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Ashlee Duckworth

YouTube - VitaminWater commercial: LeBron James, Ace Attorney (2008) - 0 views

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shared by Ashlee Duckworth on 10 Sep 08 - Cached
  • Ashlee Duckworth on 10 Sep 08
     
    This television commercial is a representation of an ethos appeal of rhetoric. The fact that Lebron James has nothing to do with vitamin water, and yet is advertising for it shows that he is using his popularity to sell this product. Lebron James is known for his athletic abilities, he doesn't say anything about how the water tastes or what benefits drinking it gives you.
Cybil Scott

Alex Gutierrez - 0 views

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shared by Cybil Scott on 28 Nov 08 - No Cached
  • Equal access to clean water, healthcare, education, influence in political issues, and access to systems within a society are all social injustices that plague our world. Many individuals have come together, forming groups and communities in an a
    • Michael Gutierrez
      Michael Gutierrez on 28 Nov 08
       
      I dont see how any of these are social injustices.
  • poverty
    • Michael Gutierrez
      Michael Gutierrez on 28 Nov 08
       
      corruption
  • The choices were made indirectly for them, and without money and power had no say or influence.
    • Michael Gutierrez
      Michael Gutierrez on 28 Nov 08
       
      This sentence needs to be changed. Watch sentence structure
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  • The second reason is political ineptitude, or lack of influence due to religion, ethnicity or gender. Rwanda is made up of many different tribes.
    • Michael Gutierrez
      Michael Gutierrez on 28 Nov 08
       
      Dont understand this sentence
  • By supporting those that have been directly affected provides a foundation with which they can gain confidence to take action.
    • Michael Gutierrez
      Michael Gutierrez on 28 Nov 08
       
      I dont understand this sentence completely.
  • The main goals of social injustice groups are to put an end to harsh societal realities, and help the downtrodden to recover.
    • Michael Gutierrez
      Michael Gutierrez on 28 Nov 08
       
      You can never eliminate them completely
  • Some may find this statement to be ironic in the fact that social injustices are due to humans taking advantage of others.
    • Michael Gutierrez
      Michael Gutierrez on 28 Nov 08
       
      I dont completely agree with this Alex
  • where the strong survive.
    • Michael Gutierrez
      Michael Gutierrez on 28 Nov 08
       
      In this situation I do not completely agree. The strong dont survive genocide.
  • somewhat
    • Cybil Scott
      Cybil Scott on 28 Nov 08
       
      repetitive
  • affects
    • Cybil Scott
      Cybil Scott on 28 Nov 08
       
      effects
  • American’s
    • Cybil Scott
      Cybil Scott on 28 Nov 08
       
      no apostrophe here
  • Tutsi’s
    • Cybil Scott
      Cybil Scott on 28 Nov 08
       
      no apostrophe
  • 2 U.S.
    • Cybil Scott
      Cybil Scott on 28 Nov 08
       
      write out the numbers
  • believe that humans should have a somewhat innate human condition
    • Cybil Scott
      Cybil Scott on 28 Nov 08
       
      they do? and what does that mean exactly?
  • So I plan to stay active in the ONE community and do my small parts in helping our world progress
    • Cybil Scott
      Cybil Scott on 28 Nov 08
       
      i dont feel as if this essay was about personal reflection. how did you feel, how did you interact with the online community?
  • but to some, however crazy it sounds is logical in their eyes
    • Cybil Scott
      Cybil Scott on 28 Nov 08
       
      should probably fix this sentence
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