A Question of Improbabilities: TRIFECTA - 2 views
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that are of an outlier nature.
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cdcrone on 19 Apr 10that are of an "outlaying" nature. (what you have sounds somewhat awkward)
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many other fascinating
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Cornerstones of scientific theory.
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Maybe we can reach out and touch that void and come to acknowledge that we are, in fact, merely a speck on the surface of that which lies out there; a speck, friends, but a speck indeed
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Similarly, she has a monthly “Sci-Fi Worthy Parasite” in which she discusses a species of parasite that possesses unusual qualities
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I can, however, offer a critical distance that I believe is necessary for some degree of objectivity
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Good job on pointing this out - many may feel that you are not as "trustworthy" by having a scientific blog but not being from a scientific background yourself. This is certainly a valid argument for why your blog is different, and also worth reading.
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You mention it in other places too, but feel free to play up your unique perspective on the issue. I feel like this could make you more credible to your readers as well as giving your blog a more personal feeling
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it is quite apparent throughout his blog that he intends to remind you of this fact
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lack of diction that would indicate interest in dialogue.
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It must be noted here,
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his is certainly to serve two purposes. One
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Paragraph break please. Also, you are using lots of lists (firstly, secondly, thirdly, etc.). Is there another way to convey this information without the list format? Too many lists tend to make the eyes wander to new and different tabs. In many of your lists, I feel like the numbered beginning words are somewhat unnecessary. Think of all the different types of bullet points you can choose from in Word...thought it may not be proper in an acadmic paper to continually switch up your numbered symbols, here it would help keep the paragraph flowing without the start-and-stop of numbers.
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Jaffe is not an android
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