I enjoyed working on this paper with my teammates and feel that we did well. However, I do agree that we needed a strong introduction, to balance our conclusion. I was glad that we added in section four. I felt it was an interesting and pertinent topic, and complemented our paper:)
Nicely written. Information is well-supported and documented. I liked the statement regarding instructional design being dictated to. I did not see Delicious resources, Wordle, or Introductory paragraph. Good job Group 6:)
Group 1: You provided strong support for each section, and your documentation was well-sustained. Your abstract and introduction were clear and concise, and gave way to a well-founded opening. One area that I would have liked to see expanded upon/more detail provided would have been with respect to the stakeholders involved in online learning. Great job:)
I feel that Group 5 provided strong details and support for the topics discussed. I, also, appreciated the links input in section II. This gave additional support to the conversation. I felt that the only issue, without naming which section, was in the area of proofreading. There were some grammatical and spelling errors. Otherwise, good job:)