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new kid when I happened to sit in front of Allen in Mrs. Rioux’s History class
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sky, a whit-hot circle burning into the deep turquoise of the midday sky,
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  Watch the repetition of here - "sky" is jarring the second time (as are most words).
  
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He drove on.
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  Excellent. I love the rhythm here. Ending a long paragraph with a short, abrupt sentence is a strong choice.
  
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Mr. Winkle
- Tex Tourais on 31 Aug 09
  
  Are you switching between his various names (Jonathan, Mr. Winkle, Jonathan Winkle) for a purpose or just for the sake of variety? Generally, you're going to want to stick with one naming device for your protagonist, unless you have a specific purpose (as in The Awakening when Chopin takes our girl from Mrs. Pontellier to Edna in order to symbolize her separation from her husband's ownership).
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Are you switching between his various names (Jonathan, Mr. Winkle, Jonathan Winkle) for a purpose or just for the sake of variety? Generally, you're going to want to stick with one naming device for your protagonist, unless you have a specific purpose (as in The Awakening when Chopin takes our girl from Mrs. Pontellier to Edna in order to symbolize her separation from her husband's ownership).</div>
  
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The sun was his enemy now, draining him dry like the well out back. ” I have nothing you want,” he thought, ” just leave me alone.”
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within my head
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Welcome to Senior Year
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