Robbins webpage - persuasive text - 17 views

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  #2 Kim Piranio on 28 Apr 09

   

  I really loved your introduction on the home page. I think that the paragraph about the sandbox and the building of the castle was very inspirational. I saw the directions in the lesson plan however, I would've liked to see a different link with simple step by step directions for the students. Overall I think you did a great job.
  
  Kim

   

  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">I really loved your introduction on the home page. I think that the paragraph about the sandbox and the building of the castle was very inspirational. I saw the directions in the lesson plan however, I would've liked to see a different link with simple step by step directions for the students. Overall I think you did a great job. <br /> <br /> Kim</div>

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  #4 melmilks on 04 May 09

   

  Great purpose statement!! Overall great job!
  
  Aim/Purpose-Expert
  Excellent purpose statement. Original and will catch the attention of the user.
  Lesson Plan/Teacher's Guide/ Instructional Plan-mastery
  Lesson plan opens and is included.
  Student Activity Page-Expert
  Clear and easy to understand.
  Parent Page-Expert
  Inviting to parents and provides direction for them. May want to include links on that page instead of directing them to other pages-just for convenience.
  Layout-Mastery
  It would be a lot easier for the users if all of the links showed up at once. Layout is good, but that element messes a bit with navigation.
  Navigation-Mastery
  As mentioned before, have the links of all of the pages in navigation tool bar. Makes for easier transition and if a student needs to go back from clarification it will help. Also maybe not put parent page in front of student page?
  Graphics-Novice
  Good graphics, just no citation seen.
  Accessibility-Mastery
  Image descriptions are included- good job on this!
  Fonts-expert
  Font is consistent and easy to read.
  Background-expert
  Simple and does not take away from anything.
  Color Choices-mastery
  You might need to darker the font on titles, etc. the grey was too grey after a while.
  Spelling and Grammar-expert
  None that I see!
  Copyright-novice
  No citations found.
  Contact Information
  Email contact information found.
  
  Tracy Robbins wrote:
  > Hi all,
  >
  > Here is my website URL:
  >
  > http://mrsrobbinssandbox.wetpaint.com

   

  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Great purpose statement!! Overall great job! <br /> <br /> Aim/Purpose-Expert <br /> Excellent purpose statement. Original and will catch the attention of the user. <br /> Lesson Plan/Teacher's Guide/ Instructional Plan-mastery <br /> Lesson plan opens and is included. <br /> Student Activity Page-Expert <br /> Clear and easy to understand. <br /> Parent Page-Expert <br /> Inviting to parents and provides direction for them. May want to include links on that page instead of directing them to other pages-just for convenience. <br /> Layout-Mastery <br /> It would be a lot easier for the users if all of the links showed up at once. Layout is good, but that element messes a bit with navigation. <br /> Navigation-Mastery <br /> As mentioned before, have the links of all of the pages in navigation tool bar. Makes for easier transition and if a student needs to go back from clarification it will help. Also maybe not put parent page in front of student page? <br /> Graphics-Novice <br /> Good graphics, just no citation seen. <br /> Accessibility-Mastery <br /> Image descriptions are included- good job on this! <br /> Fonts-expert <br /> Font is consistent and easy to read. <br /> Background-expert <br /> Simple and does not take away from anything. <br /> Color Choices-mastery <br /> You might need to darker the font on titles, etc. the grey was too grey after a while. <br /> Spelling and Grammar-expert <br /> None that I see! <br /> Copyright-novice <br /> No citations found. <br /> Contact Information <br /> Email contact information found. <br /> <br /> Tracy Robbins wrote: <br /> > Hi all, <br /> > <br /> > Here is my website URL: <br /> > <br /> > <a href="http://mrsrobbinssandbox.wetpaint.com" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">http://mrsrobbinssandbox.wetpaint.com</a></div>

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