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“Fighting against Dirty Water” clearly has the same point of view, saying “water pollution problems couldn't get any worse, another chemical spill occurs, tainting citizens' drinking water, not to mention putting at risk the health of many animal and plant species.”
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She sited her source "Fighting against Dirty Water" and then used a quote from the article.
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The water problems are a big deal and it is affecting people’s lives. We need to change the way some of these people live.
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Rachael capitalized and used punctuation throughout the whole piece.
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Good examples of credibility. There was really good capitalization and punctuation. She sited her sources very well.
Clean Water Problems - 3 views
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Only 61 percent of the people in sub-Saharan Africa have access to improved drinking water sources
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Only 61 percent of the people in sub-Saharan Africa have access to improved drinking water sources
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"780 million people still have no access to safe drinking water'. This stament proves the problem that many people are experiencing: having no safe water.
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This article shows that many people don't have clean water. We take clean water for granted when other people don't have really clean water.
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"Only 19 out of 50 countries in that region are on track to meet the target by 2015." This statement proves that the countries are off track and need to find safe water some way.
No Access to Clean Water - 2 views
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"Despite the fact that access to clean drinking water is the basic human right, around one billion people living in developing countries don't have access to it,". This should be changed because clean water is needed to survive.
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"striving to provide access to clean drinking waters even in the remote and far-flung rural areas." This statement proves that people are finding a solution to dirty water in every place.
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This article shows that people aren't getting clean water. Developing countries aren't getting water and people state that it is a violated human right.
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