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Your responses to the question posed in the notes above may also allow you to refine your response here. The key thing you can do is become a bit more specific about defining your audience.

In short, I'm suggesting that you broaden your goal and more concisely define your audience.

Yeah, starting to realize throughout my whole proposal that I was too concise in the nature of my project and used sweeping generalizations to define my audience. Looking back, I think I need some tinkering in what way these two aspects should unite.

This should be your project's story. This is your opportunity to pitch the idea. Pretend we are considering giving you funds to put this together. Make us believe that your idea is worth funding.

This step is also the framework for your process. The first three sentences you've offered do not really address your project directly. Aren't your goals more in categories like promotion, education, community building etc. Also, think about the verbs in the sentences that you right. Whatever you propose needs to be active and assessable.

I don't recall this presented as part of your prototype.

List is complete.

You need to offer some measure of training for these faculty. Link to a tutorial vid or offer an explanation in another post.

The switch to discussing your group here is a bit awkward. It might help if you provided the prompt you were responding to.

The five sentences are solid.

I would ditch the slash mark in sentence three and replace it with "or."

This sentence is different than what you stated above. I prefer this one. Bring it to the top.

This needed to be included in your presentation.

The "pre-existing" element is confusing. Explain.

There seems to be a big FB influence here, yet this was absent in the pres.

Formatting.

Tie this to a writing emphasis class to provide an example of how it can work.

Nice pic, but it offers little substance.

Revisit the idea of delivery and frame it as an educational experience.

Alongside is one word.

Link the tools together more coherently.

Set up the link to open in a new window or tab.

The prototype does not make clear connections to FB or Flickr.

Work through what the different people require more completely.