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Lauren Goehner

Celebrity Cosmetic Surgery: Heidi Montag - Plastic Surgery Addiction - 0 views

  • What the heck is going on here?
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      The use of a rhetorical question combined with his informal language ("heck") develops his tone on the subject. It conveys his confusion, and a feeling of absurdity, almost more so than if he had simply said, "What?" or even "What the hell?".
  • Here's what I think about the ten procedures she's had done:
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      His straight forward manner set's up the rest of the post, and is echoed in his opinions. Short, concise, and to the point sentences can be found throughout this post.
  • unnecessary. It looked fine after the first one. This just creates more scar tissue which could cause problems down the line.
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      For each procedure, he gives a blunt, one word response, and then elaborates briefly. By doing so, he conveys his own voice and opinion, while demonstrating medical knowledge without the complex jargon and sounding too much like a doctor.The readers do not care to know more than what he says.
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  • looks like Cruella De Vil
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      A funny, and easy-to-imagine comparison.
  • Heidi had a very nice derriere before the surgery. She should leave well-enough alone. She risks it becoming lumpy and uneven.
    • Lauren Goehner
       
      Instead of saying butt, he chooses to say "derriere", which sounds more sarcastic. Again, he uses brief sentences and informal language ("lumpy" and "uneven"), enhancing the conversational feel. You can almost hear him standing, counting out each surgery on his fingers, and giving his respective opinion.
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