Group items tagged

Filter: All | Bookmarks | Topics Simple Middle

The problem with a strong dollar - 0 views

articles.moneycentral.msn.com/...ruInvestorJournal20080912.aspx

appeals dollar economy inflation scott

shared by Cybil Scott on 12 Sep 08 - Cached

A strengthening dollar means U.S. goods and services become less desirable to foreigners. Foreign sales, particularly sales in emerging markets, are part of what buoyed U.S. companies' profits during the U.S. downturn.
- Cybil Scott on 12 Sep 08
  
  I believe this is an example of logos. The argument is based on the economy and what happens when we have a strong dollar vs. a weak one. The outcomes are known because of oil demand, foreign exchange, and other things. There are numbers, figures, and percentages included to strengthen the point. This is using logic to get an idea across.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">I believe this is an example of logos. The argument is based on the economy and what happens when we have a strong dollar vs. a weak one. The outcomes are known because of oil demand, foreign exchange, and other things. There are numbers, figures, and percentages included to strengthen the point. This is using logic to get an idea across.</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel

Natassia Watson - 0 views

docs.google.com/View

shared by Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08 - Cached

in seeing
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  this should be 'to see'
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">this should be 'to see'</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
“the War
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  'The' should be capitlized
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">'The' should be capitlized</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
to for
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  'to' should not be there
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">'to' should not be there</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
...24 more annotations...
and so
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  i think it would flow better if you took these words out and just started with 'throughout' as a new sentence
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">i think it would flow better if you took these words out and just started with 'throughout' as a new sentence</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
McCain,
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  comma should be before McCain not after
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">comma should be before McCain not after</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
McCain’s underlying purpose
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  Why do you call it underlying? I feel like that is kind of the whole point of his speech.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Why do you call it underlying? I feel like that is kind of the whole point of his speech.</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
Speech
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  doesn't need to be capitalized
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">doesn't need to be capitalized</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
With that said he goes on to explain the mounting cost of presence not just in dollars but the amount of live that have been lost since the start of the war.
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  This sentence is confusing.. it might be cleaer to say 'With that said he goes on to explain the mounting cost of our presnence in Iraq, not just in dollars, but in the amount of lives that have been lost since the start of this war.'
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">This sentence is confusing.. it might be cleaer to say 'With that said he goes on to explain the mounting cost of our presnence in Iraq, not just in dollars, but in the amount of lives that have been lost since the start of this war.'</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
therefore our
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  doesn't make sense
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">doesn't make sense</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
and so
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  I think it would flow better if you took these words out and started another sentence with 'He'
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">I think it would flow better if you took these words out and started another sentence with 'He'</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
statement
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  should be plural
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">should be plural</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
we continuing without and
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  might make more sense saying 'our continuing without an'
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">might make more sense saying 'our continuing without an'</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
but the also
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  doesn't make sense
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">doesn't make sense</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
used ethics
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  earlier you said he didn't directly discuss an ethical issues
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">earlier you said he didn't directly discuss an ethical issues</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
Videos
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  why is this here?
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">why is this here?</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
numerous and respected
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  i don't think you need the word 'and' here
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">i don't think you need the word 'and' here</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
, such
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  it would flow better if 'such' started a new sentence
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">it would flow better if 'such' started a new sentence</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
uses logos to justify his position on the war, he constantly made
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  you changed tense from 'uses' to 'made'
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">you changed tense from 'uses' to 'made'</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
officials also
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  should be 'officials who also'
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">should be 'officials who also'</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
whom republicans
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  i think it should be 'whom are republicans'
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">i think it should be 'whom are republicans'</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
that don’t support the war. 
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  this makes the sentence a little wordy and is not needed since you already said they 'share his view of a misguided war'. it is kind of repeating yourself
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">this makes the sentence a little wordy and is not needed since you already said they 'share his view of a misguided war'. it is kind of repeating yourself</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
but lack pathos
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  doesn't make sense
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">doesn't make sense</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
Such statements combined with other rhetoric effects do make this a somewhat appealing argument. 
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  this sentence contradicts the rest of the paragraph
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">this sentence contradicts the rest of the paragraph</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
McCain would result
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  might make more sense to say 'is what would result'
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">might make more sense to say 'is what would result'</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
“& intolerable violence. 
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  no end to this quotation
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">no end to this quotation</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
Obama was more successful in the visual portion due to logical transition and development of his ideas.  Obama’s use of the rhetorical techniques was more forceful and poignant, he spoke with more fervor and greater deal of certainty in his position and thus was able to deliver a better argument.
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  you kind of discuss new thoughts here.. you might want to add another paragraph after it that ties into your main idea more and closes the paper
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">you kind of discuss new thoughts here.. you might want to add another paragraph after it that ties into your main idea more and closes the paper</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  You used lots of quotes throughout your paper but never cited where they came from.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">You used lots of quotes throughout your paper but never cited where they came from.</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  You had very good details and awesome word choice! You also used the correct point of view throughout the paper and did a good job staying on topic.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">You had very good details and awesome word choice! You also used the correct point of view throughout the paper and did a good job staying on topic.</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
- Meghan Winn on 07 Nov 08
  
  Your opening is good but i'm not sure if the last paragraph is meant to be a closing since it discusses new topics. You might want to add another paragraph or make that one relate more to the rest of the paper.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Your opening is good but i'm not sure if the last paragraph is meant to be a closing since it discusses new topics. You might want to add another paragraph or make that one relate more to the rest of the paper.</div>
  
  ...
  
  Cancel
...

Cancel

1 - 2 of 2

Showing 20▼ items per page

Group items tagged

The problem with a strong dollar - 0 views

Natassia Watson - 0 views

Related searches