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Beauty Is No Longer Truth: The Trifecta! - 2 views

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shared by Chelsea Hamill on 17 Apr 10 - Cached

it remains academic, giving only necessary information.
- glnnrivera on 20 Apr 10
  
  consider subbing "informative" in lieu of "academic." I think it is more fitting to what you are trying to convey.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">consider subbing "informative" in lieu of "academic." I think it is more fitting to what you are trying to convey.</div>
  
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I don’t think I have heard the word hooey since first grade, let alone from a grown man, but it is a bit refreshing
- glnnrivera on 20 Apr 10
  
  awesome insertion of you in here. Really get a feel for you tone with sentences like this one.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">awesome insertion of you in here. Really get a feel for you tone with sentences like this one.</div>
  
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Celebrities: Our Walking Ads: Trifecta! - 3 views

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shared by Dongoh Kim on 10 Feb 10 - Cached

too-perfect-to-be real-people
- glnnrivera on 20 Apr 10
  
  good string here
  
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Talk about unhealthy
- glnnrivera on 20 Apr 10
  
  consider ommitting
  
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not the scariest thing you’ve seen
- glnnrivera on 20 Apr 10
  
  link to picture? I have not seen it personally.
  
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And also because it's fun to read :)
- glnnrivera on 20 Apr 10
  
  I think your second to last sentence is stronger to end on than your current last.
  
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FAFSA - Free Application for Federal Student Aid - 0 views

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shared by glnnrivera on 18 Feb 10 - Cached

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Is Google Making Us Stupid? - Magazine - The Atlantic - Nicholas Carr - 11 views

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shared by Mark Marino on 06 Mar 10 - Cached

But it’s a different kind of reading, and behind it lies a different kind of thinking—perhaps even a new sense of the self
- glnnrivera on 09 Mar 10
  
  The focus of online reading is drastically differnt from reading traditional text. Close-readings are not all too common--the prevalence of quick-reading reflects our obssession with immediate satisfaction. Personally, I find reading on the computer can be rather straining, so I do find myself skimming a lot to get through whatever I'm reading(without printing). I'm sure there are a lot of other reasons this is the case. But, as the author mentions, a new way of thinking comes derives from this reading method. The author suggests that we don't make the same deep connections reading online these days. Ths is presented as resding light and an unsettling direction which is even a threat to "self." Incorporating identity in the argument lends power to the article.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">The focus of online reading is drastically differnt from reading traditional text. Close-readings are not all too common--the prevalence of quick-reading reflects our obssession with immediate satisfaction. Personally, I find reading on the computer can be rather straining, so I do find myself skimming a lot to get through whatever I'm reading(without printing). I'm sure there are a lot of other reasons this is the case. But, as the author mentions, a new way of thinking comes derives from this reading method. The author suggests that we don't make the same deep connections reading online these days. Ths is presented as resding light and an unsettling direction which is even a threat to "self." Incorporating identity in the argument lends power to the article.</div>
  
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glnnrivera on 09 Mar 10

The focus of online reading is drastically different from traditional text. Close-readings are not as common--the prevalence of quick-reading reflects the obssession with immediate satisfaction. Personally, I find reading on the computer can be straining, so I do find myself skimming a lot just to get through whatever I'm reading(without printing). I'm sure there are a lot of other reasons this is the case.But, as the author brings up, we also think differently. The author suggests that we don't make the same deep connections in reading. This is presented as reading light and an unsettling direction.

<div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">The focus of online reading is drastically different from traditional text. Close-readings are not as common--the prevalence of quick-reading reflects the obssession with immediate satisfaction. Personally, I find reading on the computer can be straining, so I do find myself skimming a lot just to get through whatever I'm reading(without printing). I'm sure there are a lot of other reasons this is the case.But, as the author brings up, we also think differently. The author suggests that we don't make the same deep connections in reading. This is presented as reading light and an unsettling direction.</div>

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State of The Pop Scene: Trifecta - 2 views

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shared by Chelsea Hamill on 09 Feb 10 - Cached