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Haiku 2.0 - 9 views
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This is my project- Haiku 2.0...still working a few kinks out but it will be 100% by this evening.
http://sites.google.com/site/hamende5thgradehaiku/Home -
I am still figuring out Google Sites right now- it was a last minute decision to switch my project over to it so I still have a few kinks that I need to work out before I start using it in my classroom. I agree that the links should open in another window- much easier for the user, I need to see if this is an option :).
Rachell Kastensmith wrote:
> Melissa,
> I liked your site and how it looks the clouds make it fun and friendly to students. A few things that I noticed were that there were some spelling errors on your pages, watch out parents will get you on these! Also I suggest making it so that your links open to a new window. So that as the students go through the tutorials they can get back to the original page. Also I noticed that on the bottom of your pages you had a link menu, there were non on the lesson plan page or Q & A page. Also how does the Q&A page work? I tried to add a comment and wasn't sure how. And lastly when I went to the parent page there was no information. Overall I loved your site! The lesson is great and I love how you took it past just writting a poem.
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Aim/Purpose-Expert
Excellent purpose statement. Original and will catch the attention of the user.
Lesson Plan/Teacher's Guide/ Instructional Plan-mastery
Lesson plan opens and is included.
Student Activity Page-Expert
Clear and easy to understand.
Parent Page-Expert
Inviting to parents and provides direction for them. May want to include links on that page instead of directing them to other pages-just for convenience.
Layout-Mastery
It would be a lot easier for the users if all of the links showed up at once. Layout is good, but that element messes a bit with navigation.
Navigation-Mastery
As mentioned before, have the links of all of the pages in navigation tool bar. Makes for easier transition and if a student needs to go back from clarification it will help. Also maybe not put parent page in front of student page?
Graphics-Novice
Good graphics, just no citation seen.
Accessibility-Mastery
Image descriptions are included- good job on this!
Fonts-expert
Font is consistent and easy to read.
Background-expert
Simple and does not take away from anything.
Color Choices-mastery
You might need to darker the font on titles, etc. the grey was too grey after a while.
Spelling and Grammar-expert
None that I see!
Copyright-novice
No citations found.
Contact Information
Email contact information found.
Tracy Robbins wrote:
> Hi all,
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> Here is my website URL:
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> http://mrsrobbinssandbox.wetpaint.com