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How to raise $20,000 in a single night - The Globe and Mail - 0 views

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  • How to raise $20,000 in a single night
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      Ralph I on 05 Dec 10
       
      Title
  • “Next time, let’s just do a bake sale.”
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      Ralph I on 05 Dec 10
       
      Narration
  • They both scurried to their purses: “I’ll take one!” I was elated. Here you go – ticket 001 and ticket 002. I texted the others. Guess what? Only 498 to go!
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      Ralph I on 05 Dec 10
       
      Effect
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  • “Let’s see what silent-auction items I can get donated,”
  • One day at the end of June I came into work with my head hung low. I had all 25 of my allotted tickets tucked into a pocket of my wallet. My co-workers asked, “Jen, how are your fundraiser ticket sales going?”
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      Ralph I on 05 Dec 10
       
      Cause
  • With a tear almost rolling down my cheek, I replied, “We haven’t sold any.”
  • Who wouldn’t want to help this cause?
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      Ralph I on 05 Dec 10
       
      Pathos - Appealing to the emotional side of the potential participants. this also adds to the validation of the story
  • I couldn’t wait to get back to my “normal” life
  • “I would have had you over for dinner but my apartment looks like a liquor store at the moment.”
  • “We couldn’t sleep either.”
  • “So, how was the party?”
  • “Let’s get some sleep and revisit that idea in six months,” I said. Deal.
  • Ralph I on 05 Dec 10
     
    The green highlighting demonstrates the narrative strategy to involve the reader.
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    Rhetorical Analysis
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