I really like how this short sentance is stuck in the middle of a bunch of longer ones...maybe more of this?

Your strong ending sentance makes me want to read more! The melodrama juxtaposed against your subject matter

Awesome! :)

Good job on pointing this out - many may feel that you are not as "trustworthy" by having a scientific blog but not being from a scientific background yourself. This is certainly a valid argument for why your blog is different, and also worth reading.

You mention it in other places too, but feel free to play up your unique perspective on the issue. I feel like this could make you more credible to your readers as well as giving your blog a more personal feeling

What do you think of this? Perhaps be more explict in what you want to take from his voice and what you would rather leave behind.

Please, for the love of reading on a computer screen, but a paragraph break in here. :)

Same goes for "Thirdly..." and "Lastly..." It makes it so much easier to read.

I love your description here. <3

New paragraph please!

The period is a bit awkward here...it is breaking up your thought, but not in a good way. Maybe try a semicolon or colon; if you are feeling particularly spicy you could throw in a dash!

Paragraph break please! (If you already have one in here, consider puting an actual space between the paragraphs)

Paragraph break please. Also, you are using lots of lists (firstly, secondly, thirdly, etc.). Is there another way to convey this information without the list format? Too many lists tend to make the eyes wander to new and different tabs. In many of your lists, I feel like the numbered beginning words are somewhat unnecessary. Think of all the different types of bullet points you can choose from in Word...thought it may not be proper in an acadmic paper to continually switch up your numbered symbols, here it would help keep the paragraph flowing without the start-and-stop of numbers.

Or is he? duh duh duhhh...

Great job! Keep up the good work and research. Put more of your personal ancedotes in there too - we are reading your blog not only for information but also for entertainment!

Pancakes are tasty, yet dense, and can be healthy for you if you use the right ingredients and toppings. Who is to say that this new spreading out of culture is bad? Perhaps it is encouraging people to learn about things that they wouldn't have thought of before. The links out encourage new processes and connections to information previously unconnected. Especially at USC, where there is even a scholarship for those majoring in two seemingly unrelated disciplines at the same time, there is agreement that subjects previously thought to be unrelated can both be helped by a union of science and art. The Renaissance was full of those "pancake people," people striving to know and learn about the place they lived and how they thought about it. Do we think of the Renaissance as a time where people cast down depth of knowledge? The other side of the pancake is tempting indeed.