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Onondaga Nation - People of the Hills - 1 views

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- Anna Delapaz on 16 Oct 13
  
  Word Choice: Depression vs Recession Recession can be defined as a temporary economic decline. Depression is severe despondency and dejection. The word depression feels more human and more personal. By using this word, Lyons emphasizes how the people are the ones suffering when jobs are outsourced.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Word Choice: Depression vs Recession Recession can be defined as a temporary economic decline. Depression is severe despondency and dejection. The word depression feels more human and more personal. By using this word, Lyons emphasizes how the people are the ones suffering when jobs are outsourced. </div>
  
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Mindfulness Exercises For Everyday Life - 0 views

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- Anna Delapaz on 11 Oct 13
  
  Repetition of words having to do with what mindfulness can bring you. This emphasizes the usefulness of mindfulness and it's ability to bring clarity and focus into your life
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Repetition of words having to do with what mindfulness can bring you. This emphasizes the usefulness of mindfulness and it's ability to bring clarity and focus into your life</div>
  
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Easing Doctor Burnout With Mindfulness - NYTimes.com - 0 views

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  Repetition: Repeats words having to do with the feeling of stress and being overwhelmed. This emphasis helps the reader understand what it feels like to be in the doctors' shoes. It also helps illustrate how necessary mindfulness is for those in the health care field
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Repetition: Repeats words having to do with the feeling of stress and being overwhelmed. This emphasis helps the reader understand what it feels like to be in the doctors' shoes. It also helps illustrate how necessary mindfulness is for those in the health care field</div>
  
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upbeat
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more focused
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strengthen the relationship
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- Anna Delapaz on 11 Oct 13
  
  Repetition of words showing the positive effects mindfulness can have on an individual's ability to focus.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Repetition of words showing the positive effects mindfulness can have on an individual's ability to focus. </div>
  
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- Anna Delapaz on 11 Oct 13
  
  Binary: The idea that doctors are always on the go and the reality that they can't handle the stress of always working and always thinking. This leads to burnout.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Binary: The idea that doctors are always on the go and the reality that they can't handle the stress of always working and always thinking. This leads to burnout. </div>
  
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- Anna Delapaz on 11 Oct 13
  
  Gaps: The author addresses only doctors but implies this could be used for all health care professionals. Perhaps talking to someone else in the health industry who has experience with burn out would add more credibility
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Gaps: The author addresses only doctors but implies this could be used for all health care professionals. Perhaps talking to someone else in the health industry who has experience with burn out would add more credibility </div>
  
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Americans are fat, stressed, and unhealthy - 0 views

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- Anna Delapaz on 11 Oct 13
  
  Gaps: This article leaves out any ways to improve America's poor ranking. It also doesn't mention that countries like Switzerland are much wealthier than the U.S. and can provide better health care. The article fails to inform the readers why other countries are ranked higher than the U.S.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Gaps: This article leaves out any ways to improve America's poor ranking. It also doesn't mention that countries like Switzerland are much wealthier than the U.S. and can provide better health care. The article fails to inform the readers why other countries are ranked higher than the U.S.</div>
  
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non-communicable diseases
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obesity scale
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“business impact” of disease
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- Anna Delapaz on 11 Oct 13
  
  Repetition: Repeats words having to do with why the U.S. was ranked so low. This emphasizes the areas we could improve
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Repetition: Repeats words having to do with why the U.S. was ranked so low. This emphasizes the areas we could improve</div>
  
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So an hour on the treadmill could do a lot for the GDP. That, and wash your hands.
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- Anna Delapaz on 11 Oct 13
  
  Anomalie: These comments seem to be pertaining to the U.S. health and wellness but they feel random and are given little context.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Anomalie: These comments seem to be pertaining to the U.S. health and wellness but they feel random and are given little context. </div>
  
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nation gets good scores for education and opportunity. But the disappointing overall outcome
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- Anna Delapaz on 11 Oct 13
  
  Binaries: The U.S. is good but overall ranks poorly.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">Binaries: The U.S. is good but overall ranks poorly. </div>
  
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- Anna Delapaz on 11 Oct 13
  
  The author has an interesting premise about how the U.S. ranks poorly in many areas but fails to expand on that any further. Perhaps if this was written more at an angle about how to fix our ranking it would be more compelling.
  
  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner">The author has an interesting premise about how the U.S. ranks poorly in many areas but fails to expand on that any further. Perhaps if this was written more at an angle about how to fix our ranking it would be more compelling.</div>
  
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