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Tracy Robbins

Robbins webpage - persuasive text - 17 views

etc545 lesson6 webdevelopment
started by Tracy Robbins on 26 Apr 09 no follow-up yet
  • melmilks
     
    Great purpose statement!! Overall great job!

    Aim/Purpose-Expert
    Excellent purpose statement. Original and will catch the attention of the user.
    Lesson Plan/Teacher's Guide/ Instructional Plan-mastery
    Lesson plan opens and is included.
    Student Activity Page-Expert
    Clear and easy to understand.
    Parent Page-Expert
    Inviting to parents and provides direction for them. May want to include links on that page instead of directing them to other pages-just for convenience.
    Layout-Mastery
    It would be a lot easier for the users if all of the links showed up at once. Layout is good, but that element messes a bit with navigation.
    Navigation-Mastery
    As mentioned before, have the links of all of the pages in navigation tool bar. Makes for easier transition and if a student needs to go back from clarification it will help. Also maybe not put parent page in front of student page?
    Graphics-Novice
    Good graphics, just no citation seen.
    Accessibility-Mastery
    Image descriptions are included- good job on this!
    Fonts-expert
    Font is consistent and easy to read.
    Background-expert
    Simple and does not take away from anything.
    Color Choices-mastery
    You might need to darker the font on titles, etc. the grey was too grey after a while.
    Spelling and Grammar-expert
    None that I see!
    Copyright-novice
    No citations found.
    Contact Information
    Email contact information found.

    Tracy Robbins wrote:
    > Hi all,
    >
    > Here is my website URL:
    >
    > http://mrsrobbinssandbox.wetpaint.com
melmilks

Haiku 2.0 - 9 views

  • melmilks
     
    This is my project- Haiku 2.0...still working a few kinks out but it will be 100% by this evening.


    http://sites.google.com/site/hamende5thgradehaiku/Home
  • melmilks
     
    I am still figuring out Google Sites right now- it was a last minute decision to switch my project over to it so I still have a few kinks that I need to work out before I start using it in my classroom. I agree that the links should open in another window- much easier for the user, I need to see if this is an option :).

    Rachell Kastensmith wrote:
    > Melissa,
    > I liked your site and how it looks the clouds make it fun and friendly to students. A few things that I noticed were that there were some spelling errors on your pages, watch out parents will get you on these! Also I suggest making it so that your links open to a new window. So that as the students go through the tutorials they can get back to the original page. Also I noticed that on the bottom of your pages you had a link menu, there were non on the lesson plan page or Q & A page. Also how does the Q&A page work? I tried to add a comment and wasn't sure how. And lastly when I went to the parent page there was no information. Overall I loved your site! The lesson is great and I love how you took it past just writting a poem.
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