Dozens Killed in Multi-Vehicle Crash in Peru - 0 views

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  #1 davidhanson on 24 Mar 15

   

  http://www.nytimes.com/2015/03/24/world/americas/dozens-killed-in-multi-vehicle-crash-in-peru.html?ref=world&_r=0
  
  While I prefer not to rip against anyone, I'm afraid to say that this article lacks proper structuring. Most of the paragraphs could've easily been combined together and plus there's not a lot of quoted sources. It's also kinda mono. Overall the topics great, but the quality is low.

   

  <div class="cArrow"> </div><div class="cContentInner"><a href="http://www.nytimes.com/2015/03/24/world/americas/dozens-killed-in-multi-vehicle-crash-in-peru.html?ref=world&_r=0" rel="nofollow" target="_blank">http://www.nytimes.com/2015/03/24/world/americas/dozens-killed-in-multi-vehicle-crash-in-peru.html?ref=world&_r=0</a> <br /> <br /> While I prefer not to rip against anyone, I'm afraid to say that this article lacks proper structuring. Most of the paragraphs could've easily been combined together and plus there's not a lot of quoted sources. It's also kinda mono. Overall the topics great, but the quality is low.</div>

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