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Paul Beaufait

Self-Assessment and the Process of ESL Writing (TESOL Connections - March 2013) - 0 views

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    Regarding revision, Sadek suggests, "One technique that can guide ESL learners while revising their draft is that of self-assessment. That is, ESL learners could use a set of criteria covering the different aspects of writing to revise their own writing" (¶3). She defines self-assessment, outline advantages, and provides sample forms as illustrations.
Paul Beaufait

SLWIS Newsletter - March 2011 - 0 views

  • several problems are inherent in machine scoring. First, though Ferris (2003) claimed that students will improve over time if they are given appropriate error correction and that students use teacher-generated feedback to revise things other than surface errors, students rarely use programs like MY Access! to revise anything other than surface errors (Warschauer & Grimes, 2008); paragraph elements, information structure, and register-specific stylistics are largely ignored. Second, although teachers can create their own prompts for use with the program (more than 900 prompts are built into MY Access! to which students can write and receive instantaneous feedback.), MY Access! will score only those prompts included in the program. Third, regarding essay length, in many cases, MY Access! seems to reward longer essays with higher scores; consequently, it appears that MY Access! assumes that length is a proxy for fluency.
  • Overall, students’ opinions regarding MY Access! were mixed; students found useful aspects as well as aspects they termed less helpful.
  • Some students found working with the program very helpful in discipline, encouraging multiple revision. Others liked working with the many tools provided, finding them very helpful in the revision process. On the other hand, some students, lacking basic computer skills, found the program stressful and unusable. Others were discouraged by the seeming overabundance of feedback; in some cases, writers found it overwhelming, so they tended to disregard it. Our most disheartening finding: When some of the students were unhappy with their scores, they found ways to raise them by simply inserting unrelated text to their essays.
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  • They appreciated the help MY Access! offered in finding grammar errors, but they were not always sure how to fix them. Further, the program offered no positive comments about what students were doing well, which could negatively impact student motivation. In addition, after working on a prompt once or twice, many became bored and wanted to switch to another prompt. Many of the student writers used MY Access! for surface editing only and rarely used it for revision. In general, students in this study did not use features in MY Access! (e.g. My Portfolio, My Editor), possibly because their teachers did not explicitly assign them.
  • Locally controlled assessment is important; when assessments are created from within, they are specific to one context―they are developed with a very specific group of students in mind, considering what those students have learned in their classes and what they are expected to be able to do as a result of what they have learned in that context. Standardized tools such as the many machine-grading programs available today cannot address this specificity.
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    "Though Crusan (2010), Ericsson and Haswell (2006), and Shermis and Burstein (2003) offered a more thorough treatment of machine scoring in general, in this article, I concentrate on one program―MY Access! (Vantage Learning, 2007)―briefly describing it and discussing a small study conducted in a graduate writing assessment seminar at a midsize Midwestern university in which graduate students examined second language writers' attitudes about using the program as a feedback and assessment tool for their writing in a sheltered ESL writing class" (¶2).
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Verbs | Explorations of Style - 0 views

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    Fourth of five key strategies for revising academic writing, moving from global to local revisions
Paul Beaufait

BBC - Skillswise Words - Putting sentences together to make compound sentences - 1 views

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    includes factsheet, games, quiz, and worksheet; suggests reviewing: Before you start ... Do you want to revise making simple sentences? Do you want to revise using commas?
Paul Beaufait

Paragraphs | Explorations of Style - 0 views

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    2nd of five post in a series about revising academic writing
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Subjects | Explorations of Style - 0 views

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    Fifth of five key strategies for revising academic writing
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Transitions | Explorations of Style - 0 views

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    Third of five key strategies for revising academic writing
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How To Moderate All Comments and Posts On Student Blogs | The Edublogger - 0 views

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    Explains blog setup with gmail+ addresses, and revising default comment moderation settings to implement post and comment supervision
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Online Collaborative Writing: How Blogs And Wikis Are Changing The Academic Publishing ... - 0 views

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    "Originally written by Janelle Ward for The Broker, and first published on August 5th, 2009 as Rewriting Research" (footnote [URL revised, PB, 2011.02.21]), this article covers the following outline:   Academic BloggingBlog Types and PurposesWho Are Academic BloggersBlogging RewardsCollaborative Writing and WikisPros and Cons of Using WikisWikis['] EffectivenessWeb 2.0, Web 3.0 and BeyondThe Growing Use of Online Tools
Paul Beaufait

Helping Students Develop Voice While Blogging - Work in Progress - Education Week Teacher - 0 views

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    "Revision isn't a suggestion, it's a necessity - sometimes writing the same thing three different ways or more offers perspective, this perspective provides choice to the writer later for what best suits the finished piece."
Paul Beaufait

Tutorial for Flash MP3 Player - 2 views

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    Explains how to adapt  a WordPress audio player plugiin to for use in web pages and Blogger posts
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    When students move on from KGU, will they want to remove or revise audio player script that they add to their blog templates?
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