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Antonia Gujinovic

Heart and Stroke Foundation of Canada - Homepage - 0 views

www.heartandstroke.com/...Home.htm

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      Antonia Gujinovic on 05 Mar 12
       
      This is a Canadian website, but the Heart and Stroke Foundations recognizes that heart disease can affect anyone and that Canada is a multicultural country. So they have included resources in other languages to accommodate more readers. (ethos)
       
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    • Antonia Gujinovic
      Antonia Gujinovic on 05 Mar 12
       
      This box of info is an appeal to emotions. Not only is it stating what the #1 killer of women is, but it is listing what women are. Grandmothers, mothers, wives, daughters and sisters. This takes the reader from thinking about a woman in general to making the reader think of their own mother, sister, wife, daughter or grandmother.
       
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      Antonia Gujinovic on 05 Mar 12
       
      The three short words "Make Death Wait" are very impact-full. Just the name of the campaign appeals to the emotions before even knowing what the campaign is about. We all know death is inevitable and that for some it happens sooner than it should. So the thought of making something inevitable wait gives hope.
       
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Antonia Gujinovic

Women and heart disease infographic - Heart and Stroke Foundation of Canada - 0 views

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    • Antonia Gujinovic
      Antonia Gujinovic on 05 Mar 12
       
      This picture quickly and effectively shows the number of deaths from heart disease and how much more common it is in women then in men. (pathos and logos)
       
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    • Antonia Gujinovic
      Antonia Gujinovic on 05 Mar 12
       
      This fact shows how much more common heart disease really is than breast cancer. The site is trying to prove and changes peoples perception that heart disease not only is more common in men than in women, but it is also leads to more deaths than breast cancer. (pathos and logos)
       
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    • Antonia Gujinovic
      Antonia Gujinovic on 05 Mar 12
       
      This graph is meant to portray the numbers of death in women from heart disease by province and territory in Canada. It is misleading. It gives just a number of women who have passed away in each region making it look like Ontario is the province to stay away from. If they had created a graph using percentages of CVD in women compared to the population of women for each region then we would be able to see the rates of disease for each population. The way the graph is done now may send people packing for Nunavut. (logos)
       
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      Antonia Gujinovic on 05 Mar 12
       
      This is a great break-down and quick way of showing what can greatly increase a woman's risk of heart disease and by how much. Because it is so concise the information is more useful and likely to have a greater effect on the reader.
       
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lindsay jmaiff

WWF Canada - About WWF - 0 views

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  • Senator Alan MacNaughton, and has become one of the country's leading conservation organizations, enjoying the active support of more than 150,000 Canadians. We connect the power of a highly respected and effective global network to on-the-ground efforts across Canada
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      lindsay jmaiff on 05 Mar 12
       
      Ethos gives credibility to the statement using terms such as "actice support of 150 000 canadians" and descripters such as "highly respected", and "effective" play to the reader giving them confidence in the organization
       
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    About world wildlife fund Canada
     
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Antonia Gujinovic

Imagine Canada Ethical Code - Heart and Stroke Foundation of Canada - 0 views

www.heartandstroke.com/...magine_Canada_Ethical_Code.htm

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      Antonia Gujinovic on 05 Mar 12
       
      The foundation has established credibility by being able to issue receipts for donations that comply with Canadian Revenue Agency regulations.
       
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Antonia Gujinovic

Our Board of Directors - Heart and Stroke Foundation of Canada - 0 views

www.heartandstroke.com/...Our_Board_of_Directors.htm

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      Antonia Gujinovic on 05 Mar 12
       
      This personal testimonial appeals to emotions. Dr. A. Demchuk shows he understands the consequences of heart disease.
       
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  • Stroke is a brutal disease – the caregiver burden is enormous for families. There are few conditions where the burden is so great.”
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    • Antonia Gujinovic
      Antonia Gujinovic on 05 Mar 12
       
      Dr. Andrew Demchuk also has established credibility in the field of research of heart disease and has acted as a chair member of the Heart and Stroke Foundation for various regions.
       
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  • Andrew is the past board chair for the Heart and Stroke Foundation of Alberta, NWT, and Nunavut, a member of the board of the Canadian Stroke Consortium, and member of the European Stroke Conference scientific committee.
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pardeep tiwana

Ladies Only Fitness - 1 views

ladiesonlyfitness.ca/news

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      pardeep tiwana on 04 Mar 12
       
      Ethos : BCRPA certified for over 10 years
       
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      pardeep tiwana on 04 Mar 12
       
      Logs: This is the third time that " Come join the party!" has appeared in the text/picture
       
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      pardeep tiwana on 05 Mar 12
       
      This is for logos, using scientific reasoning inoder to presuade the audience into going the gym.( offers these foods)
       
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    The poster of this exercise class shows credibility by stating that there have been millions of people who enjoy dance as an exercise. It also captures feelings such as joy and gratification. The text " join the party " is bigger than any other text on the poster for the reason of capturing the audience attention along with appealing to emotions.
     
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pardeep tiwana

Ladies Only Fitness: Welcome - 5 views

ladiesonlyfitness.ca

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  • We encourage you to come into the facility and one of our friendly staff will be happy to give you a tour
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      pardeep tiwana on 03 Mar 12
       
      (pathos)Ending the text using words like " friendly staff will be happy to give you a tour" is both welcoming/comforting for the readers.
       
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  • Balance, Strength, and Empowerment
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      pardeep tiwana on 03 Mar 12
       
      logos: The words balance,healthy, happy, empowerment, and beauty are used numerous times in the text.
       
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  • Location1055 Victoria StreetKamloops, BCV2C 2C3 Phone Number(250) 374-1220 ladiesonly2005@hotmail.com
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  • Living a balanced, healthy lifestyle not only physically, but mentally and spiritually is the key to reaching your full potential and living a happy , fulfilled beautiful life.
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      pardeep tiwana on 05 Mar 12
       
      This paragraph is using logs to persuade the readers
       
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  • pardeep tiwana on 02 Mar 12
     
    The color yellow was choosen in regards to pathos, it implies postive emotions along with symbolizing a well balanced mentally healthy life style. Along with the color yellow, there is also a picture of a women showing her strength, again capturing emotions regarding to health and wellbeing which result in positivity. It is important to note the size of the picture, it is the first thing you see on the page. The company uses "18- years in business " to start their text; this is to suggest to the viewers that the bussiness has been runing for many years which makes this credible. These appeals to ethos
     
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anonymous

Home > Lindt & Sprüngli, Maître chocolatier suisse depuis 1845 - 0 views

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      anonymous on 01 Mar 12
       
      the use of gold accents on the page give off a sense of luxury and play on the viewers emotional desires to indulge themselves
       
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      anonymous on 01 Mar 12
       
      the visual of a chocolatier in a crisp white uniform sets a tone of reassurance that they are professionals and high class
       
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      anonymous on 01 Mar 12
       
      "160 years of passion for one moment of yours" shows reason for their skills in making great chocolate because of how long they've taken to perfect it. It also uses the audiences feelings by including them and their desires in the statement.
       
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      anonymous on 01 Mar 12
       
      The blue and gold in the logo hint at feelings like "award winning" and "quality" as they resemble the colour of a blue ribbon. 
       
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  • Maîtres Chocolatiers
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    • anonymous
      anonymous on 01 Mar 12
       
      The use of French words to ensure credibility in being a Swiss company that provides Swiss chocolate
       
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      anonymous on 05 Mar 12
       
      The picture of chocolates placed perfectly with good lighting, instead of just photographed plainly, appeals emotionally by showing the chocolate at it's best. This gives subconscious feelings that the products will offer luxury and satisfaction in flavor.
       
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Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo

What's Wrong with Abortion - the case against abortion - 3 views

www.davidmacd.com/...abortion_general.htm

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  • The common outcry, which is justly made on behalf of human rights -- for example, the right to health, to home, to work, to family, to culture -- is false and illusory if the right to life is not defended with maximum determination.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      This is an appeal to religion (since the authors quote a religious authority figure) as well as to morality. Without providing any kind of evidence, the authors attempt to convince people by telling them that it is their duty to oppose abortion.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  •  Abortion ruined my life and the woman I was involved with. We chose abortion to "save our careers" but it ended up costing everything.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      This is a personal argument based on the author's own personal experience. Although it shows what can happen, the author makes it seem as though it is an inevitable result of abortion. However, it cannot be generalized as other people may have had different experiences and feel differently about the issue.
       
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    • Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo
      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      These pictures try to persuade people by making them believe that God does not condone abortion. It is also a reference to our 'playing God', which happens to be a common religious argument against scientific advancements. Furthermore, the depiction of children serves to demonstrate that children are an essential part of 'God's plan' and must, therefore, be protected. They also look weak and defenseless, which elicits an emotional response also known as the mother's / father's instinct.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
      Ethos & pathos
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      This is a picture of a 14-week old fetus. It, too, is supposed to elicit an emotional response, or a protective instinct. Since the 'baby' is fully recognizable as a 'human being' (due to the fact that it certainly looks like one), it serves to reinforce the argument that abortion is murder.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      The aborted fetus is supposed to make one feel disgusted and devastated as well as angry and sad. However, this is an 11-week old fetus (as opposed to the 14-week old fetus). It may be the case that there is a fundamental difference between an 11-week old and a 14-week old fetus in terms of their development into an actual human being.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
      Pathos & attempt at logos
       
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  • I'll call this girl "Sara."
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
      By giving the fetus a name and referring to it as "girl", the authors emphasize that it is (in their opinion, that is) a human being.
       
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  • Sara could not protect herself while the "doctor" cut her head off with fore snips. This is what abortion looks like.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      This brutal description of what happened to the fetus in the picture once again elicits a strong emotional response. In addition to that, the author also fails to mention that there may be more to abortion than the 'killing' of 'human beings'.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • Sara will never learn how skip or play hopscotch. She will never experience her first date or the prom.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      This is an appeal to emotion. The authors make the readers recall certain significant past events such as their prom or their first date. By doing so, the reader is forced to think about what it would have been like if it had been him or her and the authors successfully make it a very personal issue.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • Sara has been denied the right to vote, the right to freedom of speech, the right to work. All these things that women have worked so hard to achieve have been denied to Sara.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      The authors then go on to argue that abortion is not only morally wrong but also politically wrong as it takes away several rights from a 'human being'. Furthermore, they compare it to feminist issues (which is also why they chose to call the fetus "Sara" and refer to it as a "girl"), thereby appealing to women and especially to feminists (whether they be male or female).
       
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  • This first question we must ask ourselves when considering our opinion on abortion is this: "Is something being killed?" Everyone familiar with biology will answer yes. The next question is "What is being killed?" A simple way to answer this is to ask "Does it have DNA? The answer is yes. What kind is it? Human. The DNA at 5 minutes after conception is identical to the DNA 85 years after conception.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      The authors try to argue deductively. However, they assume that everything they say is based on nothing but facts even though they never prove that everything that 'has human DNA' is in fact a fully developed human being.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • Every major abortion rights organization and doctor admits it is a human being.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      The authors present this as a fact even though it is still a very controversial issue.
       
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  • "Jane Roe" in the case has since said it was the worse mistake she ever made. How come you never hear that in the main stream media? She was a puppet for an abortion agenda, another example of the abortion industry's abuse of young women.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      The authors try to persuade the readers that the women who decide to get an abortion are actually victims. Surely, some of them regret it but there are also women who do not regret it. By taking one example and presenting it as a general rule of thumb, the authors redirect the reader's anger toward the authorities and the institutions that support abortion.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • Abortion is not the first time this word game of personhood vs. humanity has been played with human life. During the slave trade, it was acknowledged that black people were human beings, but not "persons". During the Holocaust, Hitler acknowledged that Jews were human beings. That's why he performed horrible experiments on them, but he did not acknowledge their "personhood."
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      By comparing abortion to slavery and to the Holocaust, the authors once again elicit a strong emotional and moral response that leads to the readers thinking about the wrongness of the act. Abortion is thereby inevitably depicted as a crime (or even genocide), which is an attempt to make people want to oppose it.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
      It seems like the authors are trying to make it look like an appeal to logos rather than pathos.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      Once again, this picture's purpose is to convince people that fetuses are fully developed human beings and that nothing really distinguishes them from any of us.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      However, just because the fetus is comprised of 46 chromosomes does not necessarily mean that a fetus is the same as a newborn baby.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • A newborn is not as well developed as a toddler. I am more developed than toddler.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      This comparison is invalid since the real question is whether a fetus is "alive" yet. Toddlers and the authors are without a doubt alive. Yet, the authors' use of an analogy is quite interesting as it seems to be an attempt to appeal to logic.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • Yes the unborn baby lives in a unique environment. But I do not cease becoming a human when I travel to work, or home. Environment does not determine personhood.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      Once again, this analogy is invalid. One's workplace and one's home are both situated in a world outside of the womb whereas a fetus is not a part of 'our' world yet.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • In the last 30 years approximately 21,500,000 women have died violent deaths in the United States. They have had their arms ripped off, they have had their legs ripped off, they have had their heads cut off. These women were defenceless, they could not speak out to defend themselves. They remained silent as they were brutally murdered. These women were not fully grown. They were waiting to be born. These women died from abortion. Most abortionists are men who say that they are in favour of women's rights and they say they shun violence against women. Obviously, they are not in favour of the rights of women in the womb.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      Once again, the authors appeal to feminism and claim (without any evidence) that abortion is, indeed, murder. They are thereby taking the peripheral route rather than the central route to persuasion as they focus on the emotional rather than the factual / logical aspects of the matter.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • Half of women carrying babies have a little boy inside them with a penis. Is that penis a part of her body? That would be a first.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      The authors' use of sarcasm is quite effective in this case as it helps make a point regarding the difference between a woman's body and the fetus's body.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • The abortion industry is a multi billion dollar industry and Planned Parenthood is now exporting this industry to countries around the world like a McDonald's franchise.  I just attended a summit on "Population Control" in Ottawa. It is scary to think that we are now trying to export abortion to countries around the world the way we export wheat. Much of this is being paid by our governments.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      Making it seem as though abortion is but a business distracts from other aspects of it such as 'abortion as a result of rape' etc. and redirects anger toward the institutions that support it. Hence, people's desire to put an end to abortion grows (if they do not critically reflect on it, that is). 
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • I believe that as Christians we are obligated to step in. The Bible makes it clear that it is wrong to stand by as innocent blood is shed. (Deut 21:5, 7-9; Ezk 22:3-4, Is 1:15-16, Lev 18:21. ) Ruben rescued Joseph (Gn 37:21-22), Hebrew midwives rescued baby boys from the infanticide of Pharaoh (Ex 1:17) The solders of Saul rescued Jonathan from murder (1 Sam 14:45), Obadiah rescued 100 prophets from Jezebel. Esther risked her life to save her people from genocide.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      Once again, this is an approach to religion and morality and abortion is depicted as murder and genocide. This also elicits an emotional response.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • 23,000 couples in Canada and 230,000 couples in the US want to adopt children. Many go overseas to find babies because North Americans abort the majority of our unwanted babies.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      The authors distract from the real issue at hand and even blame women who decide to have an abortion for the hardship of couples who wish to adopt a child. This might actually help win them over, too.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • "Oh Lord give us the strength to not only experience our horror at this holocaust but the courageously stand up and be counted and to follow the heroes who brought down the slave trade and those who saved Jews from the Holocaust."
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      The repetition of a previously mentioned idea only re-emphasizes its importance and elicits the same emotional response again (and perhaps even a stronger one than before).
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • after the Genome project
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      Mentioning the Human Genome Project makes the authors' claim seem more factual and believable.
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • Fertilization is the miracle moment, and all 46 chromosomes are coming together. It's when life begins. It is new human life.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      The description of the process ('a miracle') once again adds a religious or a spiritual aspect to it. Claiming that it is in fact a 'new human life' ignores the actual controversy around the issue and effectively introduces the next and final argument.
       
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  • It is the killing of an innocent human. Lord Jesus, let Your prayer of unity for Christians become a reality, in Your way we have absolute confidence that you can bring your people together we give you absolute permission to move Amen
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 28 Feb 12
       
      Repeating the main statement (it is murder) and ending the discussion with a 'prayer' emphasizes the wrongness of the act as well as the religious aspect of it. We should not play God because 'in Your way [God's way] we have absolute confidence', meaning that if God wanted it to happen it would happen naturally (by itself). Furthermore, ending the discussion the same it started is also very effective as it demonstrates that it is now 'complete' (like a 'vicious' cycle that one cannot escape).
       
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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  • I do not come to the Pro-life movement for some altruistic reason, I come through my own experience and suffering.
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      Marcus Ramirez-Santoyo on 04 Mar 12
       
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Breanne Lapointe

Home - This Recording - 0 views

thisrecording.com/...teghan-beaudette

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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      The author is stating how she will be organizing her ideas in this article; by using a list.
       
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  • Being in constant contact via Facebook, Twitter, Tumblr, texting and very rarely an actual telephone call makes it hard to not completely get sick of someone or immediately see what glaring social flaw they have that is the reason for them being single.
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      Author is arguing based on emotion (pathos). She believes that using social media has a negative impact on trying to find the right person because everything is public and you don't have any mystery about learning about a someone new, as compared to meeting someone face to face.
       
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  • He was just eating pizza and wheezing. Needless to say, I put my half slice down, walked up the stairs and never came back. I couldn’t even bring myself to break up with this guy in person after a couple months of dating.
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      The suthor is trying to persuade her attitudes about turn off's, based on her feelings. Here, she is using the example of breathing loudly while eating to focus on negative emotions.
       
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  • Turn Me Off
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      Basic Title, not very creative or persuasive.
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      Picture of what appears to be a couple, not to sure about the significance of this particular photo. Perhaps using pictures that follow the bullets on the list would be more effective.
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      The author is arousing the reader's involvement with the use of her words and sentences to convery information in order to persuade the reader to take the author's point of view.
       
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  • Truth be told, breathing loudly while eating was only one of this guy’s many major problems. I overlooked many of them because he was a Brazilian god who worked in my campus restaurant and used to talk about amazing directors when he served me. But when I look back on the couple times that we had sex and the couple more times that we went out on real dates all I can remember is him huffing and puffing while he shovelled sushi into his mouth.
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      Here the author has switched from giving a brief explanation of her turn off's to a point form list of her turn off's. The author is emphasizing ideas here and is making it reader friendly, instead of having to read a million paragraphs.
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      Throughout the essay, the author has effectively used white space between paragraphs to seperate texts using the chunking technique. Good use of access, helps the reader understand importance of each point she has on her list.
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      The author organize's this article by usinging a larger font on some of her "turn off's" on her list.
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      Embarassing myself in front of them - The author is clearly stating why she would end it with a guy. She then gives proof with examples in the following body.
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      The author is using graphics of couple's as visual appeal.
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      Either the author, or the the website layout is using the color read for the heading of the article. It makes it stand out a little bit better than black would but the font size is still pretty small.
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      Again, the author is trying to emotionally persuade the reader to what she believes are turn off's in men. She has no ethical or logical grounds, she is arguing emotionally.
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      The comments - There are many comments that refute what the author is saying. They are giving a contrary, emotional view to the authors. Her arguments themselves are one-sided because they are just her views. The comments add to this article because it shows an opposing view and allows for alternatives.
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      Name of Website - Not very appealing to the eye because of color and size. You focus more on the ad beside it than on the website title itself.
       
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  • I recently made a giant list of turn ons and turn offs in a notebook
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      Breanne Lapointe on 04 Mar 12
       
      Using icons and having the ability to share articles = effective because then it increases total views of page.
       
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Dan Ondang

The A.V. Club - 1 views

www.avclub.com

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      Dan Ondang on 01 Mar 12
       
      These picture on the side here are generally faces. This harps on the emotions as people can connect quickly and easily to faces
       
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      Dan Ondang on 01 Mar 12
       
      Yet again, everything is on purpose. The tabs are presented in all lowercase - not imposing but informal and friendly looking.
       
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      Dan Ondang on 01 Mar 12
       
      This bar can be viewed as a 'crew shout out' of webpages. They invoke the legendary name of 'The Onion'.  Heavy use of ethos by riding off The Onion's reputation
       
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      Dan Ondang on 01 Mar 12
       
      The logo is minimalistic. The periods in 'A.V.' as well as most of the other choices with the logo (inner white circle, Helvetica-style font, dark blue, etc) lend it a 'quirky' look that is clearly meant to appeal to young people.  On a more cynical level, it is meant to appeal to the 18-40 demographic that advertisers love.
       
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      Dan Ondang on 01 Mar 12
       
      Also of note is that the front page is pretty much a bunch of text and picture links all piled on top of each other. In my personal experience, this is the kind of thing that overwhelms generations that did not grow up with computers.  More directly, I don't think my parents would be able to make any sense of this because it's too much information.  This again connects with the demographic appeal mentioned at the top of the page
       
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Hiliary Leon

The Official Eric Carle Web Site - 1 views

www.eric-carle.com/home.html

Books children author illustration reading Authors business education Communication social

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      Hiliary Leon on 16 Feb 12
       
      The background colour is plain white to really make the link options to stand out. When I first opened this page my eye had to adjust, I find it very unusually that Carle has made his back ground colour white. 
       
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      Hiliary Leon on 16 Feb 12
       
      Very simple but it could almost be too simple but I believe that is page is more geared towards people who don't go online very often or children. 
       
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      Hiliary Leon on 16 Feb 12
       
      Carle displays some of his characters on this page so it really gives a sense of who Carle is.
       
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      Hiliary Leon on 01 Mar 12
       
      This icon flashing makes me want to click on this link to explore the icon.
       
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  • Welcome to The Official Eric Carle Web Site
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      Hiliary Leon on 04 Mar 12
       
      the resources isn't really that great of ideas, however, I like that there is a bulletin board exchange is this is where educates or parents can exchange ideas on how to use the stories. 
       
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Company > Lindt & Sprüngli, Maître chocolatier suisse depuis 1845 - 0 views

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  • Lindt & Sprüngli is recognized as a leader in the market for premium quality chocolate, offering a large selection of products in more than 100 countries around the world.
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      anonymous on 01 Mar 12
       
      They establish credibility by being sold in many countries, and give facts that they are a recognized leader in their field.
       
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  • The beginnings of Lindt & Sprüngli are in 1845, when father and son for the first time manufactured solid chocolate in their small confectionery Sprüngli & Son, at that time yet a partnership.
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      anonymous on 01 Mar 12
       
      Play on the emotional aspect of family.
       
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      anonymous on 04 Mar 12
       
      This picture of a cocoa bean hints at credibility that the company knows and cares about the entire process of making their product and that that would produce better end results.
       
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      anonymous on 04 Mar 12
       
      The chocolatier in this photo seems to be enjoying his job and working with precision, it builds on the character and credibility of the company and their passion for their creations.
       
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  • @fiercebitchstew recent entries archive fierce bitches community info fiercebitchstew
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      Sarah English on 04 Mar 12
       
      Links to twitter and other places on the website. Right under the banner so they are easily found.
       
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Kristen Stewart - IMDb - 0 views

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  • STARmeter 33 Down 7 this week View rank on IMDbPro » Kristen Stewart (I)
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  • Message Boards Recent Posts New Pics: Kristen and Rob in Paris 3/3/12 janna47 'THE' Ring Unique_Jenique What Is Your Favorite Kristen Stewart Movie Quote? Unique_Jenique OT: Delete your Google History Before 3/1 MichelleTD Why spend so much time on someone you don't even know? emerson-anatra Job Interview vidalady Discuss Kristen Stewart on the IMDb message boards »
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      Sarah English on 04 Mar 12
       
      These are the message forums where fans can discuss Kristen Stewart. It is easy to find on the page. Must have an IMDB account to post on here.
       
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  • Though most famous for her role as Bella Swan in the Twilight saga, Kristen Stewart has been a working actor since her early years in Los Angeles, California. Her parents, John Stewart and Jules Stewart, both work in film and television. Her mother is Australian. The family includes three boys, her older brother Cameron Stewart, and two adopted brothers Dana and Taylor... See full bio »
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      Sarah English on 04 Mar 12
       
      Here is Kristen Stewart's bio. Age, hometown, where she was born, and other information about her life can be found here.
       
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    up to date information on all projects from Kristen Stewart
     
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Kristen Stewart News | Keeping Up With Kristen! - 0 views

kstewartnews.com

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  • This is a not-for-profit, unofficial fan site. We are in no way affiliated with Kristen Stewart or her management. All images and news articles are the property of their respective owners, and no copyright infringement is intended. If you are the original owner of any posted image or article and would like to request it be removed, please advise by contacting us atkstewartnews@gmail.com Please see 'Contact/Disclaimer' for a copy of our full Disclaimer.
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      Sarah English on 01 Mar 12
       
      The site comes with a disclaimer, which helps it to stay running without legal complications. This is useful because it outlines the expectations of the site.
       
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      Sarah English on 01 Mar 12
       
      These are quicklinks to different pages. Makes it easier to navigate and find specific posts in the site.
       
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        Sarah English on 01 Mar 12
         
        a link to the wordpress site, which this site is hosted by,
         
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        Sarah English on 04 Mar 12
         
        These are links to related websites where more information on the actor can be found.
         
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      Hiliary Leon

      Karma Wilson - author of Bear Snores On and other children's books - 1 views

      karmawilson.com

      books children bear author Business education social Communication

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          Hiliary Leon on 03 Mar 12
           
          The colour Karma has chosen for her background and themed colour of the website is brownish-red. Brown meaning friendship and reliability and red use most commonly use to catch the attention of the eye. The colour used on this page is eye catching and also sending a new friendly vibe out as if you would like to explore the website more.   
           
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        • Hiliary Leon
          Hiliary Leon on 03 Mar 12
           
          There is a display of a big photo of her characters from all of her books, so the reader are getting to know who Karma's characters are without even realizing the reader knows it. 
           
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          Hiliary Leon on 03 Mar 12
           
          Facebook link to connect Karma with her fans and they can ask her question and comments on Facebook.  
           
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          Hiliary Leon on 03 Mar 12
           
          The link for teacher's resource is a really great link she has created resource for most of her books this includes ways educators can use the books in the centres and how it can be use effectively.
           
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          Hiliary Leon on 04 Mar 12
           
          another form of communication between reader and the author, Karma
           
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        Welcome to the world of Karma Wilson, Children's Book Author
         
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      jessica fennell

      Home Decor Bed & Bath Bedroom Kitchen Bathroom Dining Room Decor - 1 views

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      • DISCOVER HOMESENSE
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          jessica fennell on 03 Mar 12
           
          (pathos) Make your home as unique as you are
           
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          jessica fennell on 03 Mar 12
           
          Pathos: telling the consumer that they can improve their home design from drab to fab
           
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        Discover unique decorative ideas for your home. HomeSense has a fine selection of Bed & Bath, Home Décor, Gourmet Food, Kids Toys, and Pet products a great prices. Find a HomeSense store near you. Many of our stores offer expanded store departments offering a variety of great gift ideas.
         
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        Discover unique decorative ideas for your home. HomeSense has a fine selection of Bed & Bath, Home Décor, Gourmet Food, Kids Toys, and Pet products a great prices. Find a HomeSense store near you. Many of our stores offer expanded store departments offering a variety of great gift ideas.
         
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      Home Decor Bed & Bath Ideas Kitchen & Bathroom Décor - HomeSense - 0 views

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