/how Apple has become such a successful brand
  • $11 billion in annual sales.
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  • boosting
  • advertising budget
  • 15 million to $100 million
  • "It was the marketing company of the decade."
    • Annie Wong
       
      Ethical argumentation is present here. This quote is from John Sculley, he was the marketing exec of Pepsi (as mentioned above) and everybody knows how popular and well known Pepsi is, so he is seen as a reliable voice for marketing facts because of his success in the Pepsi company.
  • awarded
  • powerful brand
    • Annie Wong
       
      You can sway an audience into deeper consideration into the brand by describing it as a "powerful brand" (Ethos)
  • Apple "Brand of the Year"
  • overwhelming presence of Apple
    • Annie Wong
       
      As a reader, this statement shows that Apple is a brand which is very passionate about their products, and they want everyone to know just how great their products are. However, consumers could find the marketing of the brand to be overkill and too obnoxious, or feel as if its being shoved down their throats, which could be a negative and turn off, and cause them to invest in other brands.
    • Annie Wong
       
      Another logical point. It can be seen as a testimony. The success of the iMac and iPod rely solely on the brand. If it weren't for the brand, it very well might not be a popular/successful item.
  • comes through in everything they do."
  • "Without the brand
  • Apple would be dead
  • It's got nothing to do with products
  • branding is all that keeps them alive
  • emotional brand
  • is loved
  • branding has become as powerful as religion
    • Annie Wong
       
      Similie. Here they are trying to make people realize just how important branding is by comparing it to religion.
  • about imagination, design and innovation
    • Annie Wong
       
      Emotional aspect. At the end of the day, no matter what, there are loyal customers, who will support brand regardless. This is what makes people love the brand and its products
  • one of the reasons Apple has been rebranded
  • rejuvenate the brand
  • intimate with its customers
  • company projects a humanistic corporate culture and a strong corporate ethic, characterized by volunteerism, support of good causes or involvement in the community
    • Annie Wong
       
      Emotional - Shows Apple cares and wants to give back. Also shows that it's not just a flashy brand with cool gadgets, but the products also help better the lives of many..Positively sways audience because of the education aspect
  • Apple, on the other hand, comes across as profoundly humanist. Its founding ethos was power to the people through technology, and it remains committed to computers in education. "It's always about people,
    • Annie Wong
       
      Visually, products are colourful and many times, there are choices to suit personal preferences, this also makes the product easily identifiable. (ex. any brightly coloured, music player, even if not Apple, will probably be associated with Apple because they were they ones who first introduced it.)
  • products and advertising are clearly recognizable
  • Apple's design is people-driven
  • established a "heartfelt connection" with its customers.
  • products are designed around people
  • unique visual and verbal vocabulary, expressed in product design and advertising
  • Apple has always projected a human touch
  • pple used great leaders -- Cesar Chavez, Gandhi and the Dalai Lama -- to persuade people
  • Apple's famous "1984" Super Bowl ad
trehbein

Peace River Coal | Management - 1 views

  • Peace River Coal has positioned itself to be a premier coal mining company. Proven, dedicated, skilled and accountable leadership is central to the company's continued growth and success.
    • trehbein
       
      Personification: Giving the company (an entity, not an individual) characteristics that make it sound as if it's acting of it's own accord. This brings together the feelings of one cohesive unit; a 'team' of individuals.
J.Randolph Radney

Moodlers Online Group News | LinkedIn - 1 views

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    This is a helpful resource for job interview preparation.
trehbein

Peace River Coal | Sustainability - 1 views

  • ways  to
    • trehbein
       
      Too many spaces between.
  • Environmental studies began at Peace River Coal's Trend mine in late 2003 and environmental monitoring continues to this day.  Environmental Assessment (EA) applications are in progress for the Roman Mountain Project which requires the collection of field data which includes air quality, geochemistry, climate and hydrology, groundwater, surface water and sediment, aquatic resources, soils and terrain, land use and tenure and heritage (archeology and traditional land use).
    • trehbein
       
      Exemplification: Here they've used a case-in-point to explain their environmentally responsible practices.
  • Ethically sound practices result in a reduced environmental footprint and provides sustainable benefits to local and global communities alike.
    • trehbein
       
      Cause and effect analysis: The statement suggests that because of ethically sound practices by the company, positive results occur.
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  • benefiting us now, and for generations to come.
    • trehbein
       
      Appeal to pathos: Speaking about the benefits for future generations gives a warm, positive feeling to the reater.
  • Peace River Coal endeavors to minimize negative operational impacts on the surrounding ecology and terrain, affecting not only our present, but the future for generations to come
    • trehbein
       
      Although this sentence is intended to show company responsibility, it could backfire by creating the thought in the reader's mind that the mine processes are damaging to the environment. The use of 'affecting not only our present, but the future for generations to come' is intended to refer to the company's attention to minimizing impacts, but it could easily be interpreted to the negative effects themselves affecting generations for years to come. You could present the information in a more positive instead of a negative light, by saying what the company is doing to minimize operational impacts, without saying that the impacts are negative, and without pairing it directly with the thought that future generations are involved.
trehbein

Peace River Coal | Peace River Coal Safety - 1 views

  • At Peace River Coal Safety is Paramount
    • trehbein
       
      Could be made more readable, such as: At Peace River Coal, Safety Is Paramount.' By putting a comma in, and ending with a period, it might make a bolder, more thought-out looking statement.
  • zero harm policy
    • trehbein
       
      If this is the name of an actual policy, it could be capitalized to emphasize it's importance.
  • same, non-negotiable rules
    • trehbein
       
      Should not be a comma after 'same', as it isn't really a listable descriptive term as used here.
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  • Ensure that all of our operations have fundamentally safe, well designed plant, equipment and infrastructure
    • trehbein
       
      The grammar here isn't quite correct. It's difficult to read 'All of our operations have... well designed plant,..'
  • Compliance with legislative and other requirements placed upon us, including those to which we voluntarily subscribe, is fundamental to the way we do business. 
    • trehbein
       
      This is a long and potentially confusing sentence that could be re-worded for readability.
  • Rescue team
    • trehbein
       
      'Rescue Team' should possibly all be capitalized, or be all lower-case, unless the team is just called 'Rescue'.
  • On September 18, 2009 Peace River Coal celebrated achieving the milestone of One-year Lost Time Injury Free operation.
    • trehbein
       
      Again, could be re-worded, to something such as "...Peace River Coal operation celebrated the achievement of One-year Lost Time Injury Free." Or, "..celebrated achieving the 'One-Year Lost Time Injury Free' milestone.
  • successful recipients of the "Best and Overall First Aid Award" at the Regional Mines Rescue Competition - July 2009
    • trehbein
       
      Ethos: Exemplifying this proud moment causes the reader to see more respectability in the company. This is not exactly using the company's pre-existing reputation to make a point believable, but it is making a believable point about how the company should be respected by using examples that appeal to the reader's view of the company overall.
  • We recognize that our strength as a company resides in the men and women who contribute to our business.
    • trehbein
       
      Logos: The logical statement here implies that happy, healthy workers contribute more strength to the company itself than unhappy, injured ones, so this statement clearly states that it's in the best interests of the company to keep everyone safe. This is something that the reader can take and agree with at face value because it's an honest, logical statement.
lindsay jmaiff

Fulton and Company, Kamloops law firm - 1 views

  • Our lawyers and staff continue to give back to the community by way of corporate sponsorships and personal involvement in local charity groups. Our firm has monthly Jeans Days and regularly fields teams to support local fundraising initiatives. We are proud to support the following events and charitable organizations:
    • lindsay jmaiff
       
      brings light to charity and fundraising, pathos, emotion, they're good people
Annie Wong

Apple: It's All About the Brand - 1 views

    • Annie Wong
       
      This site appeals to many readers because of all the different sections they provide. The tabs keep the page organized and easy to use.
    • Annie Wong
       
      the ads on the side here are slightly distracting.. makes the eye wander from the actual content.
  • Move over Michael Bull, there's a new "Professor iPod" in town
    • Annie Wong
       
      There is a tone in this sentence.. can't quite put my finger on it.. I almost want to say sarcasm/humorous? Or like a radio announcer..
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    • Annie Wong
       
      Paragraphs are kept short, and with spacing in between.. allows for an easier read
  • Giesler has researched and written extensively on technology, consumption and marketing. He has
    • Annie Wong
       
      This whole article uses the element of exemplification. The author is Leander Kahney, but not once in the article does he speak/have input.. it is all based on his interview of Markus Giesler and his research findings/experiences.
  • users give their iPods names
  • entirely new beas
  • IPod and user form a cybernetic unit," said Giesler. "We're always talking about cyborgs in the context of cultural theory and sci-fi literature, but this is an excellent example that they're out there in the marketplace.... I have seen the future, and it is called the cyborg consumer
  • storing the soundtrack of a lifetime, as well as names, addresses, calendars and notes.
    • Annie Wong
       
      iPod is a person's second brain
  • hybrid entertainment matrix -- iPod, computer and music store
  • a revolutionary device that transforms listeners into "cyborgs" through a process he calls "technotranscendence."
    • Annie Wong
       
      and to the listeners as "cyborgs" or robots
    • Annie Wong
       
      personification.. refering to the iPod as a beast..
  • allow consumers to become "technotranscendent
  • They're not sitting in front of the TV, they're inside the game
  • "They're not sitting in front of the TV, they're inside the game
    • Annie Wong
       
      gives examples of what he means by transcendence
  • "hybrid entertainment matrix"
  • online music stores,
  • iPod, a computer, the internet,
  • "Consumers often say the iPod has become part of themselves," Giesler said. "The iPod is no longer just an instrument or a tool, but a part of myself. It's a body extension. It's part of my memory, and if I lose this stuff, I lose part of my identity.
    • Annie Wong
       
      Points out to readers and consumers just how much the iPod means to them.. makes them realize just how much they rely on their iPods.. and just how sad/devastating it could be if they lost it.. pulls on the emotional strings
    • Annie Wong
       
      Refers to iPod as a part of themselves, would be lost without them
  • only really useful when it's interconnected
  • Pod is important
Rohan Venugopal

Frontpage - 1 views

  • On par with the clout of X-Games, Pipeline Masters, and the Hannenkahm
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      A positive appeal to passion. Brings about happiness
  • air-infused downhills to dirt dominatrix dual slaloms, massive slopestyle stunts to epic enduros,
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      Description given based on past experience and puts readers in the shoes of the writer
  • Kokanee Crankworx promises to do what it’s become so famous for: blowing the past away with the future.
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      A big logical claim. They have been sucessful as they say their new is going to blow away the past with bigger and better things.
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  • enter the VIDEO ROOM for daily highlights and video on demand
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      Balanced information: the opportunity for the audience to go back to previous videos and make their own judgements.
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      Yellow - Ethos appeal Blue - Pathos appeal Green - Logos appeal
  • Join the conversation
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      Inviting the audience to join the conversation - gains their acceptance.
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      The sponsers' logos serves as a way of making sure this whole thing is legit.
    • Rohan Venugopal
       
      The date and year answering one of the first questions the audience will have on this page after learning about it.
J.Randolph Radney

Jenni Parker, BA(T&D) - WikiEducator - 1 views

  • Hello, my name is Jenni Parker and I live in Perth, Western Australia. I was born in Sydney, NSW and grew up in the outer western suburbs. I moved to Perth in 1982 and except for 3 years when I lived and worked overseas (refer to When & Where), I've been here ever since and I love it!
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      This is a placeholder, demonstrating a sticky note.
  • I grew up in a family of 3 boys and 1 girl (me) so I'm a bit of a "Tom Boy" (and a bit spoilt)
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      This background colour is quite bland...
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    "Hello, my name is Jenni Parker and I live in Perth, Western Australia. I was born in Sydney, NSW and grew up in the outer western suburbs. I moved to Perth in 1982 and except for 3 years when I lived and worked overseas (refer to When & Where), I've been here ever since and I love it! "
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    This is the example page from class.
Kim Tuerlings

How Disney Works to Win Repeat Customers - BusinessWeek - 1 views

  • Train employees to be respectful of all customers, including children. If employees are kind and engage a child, a parent may be more likely to stay in the store, says Jones. For example, a small business in Valparaiso, Ind.—Flanagin's Bulk Mail—uses coloring sheets to keep clients' children and grandchildren occupied while in the store. Each time a child comes in to her store, the owner, Donna Flanagin, asks the child to color a sheet so it can be displayed on the front door. When the child's birthday arrives, Flanagin sends the coloring sheet and a birthday card to the child. "It costs virtually nothing, yet reminds the parents and grandparents about her business and helps her makes a connection with her customers," says Jones. Make waiting in line an entertaining experience. Nobody likes to wait in line, even for a Disney attraction. But it's a fact of life. At Disney, employees are trained to strike up conversations with guests and to offer useful information about new attractions, fun facts, and upcoming show times. A small grain company in Kansas that learned this concept at the Disney Institute applied the idea to its plain waiting room. Since customers often brought children or grandchildren along, the grain company added magazines and toys and books for kids to its waiting room. The company also trained front-desk employees to let customers know the approximate waiting time and offer tips on less busy stretches of the day, in case customers preferred to return later. Be "show-ready." Your "stage" communicates a lot about who you are. Disney will not tolerate trash and trains all employees to pick it up so that the resorts remain "clean, friendly, and fun." If a leader were to walk by trash without picking it up, it would send the wrong message to staff. For a small business that might not even have a physical location, this concept can be as simple as making sure your Web site is professional and easy to navigate. According to Jones: "your Web site is your front door. If it's not show-ready, it can make or break your business." Keep the show on stage. Disney employees must always follow company guidelines for dress and customer service in guest areas. They can take a break and relax in areas unavailable to guests. As a small business owner, try walking the floor as a customer. Do you see or hear conversations that are best held amid the privacy of employee areas? Can your team members be easily seen by customers as they take a smoke break or talk on cell phones? If so, explain the difference between on-stage and off-stage. Encourage your team to be "assertively friendly." Disney encourages its employees to actively seek contact with guests. For example, they will approach a family that appears confused about its park map or has misplaced its car in one of the vast Disney parking lots. They will proactively offer assistance instead of waiting for people to ask. All these tips require leaders who understand the importance of communications and how to extend the conversation to secondary guests. The effort will pay off. Disney has discovered that if a customer appreciates your store or service and speaks highly of her experience, then her children and grandchildren are likely to become loyal customers, along with their friends, neighbors, and acquaintances.
John Boulton

Home | HASKAYNE School of Business - 1 views

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    Home page for Business school
John Boulton

Home | University of Calgary - 1 views

  • Home Prospective Students Current Students Alumni Community Faculty & Staff
    • John Boulton
       
      Links from homepage
  • Faculties Departments & Programs Continuing Education Research & Institutes International Services About the U of C Admin. & Governance Campus Services Giving to the U of C Accountability Quick Links Events & Dates Look Up! Research in Action
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    My rhetorical analysis
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    Attractive and welcoming pictures. Everyone seems to be smiling. Diversity in people in pictures. (cultures and interests)
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