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morgan macbride

Educational Problems among Different Ethnic Groups: Trifecta - 3 views

  • And how all these different learning methods affect individual ways of thinking?
    • morgan macbride
       
      this intro is good but comes off a little bit like an informercial
  • t is an introduction.
    • morgan macbride
       
      maybe connect this sentence to the last with a semi colon.
  • surrounding problems
    • morgan macbride
       
      switch order, put "problems surrounding"
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  • I realized that there are millions of blogs that relate to my topic: Education.
    • morgan macbride
       
      add a hook or something funny
  • I personally
    • morgan macbride
       
      "and personally, I agree with him"
  • cool things
    • morgan macbride
       
      I like the informal tone of your voice, its engaging
  • ust like other readers
    • morgan macbride
       
      "just like other readers, I had to nod my....."
morgan macbride

Celebrities: Our Walking Ads: Trifecta! - 3 views

  • Nope, I’m definitely not a hater of celebrity gossip.
    • morgan macbride
       
      double negative can be tricky, maybe just stick to stating what you think instead of what not not you think if that makes any sense
  • it’s being a bit annoying with our incessant talk about the latest celeb news
    • morgan macbride
       
      dont quite understand this sentence
  • The Superficial
    • morgan macbride
       
      maybe continue to make this a link
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  • It is so weird to look back at the older posts of bloggers who've been around for quite some time. I missed a lot of information in my pre-gossip life (have I mentioned that keeping up with the gossip of our times is a new venture for me??). So browsing the past brought up a lot of "she did whats?!" that would make the avid gossipists look away with shame at my naivety.  But I like to think that it gives me a fresh outlook on the news; none of the usual bias latched on to each person.  So how does one get started in this messy gossip business? It all starts with some innocent curiosity, a click of a link here or there, watching the girls sitting in front of you in class surf perezhilton.com
    • morgan macbride
       
      Great intro to a post, very funny
  • which is obvious
    • morgan macbride
       
      "which may be obvious to us"
morgan macbride

State of The Pop Scene: Trifecta - 2 views

  • jazz artists include John Coltrane, Brian Blade, Vincent Herring, Bill Evans, and Joshua Redman.
    • morgan macbride
       
      great list of jazz artists, i like how you juxtapose this list with that of a group of musicians from a completely different genre
    • morgan macbride
       
      great list of jazz artists, i like how you juxtapose this list with that of a group of musicians from a completely different genre
  • or plague, depending on the song
    • morgan macbride
       
      funny idea, maybe take out of parenthesis
  • urthermore, Mike displays a clear command of sarcasm and a witty sensibility which I appreciate very much.
    • morgan macbride
       
      i feel the sarcasm too, but maybe state why you feel it is sarcastic
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  • (http://popdivalc.blogspot.com/2010/02/wgo-may-best-charity-single-win.html)
    • morgan macbride
       
      use the link feature so you dont have to see the entire web address
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    funny idea
morgan macbride

Is Google Making Us Stupid? - Magazine - The Atlantic - Nicholas Carr - 11 views

  • The faster we surf across the Web—the more links we click and pages we view—the more opportunities Google and other companies gain to collect information about us and to feed us advertisements.
  • The last thing these companies want is to encourage leisurely reading or slow, concentrated thought. It’s in their economic interest to drive us to distraction.
    • morgan macbride
       
      very interesting concept
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      its all about marketing and not conveying any messages
  • “I now have almost totally lost the ability to read and absorb a longish article on the web or in print,
    • morgan macbride
       
      so many applications has shortened my attention span has dramatically shortened
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  • For me, as for others, the Net is becoming a universal medium, the conduit for most of the information that flows through my eyes and ears and into my mind.
    • morgan macbride
       
      very true
  • Never has a communications system played so many roles in our lives—or exerted such broad influence over our thoughts—as the Internet does today.
    • morgan macbride
       
      this is especially true for me, there is no time in the day i am not checking my email, text, or facebook. They have become an interactive schedule planner that seem never to turn off
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    "Never has a communications system played so many roles in our lives-or exerted such broad influence over our thoughts-as the Internet does today." This idea is extremely true in my life as I feel much of my communication is via text, facebook, or email. I at times almost finding myself losing touch with reality and physical contact and becoming complacent sending some non emotional or important information to a friend. The lack of physical communication can at times make me feel like a recluse. But at the same time, the easy and quick nature of this new technology almost makes it difficult to go back to the way things were
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    "Just as there's a tendency to glorify technological progress, there's a countertendency to expect the worst of every new tool or machine." This too is another really important point, the efficiency of the Net and other sources via the computer should not entirely take the place of reading of books and other sorts of literature that existed far before the Net. Much of what I read on the Net is useless chit chat that is merely for my entertainment. And the useful and thought provoking information on the Net is simply a copy of literature from a book or a law journal, it just is easier to access on my computer from my bed. In this regard, the Net is a great service, you just have to remember what information is useful and what information is not.
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    The recurring theme that the Net is an extension allowing Google and other companies to feed us more advertisements and learn more about us is somewhat startling. The fact that every website and email we write can be tracked and looked at is a little invasive to say the least. In this sense, the Net's alluring attractions are also a trick to market us and use our information to exploit our monies.
morgan macbride

The CLIC Network - 0 views

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    similar system to what we are thinking of doing our website on
morgan macbride

Educational Problems among Different Ethnic Groups - 3 views

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    "First of all, this blog looks boring. I was thinking why is he adding a picture of a pit crew in an education theme? Plus, the whole blog design is full of cluttering and is very difficult to navigate through or search for new things. HOWEVER!" This post has a great voice, that by the first few sentences, is clearly very conversational and informal. The use of questions replicate a real conversation where in you interact with the listener or reader. Then the dramatic use of HOWEVER shows expression and excitement. This in general makes the blog for me much easier to read as I don't have to be so serious and pay attention to every word. I like this voice for these reasons.
morgan macbride

Voice Ex (Morgan MacBride) - 0 views

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    "Black applicants are more than five times as likely as whites to be accepted to private schools, and 220 times as likely to be accepted at public schools." This is a use of statistics that does more than merely display numerical data. The extreme nature of these statistics shows her voice in that it calls into question the validity of affirmative action and those that fervently support it
morgan macbride

Against the Odds with Admissions Gods - 0 views

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    "Her words and voice shall enlighten the many ignorant who naively call opponents to affirmative racist. America is a land of opportunity, freedom, and most importantly equality. It is the barbaric mechanisms of discrimination such as affirmative action, that erode the perilous work America has done to establish itself as the great country it is today." This clearly shows my voice and my tone towards the issue of affirmative action
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