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earchie's blog - 0 views

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shared by Meg Guard on 31 Aug 09 - Cached
  • every year during Fat Tuesday, he went up to Virginia, where his best friend Peter and his family lived in order to escape the chaos
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      Meg Guard on 08 Nov 09
       
      This is confusing, I think some commas might help clear up the confusion
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kpulliamcollins's blog - 2 views

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shared by Meg Guard on 31 Aug 09 - Cached
  • I could hear the smile spreading across her face.
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 08 Nov 09
       
      this just struck me funny, i feel like you can't hear a smile
  • she didn’t even use chapstick, just licked her lips a lot. She licked her hand; her gelato was dripping.
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      Meg Guard on 08 Nov 09
       
      I like it!
  • She giggled.
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gkessler's blog · Just another Blogs.micds.org weblog - 0 views

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shared by Meg Guard on 31 Aug 09 - Cached
  • nurturing, shit-eating grin you’ve ever seen
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 02 Nov 09
       
      wait what? I don't think I have ever seen a nurturing, shit-eating grin...
  • the car ended up as a flying saucer with an identity crisis
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      Meg Guard on 02 Nov 09
       
      hahaha
  • who is definitely uninterested
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 02 Nov 09
       
      ouch haha
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jmudd's blog - 0 views

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shared by Meg Guard on 01 Sep 09 - Cached
  • are spread eagle
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 02 Nov 09
       
      I think spread eagle is with legs.. I am not sure though. EIther way the expression sounds funny here.
  • manor
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 02 Nov 09
       
      manner** a manor is like a house in the country
  • “Stop it guys, you start every morning with some senseless argument.  Just shut up and let’s figure out what we are going to do today”
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 02 Nov 09
       
      I wasn't sure who was saying this, so maybe if you added a tag "said blah blah blah" that would make it clearer
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  • smoothly
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 02 Nov 09
       
      good adjective
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Grant's blog - 1 views

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shared by Meg Guard on 01 Sep 09 - Cached
  • I picked up one with a particularly risque cover, and swiftly threw it into the pile before Cherry could get a look at it,
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      Meg Guard on 13 Oct 09
       
      I really like this line, I feel like it shows us what kind of person Lemmy is (he cares about his sister and what she is exposed to, etc.) without blatantly saying it (following the whole show not tell dealio).
  • It won’t work on anyone you’ll find in this kind of place
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 02 Nov 09
       
      ooh this place? are they on a train to the afterlife?? are they angels?
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liz gordon's blog - 1 views

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shared by Meg Guard on 31 Aug 09 - Cached
  • 1886
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 25 Sep 09
       
      I sure hope you mean "1986" haha...
  • Pop a second, a third, a fourth, a fifth, a sixth even.
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 25 Sep 09
       
      Holy moly... that seems like a lot... maybe stop at a fourth?? I don't know anything about oxycontin but I feel like you would definitely die if you took that many. Even the warning on the Advil box says you shouldn't exceed four.
  • Numb. My eyes shut, lead weights attached to my lids. Black. Darkness falls and I remember nothing more.
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 25 Sep 09
       
      I really like that you use fast, short sentences. I think the staccato rhythm conveys what the protagonist is feeling as the drug kicks in.
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rsila's blog - 0 views

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shared by Meg Guard on 31 Aug 09 - Cached
  • glossed
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      Meg Guard on 23 Sep 09
       
      I like this adjective, I think it fits nicely.
  • “Large white chocolate latte, please, Angela,” Maria, sniffling, said to Angela.
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 23 Sep 09
       
      This sentence just seemed unnecessarily repetitive.
  • fechada
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  • fechada
  • fechada
  • echada
  • f echada
  • f echada
  • f echada
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 23 Sep 09
       
      es fAchada!! pero me encanta el espanol!!
  • – genuinely.
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 02 Nov 09
       
      ooh interesante
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lmalik's blog - 1 views

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shared by Meg Guard on 01 Sep 09 - Cached
  • On his yead, clear as day, a black bandana wth a paisley border.
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      Meg Guard on 16 Sep 09
       
      How is Jeremy wearing the bandana if the police have it/he left it at Janie's house??
  • If children asked to pet her, he usually told them she bit and gave a rare smirk as they scuttled away.
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 08 Nov 09
       
      This is really funny and I think it tells us a lot about Mazhr
  • Not the kind of ridiculing chuckle he gave when he saw an entire family of five struggling to fit on a motorbike
    • Meg Guard
      Meg Guard on 08 Nov 09
       
      haha
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