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No Point of View!

Opening with this comment welcomes the reader and makes me feel as if the author has truly considered the issue at hand.

This comment gives me the impression that the author wants to make sure that what he thinks the issues is, actually is what the problem is. This shows caring and intelligence.

This paragraph makes me feel as if the author actually understands multiple viewpoints.

Nice touch, Great way to accentuate your idea.

You have a good paragraph here with your ideas, However I feel like there are too many questions.

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This comment makes me feel like rhetoric isn't such a bad thing even though I hate it.

This helps in my understanding of rhetoric and makes me want to use rhetoric to see the truth.

This is a good way to look at rhetoric. It gives me a new perspective on it.

I think this is a good way to get people interested in what they are proposng. They are drawing people in by saying that the benefits are so great you can't even imagine them.

This approach is preetty successful in my opinion. They are saying it is necessary for society. I feel this approach gets the attention of many different audiences in many different ways.

Using words like this makes me want to sign the petition simply because it sounds so important and urgent.

I believe that I am good at listening. Whenever a friend or anyone in general needs to vent about someone or something, I always try my best to be available. I actually listen and for the most part, if I am not overwhelmed with occurences in my life, I genuinely care. I offer advice when I feel it is necessary. Even if I give bad advice, or even if they do not take it, I still offer it just in case they decide to use it. Having someone that is able and willing to listen to you, whether good or bad news, helps to release stress. Although I think I am a good listener, I am horrible at talking. I do not like to share my feelings with many people. The only emotions I do show are when I am happy or excited. When I am sad or unhappy I do not like to share those feelings with anyone because I do not want to burden other people with my troubles. Even though I feel like sharing my troubles with my friends produces stress for them, I have been told that not talking to them stresses them out more than if I had just talked to them in the first place. So for anyone who is listening and cares to take it, my advice is don't keep your feelings to yourself because it just brings more stress to everyone involved! Let your friends and family know what is going on in your life and both you and them will be less stressed.