Personal Project Proposal | frankdelia - 4 views
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Chad Harriss on 06 Mar 11This goal seems doable, but I'm a little curious about why you have this goal? If you are able to personalize your goal a bit then it will help. Also, it becomes clearer in (B) what your proposing. Is there a way to integrate this info into (A). Overall, you need to be more clear about what this project is. You suggested to me in the past that you want to become an aggregator of information within a specific topic area. If this is your goal, then what already exists needs to include some sources that you will pull from. It might also include what channels you might use to promote yourself as an aggregator/expert in this area by sharing this material with others.
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Punch this up a bit. If you better identify your goal then these sentences will come more naturally. You should also build in a social media campaign to promote and distribute the information you collect. Also think about the organization of these sentences. #5 may your most important sentence yet it's buried at the end. Sometimes chronology works to a disadvantage and thoughts should instead be organized around importance.
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