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sarah omens

CIM - 1 views

  • CIM and eOne partner to serve the rest of Canada!    |    CIM is One of Canada’s Best Workplaces    |    CIM wins 50 Best Managed Companies for 10th Consecu
    • sarah omens
       
      as you can see there is lots of movement and also lots of information. i like the way its moving slowly giving you enough time to read the information and at the same time not making it seem boring,.
  • WHO WE ARE LAST 3 FEET™ OUR HISTORY OUR CULTURE AWARDS WHAT WE DO SALES &MERCH EDUCATION BLITZ LAUNCH! CIMPHARMA THE TEAM EXECUTIVE OUR TEAM OUR CLIENTS NEWS CONTACT
  • WHO WE ARE LAST 3 FEET™ OUR HISTORY OUR CULTURE AWARDS WHAT WE DO SALES & MERCH EDUCATION BLITZ LAUNCH! CIMPHARMA THE TEAM EXECUTIVE OUR TEAM OUR CLIENTS NEWS CONTACT
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  • Do you have whatwe arelooking for? > GREAT CAREERS HERE Lea dership at CIM Talking Shop: CIM partners Mike Smith, Shaun M cKenna and Wilf Goodman about retail today. > MEET THE REST OF THE TEAM
Kristina Moller

SMART SET - Collection - TOPS - 2 views

  • APPAREL TOPS View all CARDIGANS SHAWLS SWEATERS BASICS BLOUSES FASHION TOPS T-SHIRTS TANKS & CAMIS BASICS BLAZERS & JACKETS DRESSES
    • Kristina Moller
       
      The background is most likely white to make the clothing stand out more against the background
    • Kristina Moller
       
      The picture labeled "Tops" at the top of the page- this picture uses attractive females who look happy and look like they're having fun. What the company is trying to say is that if you buy these clothes, you will look and feel like these women as well.
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  • APPAREL TOPS View all CARDIGANS SHAWLS SWEATERS BASICS BLOUSES FASHION TOPS T-SHIRTS TANKS & CAMIS BASICS BLAZERS & JACKETS DRESSES BOTTOMS View all BERMUDAS AND SHORTS CAPRIS PANTS SKIRTS DENIM DENIM SHOP SPECIAL SIZES TIGHTS, LEGGINGS AND SOCKS ACTIVEWEAR SMART DEALS SALE
    • Kristina Moller
       
      The Apparel is listed in a clear and easy to access way to make it simple for customers to skip around and look at each different clothing department. If it were difficult to do so, customers would get frustrated and give up.
  • SALE
    • Kristina Moller
       
      The word SALE is in large pink capital letters to draw peoples attention to it immediately. People see sale and they think "save money, spend money"
    • Kristina Moller
       
      Smart Set encourages you to "like" them on Facebook. This is so they can be always popping up on your news feed and therefore have more advertising
  • Sign up for updates
    • Kristina Moller
       
      "Sign Up for Updates" at the bottom of the page. If they get your email they can be constantly emailing you about their sales and new products and again, have more free advertising.
  • CHUNKY KNIT SWEATER $48.00 $14.99
    • Kristina Moller
       
      "Cunky Knit Sweater"- I would never buy this sweater online just because of the name its under. To me, that says this sweater will make you look heavy set.
J.Randolph Radney

Why the Positive Effects of Internet Use Outweigh the Bad - 7 views

  • Before we get onto the positive effects of internet use, let’s start with these much touted negative side effects.
    • Yingpeng Wu
       
      reduction to absurdity
    • Yingpeng Wu
       
      before we talk about the positive effect, we first talk something about negetive.
  • The same things were said about rock music when records were at their most popular, and about televisions when they were first invented.
    • Yingpeng Wu
       
      This is an Analogy: The comparison of among the Internet, rock music, and television. They are popular and controversial (with negative effects).
  • There are also positive effects of internet usage in business.
    • Yingpeng Wu
       
      Exemplification: Provide an example of good effect in business.
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  • anyone can make money online . With the ‘One Child One Laptop’ scheme that’s heading to Africa, and the large-scale attempts to provide the continent with a secure internet connection this could see one of the largest continents joining us online to share their views and earn themselves some money. This will give them access to all the education they could need as well as the resources they’d need to make the most of that. Many of them could see themselves working their way out of poverty – and online they can expect the same wages as other continents as its faceless nature eradicates discrimination. One of the positive effects of internet use then is that it could help some people in escaping from the poverty trap.
    • Yingpeng Wu
       
      this is another example for good effect of the Internet which is everyone can use the Internet making money.
  • Destroying industry and providing a place for these deviant ‘subcultures’ to converse? Those too are perhaps the most positive effects of internet use. These are the things that promise to change the way politics and business work forever and potentially usher in a new age of supreme democracy and resources. Granted, there are some sub groups online that we’d probably rather there weren’t, but at least if they’re online they can talk to each other and leave us alone. Other ‘subcultures’ however simply reflect different ways of thinking – and the internet gives them an open forum to freely express themselves, something that everyone has a right to do.
    • Yingpeng Wu
       
      This is a Paradox: the Internet can make deviant live normal
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      All your comments are relative to highlighted text. It would have been good to have included some floating sticky notes on more visual aspects of the site's message.
Ryan Khungay

TD Canada Trust - 2 views

shared by Ryan Khungay on 03 Dec 10 - Cached
  • "Highest in Customer Satisfaction Among Big Five Retail Banks"
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      This quote shows the ethos of the website. It is displaying that is has the highest customer satisfaction and this allows them to be more reliable and trustworthy. This simple quote also plays into the logos of the website. By using customer surveying it has proof of its reliability and it persuades the customer to choose this bank over others
  • Investment and wealth management for every stage of your life.
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      Having a heading such as markets & research displays the logos of this website. Displaying that this company does do research allows it to prove why it is the best bank to choose through statistics, evidence, data, and research.
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    • Ryan Khungay
       
      These two boxes at the bottom of the webpage give guarantees that TD is able to help, and make the customers finances easy. These guarantees are more examples of logos displayed on this webpage.
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      This heading speaking of safety, and security strengthen the ethos of the website because it allows the company to become more trustworthy. The more trust the company receives from customers, the more customers will believe what this company has to say.
  • TD Waterhouse  •  1Investment and wealth management for every stage of your life.
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      The heading speaking of earning bonus points, and more money with a certain type of credit card is another example of pathos. This will pull out emotions such as excitement and happiness from the audience.
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      The headings such as fraud prevention, green banking, community giving, first nations bank and so on give the website ethos because it is making the company come off as caring, environment friendly, safe, and non-discriminitory. What is not to trust?
  • Take a Tour!
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      This webpage uses highlighting techniques sparingly and because of this whatever highlighted either through bolded words, lines, or bullets really stands out. Also, there is a perfect amount of white space on this webpage which allows the text to be easy to read, and not so overwhelming.
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      The graphics used on this website are extremely appropriate and are not over used. The few graphics that are used stand out and make the audience actually pay attention to them.
  •  •  Corporate Information  •  Investor Relations  •  TD Economics  •  Community Giving  •  Career Centre  •  Press Releases  •  Fraud Prevention  •  Green Banking  •  Japanese Banking Centre  •  First Nations Bank
  • Contact Us
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      There is a contact us section that is very visable.
  • My Accounts    Customer Service     Products & Services    Markets & Research    Planning  
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      The webpage has a really good navigation section that is visible on each page that you visit throughout the webpage. Also the company's name is very clear and visible and by simply clicking the logo a viewer is re-directed back to the homepage.
  • Accounts   Personal Credit   Mortgages   Credit Cards   Foreign Currency Services   Student Life   Green Banking   Electronic Banking
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      This webpage also features a sub-navigation section so that one webpage is not overflowed with text. A customer can simply click on one of these sub-sections if they require any further information.
    • Ryan Khungay
       
      The fonts used on the webpage are simple and easy to read. Also, the same font is used throughout the webpage giving the webpage a nice clean look.
clement-esene

MTN Group - 0 views

shared by clement-esene on 16 Feb 12 - No Cached
    • clement-esene
       
      I find this web page interesting because of its rich content in graphics and writing. However, the graphics change every five seconds.
    • clement-esene
       
      The united against malaria flash at the bottom right corner of the page is an appeal to emotion.
    • clement-esene
       
      The united against malaria campaign at the bottom right corner of the web page is an appeal to emotion (Pathos). showing how they contribute to the society.
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    • clement-esene
       
      At the bottom of the display, there are little icons that take us to different pictures and write up. the first one is the audited results causing an appeal to credibility,( Ethos)
    • clement-esene
       
      Next to it is the icon that shows the brand name "MTN" indicating that they have been in business for 100 years. This is also an appeal to credibility.
    • clement-esene
       
      There is also an icon for MTN Apps Competition "Thinking outside the box". They keep the public actively involve in competitions that attract rewards this rewards will appeal to the emotions of the public. and also an appeal to logos
    • clement-esene
       
      The second to the last icon represents the number of subscribers gives an idea of billions of connections. this is an appeal to this is also an appeal to credibility and to emotion.
    • clement-esene
       
      There is also an icon that represent brand values: innovation, leadership, integrity, can-do and relationship. these brand values explain and summarizes the services and benefits the company offers. They appeal to emotion and credibility.
    • clement-esene
       
      The people potential section of the webpage shows job opportunities which is a practical evidence of what the company can offer the public apart from their immediate service. This produces an appeal to Reason (logos) and also to emotion.
    • clement-esene
       
      The shade of yellow determines the meaning. Pure, bright and sunny yellow is the easiest color to see. People who are blind to other colors can usually see yellow. Yellow is full of creative and intellectual energy. the bright yellow color on the logo creates reasoning and emotion.
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    This webpage is for a mobile network in Africa.
Kim Tuerlings

Corporate Culture Drives Customer Loyalty and Bottom-Line Profitability -- re> DALLAS, ... - 0 views

  • 1. Visionary leadership -- Leaders who are available, approachable and open with minimal micro management. 2. Consistent and effective communication -- Multi-way communication explains the "whys" information is shared and requested without fear of retribution. 3. Select for fit and ongoing development of staff -- Wait for the right person to fill a position and have the courage to let go of the wrong. 4. Agile and open culture -- A sense of pride, collaboration, respect and quality in a "blame-free" environment. 5. Put service first -- Strong standards put consumers first. In healthcare; that includes patients, families, physicians and colleagues. 6. Ongoing recognition and community outreach -- Recognition and appreciation must occur formally and informally at all levels. 7. Solid relationships -- Collaborative relationships are the key to success.
Cassaundra Rowe

Personal Characteristics & Skills of a Probation Officer | eHow.com - 2 views

    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The toolbar makes it easy to navigate the website
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The search box will make looking up certian keywords easier for any user
  • References Bureau of Labor Statistics: Probation Officers and Correctional Treatment Specialists
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      Allows for users to look at referances
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The list of Characteristics and Skills allows it to be read easily.
  • Top 5 To Try How to Become a Probation Officer in Canada Juvenile Probation Officer Qualifications The Training Required for a Probation Officer in Pennsylvania Definition of a Juvenile Probation Officer Probation Officer Rights
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      Top 5 links related to the subject helps to further the research aspect.
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      This clutters the web page. It is too close to the body of text.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The colour scheme is easy on the eyes. It is a nice contrast.
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I don't like the flashing of this picture. It draws the attention away.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I do not like pictures on a web page that I am trying to read.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      This one really does not communicate anything about Probation Officers.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I like how these are at the bottom of the page. Some websites have them on the side or on top.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I am refering to the other unrelated articles at the very bottom
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I feel this should be put somewhere else not right below the text of the article. For a few moments I thought it was a part of it.
  • Law-Abiding
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The large font of the characteristics allows the reader to know what the characteristics are, as they stand out.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      The font on thsi website is a perfect reading font. The background also is perfect for this type of website.
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      This looks as if it is a part of the text.
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    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      This is another repeat of the Top 5 to try and the related articles.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I am unsure if th comment box is really needed. But I like how it is at the end. It might be a basic thing ont he website, however some articles don't really need it.
  • Read Next Article UserAction.add(function() { $.getScript("http://s7.addthis.com/js/250/addthis_widget.js#username=dmseo", function(){ addthis.init(); }); });
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      This is another navigation key that is helpful for users. It just needs to be moved closer to the actualy text.
    • Cassaundra Rowe
       
      I also find it nice that the next article is related to this topic
anonymous

Starbucks Coffee Company - 1 views

shared by anonymous on 01 Dec 10 - Cached
Kim Tuerlings

Customer Retention: The Art of Keeping Good Customers - 1 views

  • Many organizations place their highest emphasis on attracting and gaining new customers. While this is important, I feel it is more important to place a higher emphasis on retaining and keeping your current customers. This is particularly true in saturated markets and industries, where your customers have many, many alternatives available to them. Numerous research studies have shown that if you can reduce your attrition rate, that is the annualized rate of lost customers, by as little as five percentage points, you can increase your bottom-line profits by anywhere from 25% to 85%. That's right, just keeping more of the customers you have and preventing them from taking their business elsewhere can have an immediate, positive impact on your bottom line
Japjot Singh

Justice Institute of British Columbia | Canada's leading public safety educator - 1 views

shared by Japjot Singh on 09 Mar 11 - No Cached
    • Japjot Singh
       
      The website uses blue color to appeal to its viewer.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      There are different sorts of appeal; what kind is blue likely to evoke? What sort of appeal is this (logos, ethos, pathos)?
    • Japjot Singh
       
      Blue color is likely to evoke the emotional approach of the reader. So, i would say it pathos
    • Japjot Singh
       
      The website uses various links at the bottom of the first page, so that viewer can get a better understand of the website. It also provides the company's contact details at the top right and bottom of the page, making it really easy for someone who wants to quickly look at some important data and then contact the company for more detailed information.
    • Japjot Singh
       
      The main page has a very strong impression on the viewer as it provides a very detailed information about six main outlines on the top of the first page and can be really helpful.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      What do you mean by 'impression'?
    • Japjot Singh
       
      By " Impression", I mean to say that the website impresses the viewer by providing almost all the required information under six main outlines on the front page. These "Drop down" boxes give an impression of a good website.
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  • Future Students Current Students Alumni International Clients Faculty & Staff
    • Japjot Singh
       
      Use of Quicklinks to target particular individuals for simplification of information.
  • Five things to know about JIBC
    • Japjot Singh
       
      Describes how jibc is changing itself to get more better(Enhancing law enforcement capacity, New JIBC website)  and providing extended services (like tution tax receipts)
    • Japjot Singh
       
      Uses various social networks to be accepted by wide variety of viewers.
  • Find Programs Find Courses
    • Japjot Singh
       
      A handy quick search for easy individual approach.
    • Japjot Singh
       
      Rhetorical Analysis on www.jibc.ca
romie_mui

Reading in a Whole New Way | 40th Anniversary | Smithsonian Magazine - 5 views

    • Elias Rumley
       
      Right away, skimming the page, I feel that there needs to be more pictures. E-readers struggle to keep their attention to text for an extended period, so pictures will help break the monotony.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      This is a great idea, Elias. Do you have some particular pictures in mind?
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      The picture provides a good visual that precedes the actual topic
  • American prosperity and liberty grew out of a culture of reading and writing.
    • Elias Rumley
       
      Very strong statement. Perhaps a tad over-reaching, but it is effective in demonstrating the writer's belief that literacy is key in culture.
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  • As digital screens proliferate and people move from print to pixel, how will the act of reading change?
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      Clearly states the general topic in a simple and easily understood manner right away
  • Books were good at developing a contemplative mind. Screens encourage more utilitarian thinking. A new idea or unfamiliar fact will provoke a reflex to do something: to research the term, to query your screen “friends” for their opinions, to find alternative views, to create a bookmark, to interact with or tweet the thing rather than simply contemplate it.
    • farouk hamood
       
      interesting
  • In ancient times, authors often dictated their books. Dictation sounded like an uninterrupted series of letters, so scribes wrote down the letters in one long continuous string, justastheyoccurinspeech. Text was written without spaces between words until the 11th century. This continuous script made books hard to read, so only a few people were accomplished at reading them aloud to others. Being able to read silently to yourself was considered an amazing talent. Writing was an even rarer skill. In 15th-century Europe only one in 20 adult males could write.
    • Jordan Turgeon
       
      An interesting summary of reading and writing during the ealier times
  • The first screens that overtook culture, several decades ago—the big, fat, warm tubes of television—reduced the time we spent reading to such an extent that it seemed as if reading and writing were over. Educators, intellectuals, politicians and parents worried deeply that the TV generation would be unable to write.
    • Elias Rumley
       
      It's interesting to see that, at one point, professionals believed writing would become a rare skill and the rarity of literacy would regress back to ancient times.
  • Pixels encourage numeracy and produce rivers of numbers flowing into databases.
    • Elias Rumley
       
      Very strong imagery, that effectively contrasts the pixels (which are small and humble) produce a river (usually powerful and comparitively large) of information.
  • Books  
  • But screens engage our bodies. Touch screens respond to the ceaseless caress of our fingers.
  • The most physically active we may get while reading a book is to flip the pages or dog-ear a corner.
    • romie_mui
       
      interesting point
  •  The most physically active we may get while reading a book is to flip the pages or dog-ear a corner.  But screens engage our bodies. Touch screens respond to the ceaseless caress of our fingers.
  • or dog
  • pages or dog -ear a corner.   But screens
J.Randolph Radney

Learn about | Greenpeace Canada - 0 views

  • The ocean may look calm and serene, but beneath the surface is a different story. Around the world, our oceans are in crisis. Decades of industrial fishing have taken a massive toll on marine ecosystems, yet our appetite for seafood has never been so great. Even the deep and remote areas that once served as refuges from fishing are no longer safe havens; today the fish have no place to hide.
    • Sergio Lourenco
       
      This selection is using pathos because it uses words such as crisis and refuges which might make someone feel saddened to know what is happening to fish.
  • We have a responsibility to protect our oceans for future generations. To help supermarkets and consumers make better seafood purchasing choices, Greenpeace has created a Redlist of the 15 most destructively fished or farmed species, including Atlantic cod, tropical shrimp and some tuna. (Click here for the complete Redlist.) Greenpeace wants supermarkets to stop stocking Redlisted species and develop sustainable seafood policies. The fish on the Redlist are there because fishery and/or production methods have negative impacts on the target species and/or other marine species, lead to ecosystem alterations, have social implications or are poorly managed or corrupt. Each Redlist fish went through the Greenpeace red-grade criteria — one for wild species and one for farmed. During the ongoing assessment process, Greenpeace reviews the most recent scientific research relating to each stock or aquaculture system, scrutinizes government sources and consults grading schemes used by other organizations.
    • Sergio Lourenco
       
      This selection is an example of logos because through this style of writing, the author tries to pursuade the reader by telling them about the things that happen to marine species including things like fishery and production methods.
  • Greenpeace believes the only way to allow our oceans to recover and ensure there are fish for the future is to stop overfishing and destructive practices such as bottom trawling and dredging, while protecting our polar oceans and setting aside no-take areas in marine reserves to safeguard against growing threats from climate change and ocean acidification. In Canada and around the world, progress in marine protection has been slow. Greenpeace is working to step up the pace by lobbying governments and industry.
    • Sergio Lourenco
       
      Another example of logos
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  • From coast to coast, Canadians are witnessing ocean mismanagement firsthand. Cod have all but vanished on the East Coast, and on the West Coast, millions of Sockeye salmon have disappeared from the Fraser River. On a global scale, this mismanagement is magnified, with less than one per cent of the world’s oceans protected, and species such as bluefin tuna and sharks nearing the point of complete collapse. More than 90 per cent of large predatory species such as tuna, cod and swordfish have vanished from our oceans. On harmful longlines set out for swordfish, sea turtles are being slaughtered by the thousands — innocent victims of irresponsible ocean management and a lack of proper regulation.
    • Sergio Lourenco
       
      This selection shows ethos and pathos being used. They use facts to try and appeal to someone's emotion and by using facts and stats they also try to show the wrongdoing of government regulations.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Note the distinctive font chosen for the Greenpeace logo. What does this say about the organization?
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Note the connection between the green banner colour and the name Greenpeace.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Note how easy it is for readers to get on Greenpeace's mailing list.
    • J.Randolph Radney
       
      Links to other important information are very easy to find.
sarah omens

CIM - 1 views

shared by sarah omens on 24 Feb 11 - Cached
  • One of Canada’s Best Workplaces    |    CIM wins 50 Best Managed Companies for 10th Consecutive Year    |    CIM partners with INQ!    |    Mike Britton appointed new President, CIM North America    |    
  • > GREAT CAREERS HERE
    • sarah omens
       
      i dont like how they hide the great careers here. i took me a while to figure out how to find their job posting and other stuff.
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    my english rhets work
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    i like this website because it not boring at all. its very colorfull and it has the screen changing constantly
trehbein

Peace River Coal | Peace River Coal Home Page - 0 views

  • Peace River Coal Inc., a producer of high-quality metallurgical coal for export, from Canada is jointly owned by Anglo American plc, Hillsborough Resources Ltd., and NEMI Northern Energy and Mining Inc. Anglo American holds a 74% interest in Peace River Coal. Peace River Coal owns substantial coal properties in the Peace River region of northeast British Columbia.
    • trehbein
       
      This paragraph seems a bit jumbled. Because it's the first text people read, it may be more beneficial to state something more general and audience-friendly. What is written here seems a bit technical to jump into right off the start. Or, instead of having it all in one paragraph, it could be split into bullet points for easier reading.
  •  local and other partners
    • trehbein
       
      'Local and others' seems very vague. Something like 'With the help of our local and global partners,' may be more straightforward. It almost seems like using 'others' could be misinterpreted for the reader to think that the company is hiding something about their partners.
  • Click here to view our photo gallery.
    • trehbein
       
      Good lead-in to the photo gallery; straightforward and simple.
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  • Privacy Policy | Terms & Conditions
    • trehbein
       
      Good use of the bottom of the page to give links to other parts of the site. Helps make the page look 'complete'.
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    My Rhetorical Analysis Markup (Peace River Coal website)
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    Tammy's Rhetorical Analysis Markup (Peace River Coal website)
Stewart Matthews

Canada Banking, Investing, and Insurance - RBC - 0 views

    • Stewart Matthews
       
      Shows pathos, Canada is known as being very open to immagrants, and this show that RBC welcomes it as well.
    • Stewart Matthews
       
      This shows logos, the statistics are there that online banking fraud is a growing problem, and RBC is giving you the tools you need to minimize your risk.
    • Stewart Matthews
       
      Example of pathos, basically showing off their accomplishments and donations. Could possibly make someone wnat to switch from their current bank.
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    • Stewart Matthews
       
      Another appeal to pathos, showing how quick and easy it is to get banking advice, making your online experience that much easier.
  • Learn More Corporate Profile Corporate Governance History Voluntary Codes & Public Commitments News & Information Investor Relations Media Newsroom Economics Publications RBC and... Newcomers to Canada Corporate Responsibility Donations Sponsorships The Environment Diversity How to... Contact us Make a Complaint Become an Employee Become a Vendor
    • Stewart Matthews
       
      Very easy to use options at the bottom, clear and easy to understand. Makes the things that the average person might be looking for easy to access.
    • Stewart Matthews
       
      Keeps you up to date on the newest developments with RBC.
    • Stewart Matthews
       
      Example of pathos, appealing to everyone's need for a sence of security.
    • Stewart Matthews
       
      If you are a current customer, they make signing in to the website quick adn easy. If not, the first thing you would see would be the "enroll now" button.
    • Stewart Matthews
       
      Shows a happy young couple, possibly trying to attract young newly married or soon to be married couples to put their money in RBC.
    • Stewart Matthews
       
      The whole main page is kept very simple, requiring the reader to click around on what they want without having to read anything that is not crucial to them.
sarah omens

Great Place to Work® Institute - 0 views

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    • sarah omens
       
      so highlighted this entire page becouse this page general talk about their achievement and what they have been able to do over the past few year.the phrase " i look foward to work here'' is a good opening just to let you know that they care about their employee. when you read more you realize they are are not just blowing their own horn but also willing to tell you what makes it a good whork .
Brian Beck

| Ibanez guitars - 1 views

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    • Brian Beck
       
      Links to all the different types of guitars makes it easy to navigate to where you want to go, and the images paried with them help to catch your eye.
    • Brian Beck
       
      A larger set of links at the bottom of the page can take you away from the products to information on artists, news, archives and more. This is good, as it helps find information faster.
Alexander Condon

A Conservative Choice for President | Michele Bachmann for President | MicheleBachmann.com - 0 views

  • Michele wants government to make the kind of serious spending decisions that many families and small businesses have been forced to make.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Here she is aligning herself with the middle-class which could serve to distinguish her from some of the other Republican candidates who have been critiqued for over-looking the middle-class. It also alludes to her dissatisfaction with recent government spending and bailout packages. She is siding with the everyday American who protested the extreme government spending amid the recession. Provides pathos as it shows her sense of financial responsibility and similarity with everyday Americans.
  • Michele is a leading advocate for tax reform, a staunch opponent of wasteful government spending, and a strong proponent of adherence to the Constitution, as intended by the Founding Fathers.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The sentence is elegantly written and effectively uses parallel structure which appeals to the audience's logic. The sentence concludes with a reference to the Founding Fathers which rouses nostalgia for the beginning of the United States. This nostalgia can be very affective as many Americans (especially Republicans) feel that government was best under the Founding Fathers. The Founding Fathers personify all that is great about being American-independence, democracy and strength. Founding Fathers also alludes to the joyous celebration of the Fourth of July (Independence Day) which provokes pathos.There is also a simile here as she compares herself to the Founding Fathers.
  • She is also a defender of the unborn and staunchly stands for religious liberties.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      As " a defender of the unborn", Bachmann positions herself as pro-life. The phrase is a euphemism as it is a nicer way of saying against abortion. The second part of the sentence "staunchly stands for religious liberties" is likely a second euphemism stating her siding with the bible on topics such as same-sex marriage. Both stances develop ethos especially amongst Republicans and may also appeal to emotion as the topics are deeply personal.
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  • In July 2010, Michele hosted the first Tea Party Caucus meeting. She is seen as a champion of Tea Party values
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Here she positions herself of a leader of the Tea Party which adds considerable credibility (ethos) to her candidacy because of the Tea Party's considerable resources and growing popularity. It is important for Bachmann to identify herself as a leader as that is what people are voting for. Also note how the term "champion" is consistent with the website's continued emphasis on winning.
  • Michele and Marcus have five children, Lucas, Harrison, Elisa, Caroline, and Sophia. In addition, the Bachmann family has opened their home to 23 foster children
    • Alexander Condon
       
      This sentence develops both ethos and pathos. Ethos as she is seen more reputable and trustworthy by having such a large and seemingly happy family. The main purpose here is pathos as she depicts herself as a loving and devoted humanitarian. She is portrayed here as a mother figure, someone responsible that can look after a large and diverse household (a metaphor for the United States?).This last statement develops a paradox between her portrayal throughout the passage as a tough candidate like one of the Founding Fathers, and her portrayal as a loving, responsible mother who can take care of the nation. Very Interesting.
  • Michele is the first Republican woman to be elected to the U.S. House of Representatives from Minnesota
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Interestingly, this is the only line in the passage that directly points to Bachmann's uniqueness as a female candidate. Potential supporters who were unsure whether she could become the first female president will be reinforced by her being the first Republican elected to the House of Representatives from Minnesota. It achieves ethos as she becomes a more credible candidate as well as logos because "if she was the first woman from Minnesota than why can't she be the first woman president". For the female audience, it may also be pathos as she is seen as breaking down barriers to womens freedom.
  • Michele Bachmann is running for president to bring a new voice to the White House
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The main use of rhetoric in Bachmann's opening line is "bring a new voice to the White House". The new voice rhetoric is very common among presidential candidates as it is a metaphor for change. Indirectly this new voice represents the possibility of correcting the current governmental problems. It appeals mostly to ethos as it could inspire hope in the audience. 
  • She recognized the need for quality schools and subsequently started a charter school for at-­‐risk kids in Minnesota.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The sentence develops ethos and pathos in the audience. Ethos as her character and reputation is bolstered by her emphasis on education. Pathos as she highlights having started a school for at-risk kids; specifying "at-risk kids" adds emotion to the description and depicts her as empathetic. 
  • Serving on the Intelligence Committee, she has consistently advocated peace through strength to ensure America's national security. She has proudly taken a vow to support and defend the Constitution of the United States against all enemies, foreign and domestic.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Here she states her stance on foreign policy. She successfully aligns herself with the Americans who seek an end to the War in Afghanistan by stating that "she has consistently advocated peace". Also she answers the critics who think she won't be tough enough by saying that "she has proudly taken a vow to support and defend the Constitution of the United States against all enemies". She shows experience and ability by having served on the Intelligence Committee (logos). "Taking a vow" appeals to emotion as it carries the connotative meaning of commitment, dedication, and marriage. 
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The video introduction is a very persuasive addition to the website for several reasons:1. It provides a quick synopsis of the website that young voters and those pressed for time will greatly appreciate.2. Logos: She emphasizes having already been successful as a congresswoman. Describes herself as a hard-worker. Also note the attention to detail in having the message exactly one minute long.3. Ethos: She begins by establishing herself as an official candidate having done all the paperwork. Seems trustworthy through eye contact and fluent speech.4. Pathos:Talks about "taking your voice" to the White House and being a "winning team". Concludes by passionately telling viewers that "we can do this".
    • Alexander Condon
       
      It's worth noting that she's wearing the exact same outfit from the picture in the top. This aspect is puzzles me, perhaps it's done to depict her as simple and relatable to the everyday American. Very interesting. 
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Argument/PurposeThe website is intended to convince Republican delegates and all other voting-age American citizens that Michele Bachmann should become the next US President and that they should vote for her.  Audience: The audience is voting-age Americans. It is not intended for Canadians or audiences from any other nationalities.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The picture depicts Bachmann as patriotic (the flag on her collar), conservative (seems to be conservatively dressed), and happy (the big smile-ethos). It's interesting that she's not looking at the camera but rather up and to the side. Might have been done because she looks better from this angle, or potentially to show her as ambitious and aspiring. -also note her husband's smiling picture located underneath the video. He is well-dressed (ethos) and again smiling (pathos). Showing that she's married also adds to her candidacy especially among the more conservative Republicans.  
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Bachmann logo found here at the top as well as at the very bottom serves to authenticate the document. It's symbolic of an official stamp or even the presidential seal. Of note are the stars (again the allusion to success and winning, as well as patriotic); the red, white, and blue classic American colours; and the red and white stripes through the 'H' in Bachmann which allude to the American flag. The authenticity of the stamp appeals to the logic (logos) of the viewer as well as adding to Bachmann's credibility (ethos). The patriotic symbolism appeals to the strong patriotic emotions of the visitors. 
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The page is entitled "A Conservative Choice for President | Michele Bachmann for President". It is significant because Michele is a Republican candidate and the party is built on conservatism. She is evoking ethos as stressing herself as a "Conservative Choice" establishes her as a good fit for the party. 
    • Alexander Condon
       
      The page exhibits a red, white, and blue theme. These symbolic American colours are used to evoke both pathos and ethos in visitors. Pathos as the colours appeal to emotions by giving American's a comforting patriotic feeling. Ethos as the colours help develop Bachmann's character as patriotic, loyal, and trust worthy. The colours also make it nice to read as they provide visual continuity.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      also of note are the American flags hanging down from both sides which could be metaphoric of the hanging flags during the presidential inauguration
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Notice how she puts social media options: email, texting, facebook, right at the top of the page where they will be seen by most visitors. This increases the accessibility to her site and updates and will be welcomed by younger voters especially. It also shows her as technically savvy and in-touch with the latest in technology (ethos).  
    • Alexander Condon
       
      It's interesting the attention being payed to social media in the wake of Obama being so effective using these tools in the last election
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Another purpose of the site is to bring in donations from supporters to fund her campaigning. Notice how the donate button is coloured red so to stand out and draw attention. The red colour actually makes the audience want to click it, especially as it stands out from the other white tabs. It's that red button that we all want to press.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Pictures of Bachmann speaking with people in the community are persuasive by developing logos, ethos, and pathos. Logos: seeing her speaking with seemingly everyday people adds support to her claims of being "the voice of the people". Ethos: the pictures make her appear more trustworthy and reputable. especially the picture of her shaking a woman's handPathos: She is again smiling in the pictures which evokes happiness. She is also photographed speaking with hand gestures which shows passion. 
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Notice the applauding crowd in the background; the viewer assumes that the crowd is applauding for Bachmann and this provokes ethos as her credibility is enhanced by the image. It is also potentially pathos as it can be seen as a metaphoric image of a crowd during a (presidential) victory speech. The symbolic image of the victory speech evokes happy emotions of winning; relate it back to the video where she calls it "a winning team".
    • Alexander Condon
       
      the audience almost seems to be looking up and towards the webpage, as if applauding Bachmann's message
  • she spent five years as a federal tax litigation attorney, working on hundreds of civil and criminal cases. That experience solidified her strong support for efforts to simplify the Tax Code and reduce tax burdens on family and small business budgets.
    • Alexander Condon
       
      Here she documents her considerable experience with the tax system (logos). It serves to back her claims at being able to reform the tax system. Also we again see her aligning with the middle-class.
Khalid Alomar

Willis eTech Web Sites | Web Site SEO | Social Media | Photography | Video - 1 views

    • Khalid Alomar
       
      Their logo is good, simple, and uses only two colors which is a good example of logo practice. However, the way it presents this logo in the website made it as a new logo because of the big line behind it and the clip-arts a long with it. 
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    • Khalid Alomar
       
      there is no point of having rate this item in the home page of the website that presenting the company objectives. 
  • "Your Partner in Promotion"
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      Liked their slogan. 
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  • Social Media Twitter Sign UpFaceBook Sign UpYou Tube Sign UpLinkedIn Sign UpTwellow Sign UpDownload TweetdeckMashableSocial Media ExaminerSendible Tweet Scheduler
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      A bad way of presenting the social website with the "Sign Up" along with it! and why they referee to these social website if they well known website?
  • Let's Talk About... content management facebook Internet Marketing Media social social media social media circle social media training tool kit Training training Tweetdeck tweetdeck Tweetdeck Training twellow twitter web design web sites youtube
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      A good way of using the trends that's shows the most using words in Willis eTech website pages.
  • Main Menu HOMECONTACT USLATEST NEWSSite MapPrivacy Statement
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      should be up in the page not in the middle. 
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    • Khalid Alomar
       
      uses the social networks tools is indeed a good way of communicating and distributing their website. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      use social networks icons and pictures is more effective than text and it gets the attention of the person faster than usual. Willis eTech website did a good job on it here. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      The feedback button one of the good practice to do in website that want to interactive with the visitors. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      the quality of the image is not that good which needs some improvements. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      The usability buttons presented here in well shape. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      The website has used this picture (the handshake) to welcome their visitors to their website, though I wanted it to be larger than now.
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      the background white color of this home page should be separate with a different color than the middle thread or the main topic we could call it. 
    • Khalid Alomar
       
      Having a twitter block streaming into the website will increase the followers in twitter as well as having a connection between Wills eTech website and twitter. 
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