Grade 4.5
Loved the first sentence, it was a great way to get started, good argument for constructivist learning. The history also added to the paper and definitely created a stronger argument in the end. The only criticism I have is a formating thing, the last section used headings throughout but the rest of the paper did not, this created a small feeling of disconnect for me, I think that utilizing heading would have helped threader throughout the paper. Good Job.

5 Powerful argument that was well articulated and organized.
4 Powerful argument that was somewhat well articulated but could have been a bit more organized.
3 Good argument, but could have been better articulated and been a bit more organized.
2 Weak argument, that could have been better articulated and organized.
1 Weak argument that lacked articulation and organization.
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4 This paper was very insightful, it was full of resources and details about online learning. I do feel it could have been a little better organized to express the main argument about the possibilities of online learning.