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Guadalupe Saenz

Citizens Crime Commission of New York City - Mass Shooting Incidents in America (1984-2... - 0 views

www.nycrimecommission.org/initiative1-shootings.php

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    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 16 Apr 13
       
      its going to talk about the illegal gun crime and all the mass shootings that have happen in America
  • Mass shootings are a unique feature of American life which have occurred consistently throughout history in every region of the country
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 16 Apr 13
       
      he says it like its normal in America for this to happen.
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  • by the use of large capacity ammunition magazines
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 16 Apr 13
       
      most incidents the killer use high capacity magazines which enable the shooter to shoot about 100 rounds.
  • Designed for military use to kill greater numbers of people more effectively
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 16 Apr 13
       
      how did the killers get hold of them if there for the military.
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      the government this not doing nothing about this magazines and something must be done to so less mass shootings happens.
  • The federal government needs to take action to protect all Americans by reinstating the ban on large capacity ammunition magazines.
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      the outcome for most of all the killers was suicide
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      Precis- Citizens Crime Commission of New York City's Article implies that in al the mass shootings the killers used high capacity ammunition. The author develops this idea sequentially by providing every mass shooting that has happens and talked about the gungs that were used. The author uses bold heading to draw attention the story's of all the mass shootings that have happen.
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      Precis continue- The author petitions a formal tone suggesting that audience must be more aware of the mass shootings that have been going on because you never know where the next one can be, we have to be ready at all times.
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      the main idea is how in mostly all of the mass shootings they have use high capacity magazines to kill everybody.
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Guadalupe Saenz

Mass shootings toll exceeds 900 in past seven years - 0 views

www.usatoday.com/...1937041

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  • The 934 deaths account for less than 1% of all gun-related homicides
  • The 934 deaths account for less than 1% of all gun-related homicides
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 16 Apr 13
       
      recent shootings that happen in the last 7 years.
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  • The 934 deaths account for less than 1% of all gun-related homicides
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 16 Apr 13
       
      most people that were killed were killed by somebody they knew.
  • and a majority of them were killed by people they knew
  • The 934 deaths account for less than 1% of all gun-related homicides
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 16 Apr 13
       
      only 1% out of all the 934 death were gun related homicides
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 16 Apr 13
       
      its true the public only pays attention when something bad happens.
  • "Mass shootings … are the tragedies that capture the public's attention
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 16 Apr 13
       
      every day people are killed by handguns by somebody they knew yet you never hear about like you do mass shootings.
  • But every day, 33 Americans are being killed, mostly with handguns and distressingly often, by a family member or intimate partner."
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      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      Precis - Fredreka Schouten, Meghan Hoyer and Paul Overberg article claims that in the past 7 years there has been more death due to mass shootings then ever before. The author develops this idea spatially by providing how the death total has increase in the last 7 years and it has not gone down yet. This article incorporates photographs to clarify what happens when the wrong people have guns. The author's urges a clam but serious tone so that the audience can recognize the dangers of mass shootings and why it should be stop.
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      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      the main idea of this article is how they are trying to stop gun violence and why it is important to stop it.
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      now they want to do something about the gun violence after something bad happens to little kids when all along this has been happening for a long time
  • attempt to address gun violence in the wake
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      before it was more public to buy a gun now they want it to be more private and have an extending background checks to buy the gun something they didn't do as good before.
  • attempt to address gun violence in the wake
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      mass killings I being more common now
  • The goal is to reach private gun sales not covered by the current system, which applies only to federally licensed dealers.
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      is there a lot of mass killing in Florida?
  • Although they account for just a minuscule share of all homicides, mass killings occur about once every two weeks. More than three quarters involve a gun
  • include cases from states such as Florida
  • officials found signs of mental illness, he said.
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      are they really all mentally ill, or do they just clam they are
    • Guadalupe Saenz
      Guadalupe Saenz on 18 Apr 13
       
      murderers know what they are doing their not really sick.
  • Mass murderers won't take you up on treatment
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