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Brandi Burke

Team B argument project - 2 views

started by Brandi Burke on 13 Sep 13 no follow-up yet
  • Brandi Burke
     
    Just a quick note to all members of the group::

    Sent an email through the school site to you all a copy of the assignment that has been emailed to the teacher.Sorry if the email comes out too spaced or bloc-key but through the school site where you have peoples profile/email it does not give an attachment option like in Outlook.

    I hope you all are able to get the copy.If not just post your full sail email and we'll get you a copy.
Brandi Burke

The Argument (( rough draft)) - 16 views

  • Brandi Burke
     
    Team B - Refute the statement:

    "Technology (through television, texting, social networks posting, and the Internet), has
    contributed to an increase in literacy skills."

    Technology (through television, texting, social networks posting, & the internet), has become a massive contributor in the decline of our literacy skills. With more advances in technology every day, there is becoming less and less physical work to be done by students. Various gadgets coming out every year are now letting folks get away with not having to type much of a word before the gadget spells it out for you. Same for punctuation and grammar. People do not have to type much before the computer, iPhone, etc. starts completing their thought. Yet for students when it comes time for a test in class on a piece of paper, they cannot figure out how to spell certain words they wish to use on their test sheet. Many students have no clue as to when they should be using capital letters, proper punctuation, and even the use of words like "they are/they're" and even "you are/you're".Not to mention these gadgets do not help in handwriting skills either. Some students fall into that problem of you cannot understand what they just wrote down.
    Some experts have noticed in younger children, that they dart from one page to the next without fully reading all the information on the page. This is a very damaging way to read because it decreases our ability to comprehend what we just read. Other way experts believe the internet has an impact on our critical thinking abilities is that we use less reliable sources to learn anything new. Most of us usually just accept any article as thou it was the truth.

    Team B Folks:
    Jinnette Reyes Pantalone
    Brandi Burke
    Matthew Murren
    Jennifer Lynch
    Patrick Gladden
    Christopher Howe
    Mikail Zahir
    Lucas Cook
    Tevin Banks

    Links to support the argument statement:
    http://www.nytimes.com/2008/07/27/books/27reading.html?pagewanted=all&_r=1&
    http://m.theglobeandmail.com/technology/texting-twitter-contributing-to-students-poor-grammar-skills-profs-say/article4304193/?service=mobile
    http://www.mlive.com/living/jackson/index.ssf/2011/09/guest_column_texting_social_me.html


    ((so if this WAS the final argument project --- this is what it would look like with statement,article links, & student names))

    please make any adjustments - just a rough draft
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  • Brandi Burke
  • Brandi Burke
     
    Team B - Refute the statement:

    "Technology (through television, texting, social networks posting, and the Internet), has
    contributed to an increase in literacy skills."

    Technology (through television, texting, social networks posting, & the internet), has become a massive contributor in the decline of our literacy skills. With more advances in technology every day, there is becoming less and less physical work to be done by students. Various gadgets coming out every year are now letting folks get away with not having to type much of a word before the gadget spells it out for you. Same for punctuation and grammar. People do not have to type much before the computer, iPhone, etc. starts completing their thought. Yet for students when it comes time for a test in class on a piece of paper, they cannot figure out how to spell certain words they wish to use on their test sheet. Many students have no clue as to when they should be using capital letters, proper punctuation, and even the use of words like "they are/they're" and even "you are/you're".Not to mention these gadgets do not help in handwriting skills either. Some students fall into that problem of you cannot understand what they just wrote down.

    Some experts have noticed in younger children, that they dart from one page to the next without fully reading all the information on the page. This is a very damaging way to read because it decreases our ability to comprehend what we just read. Other way experts believe the internet has an impact on our critical thinking abilities is that we use less reliable sources to learn anything new. Most of us usually just accept any article as thou it was the truth.

    Team B Folks:
    Jinnette Reyes Pantalone
    Brandi Burke
    Matthew Murren
    Jennifer Lynch
    Patrick Gladden
    Christopher Howe
    Mikail Zahir
    Lucas Cook
    Tevin Banks

    https://groups.diigo.com/group/full-sail-team-b-eddies-class/content/texting-twitter-contributing-to-students-poor-grammar-skills-profs-say-the-globe-and-mail-10711309

    https://groups.diigo.com/group/full-sail-team-b-eddies-class/content/guest-column-texting-social-media-sites-causing-bad-habits-in-our-students-mlive-com-10716537

    https://groups.diigo.com/group/full-sail-team-b-eddies-class/content/the-future-of-reading-literacy-debate-online-r-u-really-reading-series-nytimes-com-10716877

    (still rough draft - statement/group names/links to the Diigo links in the group of articles used from their highlighted areas)
  • Brandi Burke
     
    https://groups.diigo.com/group/full-sail-team-b-eddies-class/content/texting-twitter-contributing-to-students-poor-grammar-skills-profs-say-the-globe-and-mail-10711309

    Little or no grammar teaching, cell phone texting, social networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter, are all being blamed for an increasingly unacceptable number of post-secondary students who can't write.For years there's been a flood of anecdotal complaints from professors about what they say is the wretched state of English grammar coming from some of their students. Now there seems to be some solid evidence.

    Even those with good marks out of Grade 12, so-called elite students, "still can't pass our simple test," she says.
    Poor grammar is the major reason students fail, says Barrett."If a student has problems with articles, prepositions, verb tenses, that's a problem."Some students in public schools are no longer being taught grammar, she believes."Are they (really) preparing students for university studies?"

    "There has been this general sense in the last two or three years that we are finding more students are struggling in terms of language proficiency," says Rummana Khan Hemani, the university's director of academic advising.

    http://m.theglobeandmail.com/technology/texting-twitter-contributing-to-students-poor-grammar-skills-profs-say/article4304193/?service=mobile
  • Brandi Burke
     
    https://groups.diigo.com/group/full-sail-team-b-eddies-class/content/guest-column-texting-social-media-sites-causing-bad-habits-in-our-students-mlive-com-10716537

    Texting and social networking sites don't require careful reading or editing. Those are skills expected of literate individuals.

    They also don't require writing in complete sentences. Twitter, for example, only allows 140 characters. Consequently, many students write in fragments and run-ons.

    This also has an effect on word choice. Typically, students use slang and abbreviations. Consequently, many students start using slang in formal writing because it's part of their everyday writing and speech.There also is a negative effect on punctuation, especially when texting. It ignores language and writing conventions. Many students have no idea when to use capital letters. They don't capitalize 'I.' They don't capitalize proper names. You're/your, there/their/they're, and its/it's become interchangeable. Punctuation is haphazard.Also, texting and social networking sites don't require practicing handwriting; therefore, many students can't write legibly. Every year, I am amazed by how few of my eighth-graders are able to read or write cursive. They struggle with their own signature.

    http://www.mlive.com/living/jackson/index.ssf/2011/09/guest_column_texting_social_me.html
  • Brandi Burke
     
    https://groups.diigo.com/group/full-sail-team-b-eddies-class/content/the-future-of-reading-literacy-debate-online-r-u-really-reading-series-nytimes-com-10716877

    Some traditionalists warn that digital reading is the intellectual equivalent of empty calories. Often, they argue, writers on the Internet employ a cryptic argot that vexes teachers and parents. Zigzagging through a cornucopia of words, pictures, video and sounds, they say, distracts more than strengthens readers. And many youths spend most of their time on the Internet playing games or sending instant messages, activities that involve minimal reading at best.

    According to Department of Education data cited in the report, just over a fifth of 17-year-olds said they read almost every day for fun in 2004, down from nearly a third in 1984. Nineteen percent of 17-year-olds said they never or hardly ever read for fun in 2004, up from 9 percent in 1984. (It was unclear whether they thought of what they did on the Internet as "reading.")

    The simplest argument for why children should read in their leisure time is that it makes them better readers. According to federal statistics, students who say they read for fun once a day score significantly higher on reading tests than those who say they never do.

    What we are losing in this country and presumably around the world is the sustained, focused, linear attention developed by reading," said Mr. Gioia of the N.E.A."What the Net seems to be doing is chipping away my capacity for concentration and contemplation," he wrote, confessing that he now found it difficult to read long books."Reading a book, and taking the time to ruminate and make inferences and engage the imaginational processing, is more cognitively enriching, without doubt, than the short little bits that you might get if you're into the 30-second digital mode,"

    To date, there have been few large-scale appraisals of Web skills. The Educational Testing Service, which administers the SAT, has developed a digital literacy test known as iSkills that requires students to solve informational problems by searching for answers on the Web. About 80 colleges and a handful of high schools have administered the test so far.

    But according to Stephen Denis, product manager at ETS, of the more than 20,000 students who have taken the iSkills test since 2006, only 39 percent of four-year college freshmen achieved a score that represented "core functional levels" in Internet literacy.

    http://www.nytimes.com/2008/07/27/books/27reading.html?pagewanted=all&_r=0
  • Brandi Burke
     
    Took the 3 articles that were posted in the Diigo group.In #4-6 posted that link from Diigo at the top, then followed by the highlighted parts from that articled copy/pasted in the middle, then at the bottom the link to the original article posting.

    Trying to get things moving for the statement presentation due.
Brandi Burke

Ideas for the argument - 15 views

  • Brandi Burke
     
    Going to start this topic.In here let's toss in some ideas to be put into the argument that will be turned in today.Then from the ideas can smash them together into one good argument.Going to see through the postings what I can pull from them.
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  • Brandi Burke
     
    From what Patrick G. posted in the group ------ "Literacy through technology promotes laziness to an extent.Texting,for example, has been turned into a language completely compiled of acronyms and abbreviation.Online video hosting sites have taken the place of learning through reading.I think it's important to teach our younger generations the importance of picking up a book.The basic fundamentals of education should still be high priority.Fun through learning can still be taught through technology but the foundation must be laid with basic literary skills, reading and writing."

    ((that could be used in the argument))
  • Brandi Burke
     
    From an article Jennifer L. posted in the group ----- "Reading for pleasure, which has declined among young people in recent decades, enhances thinking and engages the imagination in a way that visual media such as video games and television do not, Greenfield said."

    ((that can put into the argument))

    edited--

    another article she has posted ------ "Here are the facts. The Department of Education's National Adult Literacy survey of 1992 revealed that over 50% of American adults over the age of 16 were functionally illiterate. The tragic news is that the 2003 National Assessment of Adult Literacy reveals that the "average prose and document literacy did not differ significantly from 1992."

    ((could be used too))
  • Brandi Burke
     
    From an article Jinnette P. posted in the group ----- "Some traditionalists warn that digital reading is the intellectual equivalent of empty calories. Often, they argue, writers on the Internet employ a cryptic argot that vexes teachers and parents. Zigzagging through a cornucopia of words, pictures, video and sounds, they say, distracts more than strengthens readers. And many youths spend most of their time on the Internet playing games or sending instant messages, activities that involve minimal reading at best."

    ((part of the argument))
  • Brandi Burke
     
    From an article I had posted in the group ------ "Experts describe this habit of darting from page to page as "associative" thinking. They have especially noticed this habit in younger children, whom are comparably less focused on studying, reading, and writing then the age group was when measured in the past. This is damaging to reading ability because it decreases our ability to comprehend what we read.Another way researchers believe the internet has impacted our critical thinking abilities is that we now use less reliable sources to learn about new ideas. We often accept any article as fact. They found that students children's reading abilities now do less research before answering a question."

    ((possible use in the argument))
  • Brandi Burke
     
    From a article Mikail Z. posted in the group ----- "There also is a negative effect on punctuation, especially when texting. It ignores language and writing conventions. Many students have no idea when to use capital letters. They don't capitalize 'I.' They don't capitalize proper names. You're/your, there/their/they're, and its/it's become interchangeable. Punctuation is haphazard.Also, texting and social networking sites don't require practicing handwriting; therefore, many students can't write legibly. Every year, I am amazed by how few of my eighth-graders are able to read or write cursive. They struggle with their own signature."

    ((could be used in the argument))
  • Brandi Burke
     
    From an article Lucas C. posted in the group ------ " Instant messaging, or IM, is a technology which allows two
    individuals who are separated by any distance to engage in synchronous, written communication. Like a phone call, it takes place in a real-time environment; however, its mode of operation relies solely on the written word to transmit meaning, and many messagers choose to completely disregard standard writing conventions while they converse. Because of these unique abilities and characteristics, IM has gathered a following that worries many English teachers."

    ((could be put into the argument))
  • Brandi Burke
     
    I have gone through several articles various folks posted in the group.I have taken parts from some of these articles and posted them in this topic and from student and their article finding the information came from to go back and double check.Please look through them to see what all could be placed into the final argument to be sent off today.
  • Brandi Burke
     
    Definitely should have that in the argument.
  • Brandi Burke
     
    Going to work up a rough draft of the argument with the links below it supporting the statement.I will post it in another topic.At that point please feel free to make any adjustments to the statement.Again, it will be a rough draft.
Jinnette Reyes Pantalone

Picking - 9 views

  • Brandi Burke
     
    I vote you (Jinnette). You have done an awesome job creating the group, making sure we are all connected for the debate project, and Diigo site seems to like you during it's hiccup phase. 1 Vote - Jinnette
  • Brandi Burke
     
    Ok.Going to start a topic to get some ideas from everyone what should be put into the argument from what everyone has read.Then myself or another can email you the argument part so you can whip it up and send to Eddie.I'll be on/off here and there today.
Jinnette Reyes Pantalone

Argument topic - 21 views

  • Brandi Burke
     
    Yes I agree with the argument.The auto correct spells for you not letting the young mind learn the correct spelling on their own. Even for some adults too. Auto correct does it all for you so if you ever have to write out the word on a piece of paper, your brain halts because the piece of paper doesn't have auto correct.
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  • Brandi Burke
     
    At the bottom I had just added a link to one of my lists I had thrown a couple of articles in to help for the debate. https://www.diigo.com/list/brandiburke/Team+B/2lwachl29 . I double checked and it all says public. I know Diigo is having hiccups lately and could be the temporary reason why some items are not being able to be seen.Just a thought.
  • Brandi Burke
     
    It's ok. I didn't know it had to be approved. Never saw a "Approval by moderator" or anything of that sort listed anywhere. All good.
  • Brandi Burke
     
    The teacher will see that I had made a "List" and added the link to this group you created and it has the dates on it showing when I had made it/added links to it/and posting it to the group. It's all good. Even though it shows in the group individually you posting, it shows down the link I had posted of the couple links I had that I thought would be helpful to the group.Double the link posting never hurts.
Jinnette Reyes Pantalone

Hey ! - 14 views

  • Brandi Burke
     
    Your not the only one having some issues. The Diigo site for the past couple of hours has been a tad slow and not posting everything that is bookmarked/highlighted/sticky noted.
  • Brandi Burke
     
    I am still having trouble these few hours later.Images are not showing up. Still cannot bookmark or anything.I get that spinning timer look waiting to post but nothing happens.I'm going to see if they have a "Contact Us" link.

    **edited** I hope this post stays on here for ya'll to see since parts are not working at the moment. I sent off an email to Diigo to let them know of a couple of issues with logging in and the bookmarking and all.
Brandi Burke

Team B articles - 8 views

Debate literacy decline technology
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