I have made some grammatical corrections but I cannot insert any of my commentary from the clipboard and screenshots do not make the dialog visible enough

I like it so far. It just needs a few more examples and citations for those examples

I also think we should share the link to this dialog so that it can be viewed on how we collected the work

Good question. I would love to do a powerpoint simply because it illustrates point much better and there isn't too much room for error. I'm not opposed to writing though. I will pose this question to Mr. Moore

Just viewed it. Sorry so late. I have a baby with special needs that consumes a lot of my time along with other kids. But are we able to add to this presentation ourselves? If so, I will add my commentary and graphics tomorrow. If I have to forward them to you, I will add the to the list we have going.

Sammantha, I'm wondering is some of these are quoted from the research. I'm reviewing it and making grammatical changes. I may add a few slides as well