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Dongoh Kim

Multimedia Literature Review essays - 0 views

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    I found this website that includes many professional essays on literature review
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    I found this website that includes many professional essays on literature review
Dongoh Kim

SAT-Literature_Report.pdf (application/pdf 객체) - 0 views

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    This is a very interesting literature review. It is about the SAT for University entrance.
Lauren Goehner

Sports Cereal: Trifecta - 1 views

  • It was wild.
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      haha, I like your voice and use of shorter sentences. Good intro.
  • I decided that I should input my opinions on sports related issues and so I started this blog. I pride myself on trying to being fair. I still have my favorite sports teams and athletes that I root for, but I strive to be fair in my sports related analyses. I guess you'll agree or disagree based on my upcoming posts.
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      nice way to tell us about what you will be blogging about, while giving insight into your personality and character
  • So let’s go over the credentials again: live in the second largest sports market; college student; and willing to admit things that might be painful. Alright, looks good.
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      good voice
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  • a sport I have loved since birth basically
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      maybe add the basically earlier -- "a sport I have basically loved since birth"
  • Basically, he doesn’t sound like he’s whining and that’s a good thing for the reader.
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      good intro/summary about simmons - i like that you use your voice to talk about his
  • persona
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      maybe a new word for persona?
  • He finds the right balance.
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      good job reviewing his blog, but maybe include a couple sentences at the end about how it might influence your writing, or some way to kind of sum it up/conclude the post and wrap it up
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